Deep eyez 0 Posted December 27, 2005 (edited) December ki thandi shaam may....... Jab sardi may itni shiddat hay Kay........ Maahol pay veeraani see chaee hay Mout ki manind............ Yakh-bastagee her janib phaylee hay Phir be najanay kioon??? In sard hawao may.......... Wo khunki....... Wo bay-hissee..... Wo chubhan nahe hay... Jo us"anjaan shakhs"ki bay-rukhee may thee! Edited December 27, 2005 by Deep eyez Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Talaash 0 Posted December 27, 2005 nice poetry deep eyez...keep it up :) Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Chandani 0 Posted December 27, 2005 (edited) nice deeeeepooo mention nottttt:D Edited December 27, 2005 by Chandani Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Deep eyez 0 Posted December 28, 2005 deeepoo????? any wayz thanx chandaneeeeeeeeeeee :P Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
kurios 0 Posted December 28, 2005 waise main ne yeh shairi kyun nahin parhi acha challo waise ab main ne perh li hai bohot aha likha hai deep eyez aap ne aur haan ik baat bateen ke yeh aap ki apni shairi hai na.?????? waise december pata nahin kyun itna udas hota hai ?? Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
DUA_ALI 0 Posted December 28, 2005 es liya keun ka woh saal ka end hota hai keun ka us ka time khatum ho rha hota hai Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Rainbow 333 Posted December 28, 2005 BARAY ROMANTIC BANDAY HO TUSI Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Laiba Khan 0 Posted December 28, 2005 DEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEPO APPPPPPPPPPPPP AUR SHAIREEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE OTHERWISE APP TU SERF PARNA PASSAND KARTI HOOO WOOW KIA COLLECTION HAI JANAB KI .....KEEP IT UP DUA APPI APP NY THEEK KAHA KAY WO SAL KA END HOTA HAI ES LIYA UDAS LAGTA HAI....LAKIN YAHA UK MAIN TU BILKUL BI UDAS NAHI LAGTA ENGLISH PEOPLE KI CHRISTMAS JO HOTI HAI MAJID BAHI UDASI KA AIK AUR REASIN BI HAI BARISH KAY WEATHER MAIN APP KI UDASI BAHER ATI HAI YA PHIR ZIYADA FEEL HOTI HAI JABI DECEMBER UDAS LAGTA HAI Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Deep eyez 0 Posted December 29, 2005 aray majid sir na maro deevar say,jo thora bohat dimag ha wo be kharaab hojaay ga :D or ~THANX A LOT~ shairi pasand karnay kay liay :) and yes yeh meri apni zaati shairi ha, Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Deep eyez 0 Posted December 29, 2005 Dua>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>poetry pay no comments :( :( Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Deep eyez 0 Posted December 29, 2005 Lar aib bus aap ka asar hogya ha, bae don't worry may koe romantic shoomantic nahee hoon,bus.............. :D wo may nay hee kah ha na kay............. janay kioon karnay lagee hoon shairi... mizaaj pehlay to itnaa aashiqana na tha Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Deep eyez 0 Posted December 29, 2005 yes laibaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa may or shairi may bayshak parhna pasand karti hoon per.................. or bhe bohaaaaaaaaaaat kuch pasand karti hoon, :D n............ kabhe kabhe poetry bhe kar lay ti hoon :) jis ka namoona aap kay samnay mojood ha. or may pehlay bhe apni khud ki poetry post kar chuki hoon,per wo ab nxt page per chali gae ha :( any wayz THANX 4 appericiation :flower: Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Deep eyez 0 Posted December 29, 2005 Thanx kiran :flower: Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Laiba Khan 0 Posted December 31, 2005 bari chupi rustum nekli deep :angry2: Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Deep eyez 0 Posted January 3, 2006 chupi rustam???????? :o bus jee kabhe garoor nahe kia Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Laiba Khan 0 Posted January 3, 2006 ohhh i c ap kia karoo rahi hoo? Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Deep eyez 0 Posted January 23, 2006 (edited) ap kia karoo rahi hoo? may kuch b nhe karoo rahee bus poetry hee karoo rhe hoon :P "Aankhoon say behta khoon simmat gaya hay shairoon may" "Ab to kaagaz qallam hee meri zindagi ka sahara hain..........." (its also my own wordz) :) Edited January 23, 2006 by Deep eyez Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Aryaan 0 Posted January 23, 2006 Bohat khoob DeepEyes... Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
