Anoushy 0 Posted January 20, 2006 hellooooooo guys and guls Iss mehfil mainn Her Roz ik Naya MISRAH aap kay saamnay paish kiya jaye ga. Yeh aik Udhoora Misrah hoga. Jis ka Misra-e-Oola ya Misra-e-Sani aap ko Talash kerna hoga. Yehi nahin balkeh iss kay saath saath aap ko Iss diyey gaye misray ko Tarrah Misrah Gerdaantay huaye iss per Taba'a Aazmayee bhi kerni ho gi yani ... Aap kay Khayal mainn agar aap shayer hainn tou aap Diyey gaye Misray say Shair Kaisay Mukammal kertay. AAK KA MISRAH "Bohat Shore suntay thay Pehloo mainn Dil ka" Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
vertosis_ather 0 Posted January 20, 2006 najanay kisne ab ye chup si lagadi.... :P kaisa??!!! Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Deep eyez 0 Posted January 20, 2006 "Bohat Shore suntay thay Pehloo mainn Dil ka" "Uos kay aanay say kuch thumm sa gaya hay..." ab yeh shair mera hogya hay bae :P may nay isay complete jo kia ha :angel: Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
vertosis_ather 0 Posted January 20, 2006 hahahaah agar sirf complete karne ki baat hai tou complete tou maine pehle kiya hai... ab acha ya bura....main kya karun? Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Anoushy 0 Posted January 20, 2006 well excellent efforts guyz!!!!!!!!!!! Chalainn ya layein next 1 "Abhi tou aayeengay bohat Jigar Aazmanay ko" Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Anoushy 0 Posted January 20, 2006 hahahaah agar sirf complete karne ki baat hai tou complete tou maine pehle kiya hai... ab acha ya bura....main kya karun? 168486[/snapback] aer uper aur paoo nechgy karyein well her koi complete kar sakta hai haan deep jee app kay misry say main zara zara mutfiq hoooo aur mazak ki nazar say ather app ka bi nish hai ab next 1 complete karyein dekhty hain kess ka zada acha hota hai Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Deep eyez 0 Posted January 21, 2006 "Abhi tou aayeengy bohat Jigar Aazmanay ko" "Tum kioon abe say hee dil haar baythay ho" Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Deep eyez 0 Posted January 21, 2006 or main thanx karna to bhoooooooooool hee gae :P THANxxxxxxxxxxxx 4 meray pehlay misray say zara zara mutfiq honay k liay :D hope ;) nxt say bhe zra zra mutafiq hojaay ge Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
vertosis_ather 0 Posted January 21, 2006 well dees eyez... abhi mera andar ka shayar nahin jaga hai... agar jaag gaya na tou aap tou gaye.... :D Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Anoushy 0 Posted January 21, 2006 vertosis_ather Posted Today, 06:59 PM  well dees eyez... abhi mera andar ka shayar nahin jaga hai... agar jaag gaya na tou aap tou gaye.... main tu ya soch soch kar pareshan ho rahi ho kay pehly hi app kay halat bary bury hain aur ager wo jag gaya tu sab shaire hazrat apna ser peet kar reh jyein gy :P Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Anoushy 0 Posted January 21, 2006 (edited) "Abhi tou aayeengy bohat Jigar Aazmanay ko""Tum kioon abe say hee dil haar baythay ho" 168562[/snapback] not badddddddddddddd nice aur ather where urs? Edited January 21, 2006 by Anoushy Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Kiran 2 Posted January 21, 2006 hmm nice topic here is 1 from my side Badle hain woh to iss ka geela kis se kijiye waiting 4 right part Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Anoushy 0 Posted January 21, 2006 Badle hain woh to iss ka geela kis se kijiye kuch na kuch hijer main toote tau sahi jee farmyein kessa hai Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Anoushy 0 Posted January 21, 2006 agla misrah hazry khidmat hai Zaher peene ki to aadat thi zamaane waalo Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Deep eyez 0 Posted January 21, 2006 Zaher peenaay kee to aadat thi zamaanay waalo Dil tootnay k dukh say b waqif hogaay hain ab kesa hay???? Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Anoushy 0 Posted January 21, 2006 wowwwwwwww excellent very nishhhhhhhhhhhhhh acha next misrah app do hum bi kismat azmye karain Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Deep eyez 0 Posted January 21, 2006 :) ok.... here it is................tan tnaaaaaaaaaaa "Chupa saktay hain na hee dikha saktay hain logo ko" Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Anoushy 0 Posted January 21, 2006 Chupa saktay hain na hee dikha saktay hain logo ko tumhare likhe khaton ko mai kahan jalaun kahan dafnau :P Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Deep eyez 0 Posted January 22, 2006 hmmmm................ ;) its so so...actually but nice try :P kuch funny :D funny nhe hogya???? Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Kiran 2 Posted January 22, 2006 nahi anoushy actually it was Badle hain woh to iss ka geela kis se kijiye Pehle se khush mizaj hum bhi nahi rahe Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Anoushy 0 Posted January 22, 2006 hmmmmm kiran nish 111 hyeeeeeeee deeps uss time mera mood hi funny funny naughty naughty sa tha :P Chupa saktay hain na hee dikha saktay hain logo ko chut itni khehri khaye hai ishq ki Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Deep eyez 0 Posted January 23, 2006 aray kiran aap game ko samjhee nhee yeh game kuch is tarha ha k humay asal shair kay hath pao tor kay usay nya look dayna ha ooooopsssss :P yeh main kia dehshat-naak misaal day rhee hoon mera matlab tha k humay asal shair ko nae look dyni h.......us ki nxt line apnay mind :angel: say produce kar kay, hope aap samjh gaee honge Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Deep eyez 0 Posted January 23, 2006 hmmm.........nice anu :) but agar yeh Chupa saktay hain na hee dikha saktay hain logo kochut itni khehri khaye hai ishq ki aisay ho>>> "Chupa saktay hain na hee dikha saktay hain logo ko" "Yeh choot jo khae hay us say pyaar kar kay.............." but aap wala b acha ha :flower: ab nxt line kahan ha????? Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
vertosis_ather 0 Posted January 24, 2006 well..... ap log zara meri shayr ko tou complete karein.... phir pata chalay ga k kaun kitne pani main hai... "Kuch Jane Pehchane Se Ajnabi Ho Tum..." come on!!! Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Anoushy 0 Posted January 24, 2006 (edited) well.....ap log zara meri shayr ko tou complete karein.... phir pata chalay ga k kaun kitne pani main hai... "Kuch Jane Pehchane Se Ajnabi Ho Tum..." come on!!! 169282[/snapback] Kuch Jane Pehchane Se Ajnabi Ho Tum kessi ki ankho main basty hain un ankho ko bi par na saky tum :D heyyyyyyyyyyy deeps tum kery bary nekalti ho yar :( aur tum kiran app ko kio shout kar rahi ho yar aik hi kiran hai suraj ki do char hotiyen tu phier tha:D Edited January 24, 2006 by Anoushy Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
