Bheegi_Palken 0 Posted September 4, 2005 (edited) Kasam Tumhari Jab Tumse Judaa Hoi Bohat Royii Main Bohat Ghumzadaa Hoi Bey-Dilii Se Torein Maine Chooriyan Har Singaar Se Main Youn Khafa Hoi Dil May Rang Aapki Chahat Ka Tha HaathoN May Kisi Aur Kii Heena Hoi Bohat Kien Minnaten Baabul Ki Maine Manzoor Merii Faryaad Koi Naa Hoi Gunehgaar HooN , Ab Aur Kya Kahoon.? Dil Dukhaya Aapka Mujhse Khata Hoi Jo Guzrii Hai Aap Pe Janti Hoon MaiN Lakin Aap Ne Bhi Tu Dekhoo Mere Saath Kya Kiya ?? Kaaho Na Mujhko Bewafaa Tum Kabhii Socho To KyuN MaiN Bewafaa Hoi ?? Edited September 4, 2005 by Bheegi_Palken Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
iftikhar 0 Posted September 4, 2005 Kasam Tumhari Jab Tumse Judaa Hoi Bohat Royii Main Bohat Ghumzadaa Hoi Salaam Bheegi_Palken kea baat ha bohat achi ha poem ak baat kahun ager kohi kissi ko chur da ur uss pher roona buzdili huti ha Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Choudhry 0 Posted September 5, 2005 (edited) Wao Palken....... Wao, its pretty sad one but a nice lesson too thou Edited September 10, 2005 by Choudhry Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Choudhry 0 Posted September 6, 2005 us se pochna tu haii kia sila wafao`N ka yehii haii din aur raat us ko sochte rehna khud ko khoojte rehna us se pochna tu haii kia yehii mohabbat haii us k hii khwabo`N se apnii hii duao`N ko khud hii bey-aseR kerna khud hii bey-samaR kerna us se pochna tu haii zindagii yehii haii kia us ka saath ho aur bus darmiyaN koii na ho dil ho vahmo`N k beech raaz-daaN koii na ho us se pochna tu haii us k baad bhii kaise din ye kion nikalta haii raat kion ye dhaltii haii umeR bhii tu dhaltii haii sans kaise chaltii haii us se pochna tu haii khud bhii sochna tu haii... Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
RAbI ROSE 0 Posted September 6, 2005 Hmm Miss Beeghe Palken aap ne to such mai meri pakon ko gheela ker diya apni is Nazm se ita deeply nahi likhhte aur agher likhen to khyaaal rakhen yaha kayee aisa dil b rakhhte hain jo asie kuch perte he un kaifiyat main aajae hain Allah ka shuerk ahi mere saat h aise koi baat to nahi hue but its really a ............ Sorry me have nit enough words ab8 it well achi poem hia lakin main aap ke next achi se post ka wait b kero ghee :) Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
munnibhai 0 Posted September 6, 2005 suntay thay log laaye gaye hain jahan main hum to teri talash main dunyaa main aa gaye Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Kiran 2 Posted September 6, 2005 wow choudry it's one of my fav ghazal us se pochna tu haii us k baad bhii kaise din ye kion nikalta haii raat kion ye dhaltii haii umeR bhii tu dhaltii haii sans kaise chaltii haii us se pochna tu haii khud bhii sochna tu haii... Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Bheegi_Palken 0 Posted September 9, 2005 (edited) Kaaho Na Mujhko Bewafaa Tum Kabhii Socho To KyuN MaiN Bewafaa Hoi ??[/b] 153809[/snapback] thanks for liking the poem :) Edited September 9, 2005 by Bheegi_Palken Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Bheegi_Palken 0 Posted September 9, 2005 Wao Palken....... Wao, its pretty sad one but a nice listen too thou 153875[/snapback] Thanks :) Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Bheegi_Palken 0 Posted September 9, 2005 us se pochna tu haiikia sila wafao`N ka yehii haii din aur raat us ko sochte rehna khud ko khoojte rehna us se pochna tu haii kia yehii mohabbat haii us k hii khwabo`N se apnii hii duao`N ko khud hii bey-aseR kerna khud hii bey-samaR kerna us se pochna tu haii zindagii yehii haii kia us ka saath ho aur bus darmiyaN koii na ho dil ho vahmo`N k beech raaz-daaN koii na ho us se pochna tu haii us k baad bhii kaise din ye kion nikalta haii raat kion ye dhaltii haii umeR bhii tu dhaltii haii sans kaise chaltii haii us se pochna tu haii khud bhii sochna tu haii... 153963[/snapback] very nice ghazal & thx for sharing :) Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Bheegi_Palken 0 Posted September 9, 2005 Hmm Miss Beeghe Palken aap ne to such mai meri pakon ko gheela ker diya apni is Nazm se ita deeply nahi likhhte aur agher likhen to khyaaal rakhen yaha kayee aisa dil b rakhhte hain jo asie kuch perte he un kaifiyat main aajae hain Allah ka shuerk ahi mere saat h aise koi baat to nahi hue but its really a ............Sorry me have nit enough words ab8 it well achi poem hia lakin main aap ke next achi se post ka wait b kero ghee :) 153974[/snapback] thank for liking the post.. :) Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Bheegi_Palken 0 Posted September 9, 2005 suntay thay log laaye gaye hain jahan mainhum to teri talash main dunyaa main aa gaye 153980[/snapback] ummm nice :) Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Choudhry 0 Posted September 10, 2005 wow choudry it's one of my fav ghazal us se pochna tu haii us k baad bhii kaise din ye kion nikalta haii raat kion ye dhaltii haii umeR bhii tu dhaltii haii sans kaise chaltii haii us se pochna tu haii khud bhii sochna tu haii... 154008[/snapback] Well Kiran! i like this gazal too... coz it doesn't say i will die without you thanks :) 154245[/snapback] anytime palken Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
junaidrauf 0 Posted September 13, 2005 Dekha jo uss ka Uss Dast-e-Hinai Qareeb se Ahsas Goonjti hoi Shanhai ban gaya Bin mangy Mill gay meri Ankhon ko rat Jaggy Mein jab se Ek Chand ka Shaidai Ban gaya Wow Really i don't have words bohat achi hai Simply Best Very Nice its Very Touchy Keep it Up! Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
