Deep eyez 0 Posted February 2, 2006 Farwary(februry)ki us dhundhali tareek raat may.. Chaltay huay tanha in khamosh rahoo per... Mujhay ik shaks shiddat say yaad aaya hay... Jisay main nay toot kay chaha tha Jisay meray dil ki her dharkan nay pukara tha.. Jisay meri aankhon nay her pul dhoonda tha.. Jiskay peyaar may.. Main nay bikhar kay b shikwa nahee kia tha.... ik sakoo(n) tha kay... Meri chahat ka mehwar wohee ha... Per janay kioon...? Taqdeer nay hee usay.... Meri qismat na honay dia. Janay kioon...? Main usay Chah kar bhe na paa saki... Pukaar kar bhe na bulla saki... Dhoond kar bhe na apna saki... Bikhar kar bhe na mna saki... Ab to bus her pul laboon pay ik sawaal hay...... Janay kioon... Janay kioon... Janay kioon...??? Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
iftikhar 0 Posted February 2, 2006 wah wah Deep eyez bohat achi ha poem Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
shadow_cat 0 Posted February 2, 2006 wow kia baat hia janab...kia poem hai... Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Aryaan 0 Posted February 2, 2006 Good One Deep Eyes... :) Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Anoushy 0 Posted February 2, 2006 wah kia bat hai deeps waqi bohat deep poem hai Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Deep eyez 0 Posted February 2, 2006 ohhhh itna quik response :o mujhay to umeed hee nahee the ThaNxxxxxxxxxx a Lottttttttttttt :flower: ifti bhai shadow cat(a new member)very good to see u in my topic n WELCOME :flower: Zehra Aryaan bro n our sweet annu :P thanxxxx a lott once again :flower: Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Chandani 0 Posted February 2, 2006 wat a wonderful collection deep keep it up Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
the_salman 0 Posted February 3, 2006 har lehza tere pao ki aahat sunai de tu lakh saamne n ho, phir bhi dikhai de. aa is hayate dard ko mil kar guzar de ya is tarah bichar, ki zamaana duhai de. tera khayal hi aya n ho kahin ek roshni se aankh se dil tak dikhai de. milne ki tujhse fir n tammanna kare ye dil itne khulus se mujhe daage judai de. dekhen to kais lo bhi diye ki lage he sadi sochen to gul ki shaakh bhi jalti dikhai de Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Deep eyez 0 Posted February 3, 2006 wat a wonderful collection deepkeep it up 170754[/snapback] Thanxxx chandani jeeeeee :flower: n dear yeh main nay khood likhe ha, Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Deep eyez 0 Posted February 3, 2006 har lehza tere pao ki aahat sunai detu lakh saamne n ho, phir bhi dikhai de. aa is hayate dard ko mil kar guzar de ya is tarah bichar, ki zamaana duhai de. tera khayal hi aya n ho kahin ek roshni se aankh se dil tak dikhai de. milne ki tujhse fir n tammanna kare ye dil itne khulus se mujhe daage judai de. dekhen to kais lo bhi diye ki lage he sadi sochen to gul ki shaakh bhi jalti dikhai de 170773[/snapback] nice sharing salman per meri poetry pay no comments Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
vertosis_ather 0 Posted February 3, 2006 bohat khoob deepo....!!!! Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
the_salman 0 Posted February 3, 2006 deep eyez aapki poetry laajawab he . hum to yu hi kabhi kabhi tukbandi kar lete he.kabhi copy paste to kabhi khud hi likh lete he. :) keep it up Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Deep eyez 0 Posted February 3, 2006 bohat khoob deepo....!!!! 170801[/snapback] Thanxxxx a loooooot toasted :flower: Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Deep eyez 0 Posted February 3, 2006 (edited) deep eyez aapki poetry laajawab he . hum to yu hi kabhi kabhi tukbandi kar lete he.kabhi copy paste to kabhi khud hi likh lete he. :) keep it up 170803[/snapback] :) :) :) Thanxxx a lot tareef k liay main to mzaq kar rhe the Edited February 3, 2006 by Deep eyez Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Anoushy 0 Posted February 3, 2006 ohhhhour sweet annu :P 170722[/snapback] annu ko namkeen hi rehny do Mujhy diabetes nahi karwana :angry2: Jab tumhein yeh yaqeen ho jaye ke main tumhein kitna chahta hoon Tumse kitni mohabbat karta hoon To usi din tum laut aana Tum mujhe apna muntazir paao gi Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Anoushy 0 Posted February 3, 2006 har lehza tere pao ki aahat sunai detu lakh saamne n ho, phir bhi dikhai de. aa is hayate dard ko mil kar guzar de ya is tarah bichar, ki zamaana duhai de. tera khayal hi aya n ho kahin ek roshni se aankh se dil tak dikhai de. milne ki tujhse fir n tammanna kare ye dil itne khulus se mujhe daage judai de. dekhen to kais lo bhi diye ki lage he sadi sochen to gul ki shaakh bhi jalti dikhai de 170773[/snapback] wow very niceeeeeeee kia hi batt hai qasooom kia hi bat hai well ghuma phira kay bat wahi hai.... kay ... kia hi bat hai :D Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Deep eyez 0 Posted February 3, 2006 annu ko namkeen hi rehny do Mujhy diabetes nahi karwana annoooooooooooooooo :angry2: :angry2: :angry2: tum kisi bhe haal main satisfy nhe hote???? Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Anoushy 0 Posted February 3, 2006 annu ko namkeen hi rehny doMujhy diabetes nahi karwana annoooooooooooooooo :angry2:Â :angry2:Â :angry2: tum kisi bhe haal main satisfy nhe hote???? 170861[/snapback] plzzzzzzzzz ankho ko bahir nahir hi rehny do zada deep bi na karo kay ankhein nazar hi na aye Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
the_salman 0 Posted February 4, 2006 (edited) "wow very niceeeeeeee kia hi batt hai qasooom kia hi bat hai well ghuma phira kay bat wahi hai.... kay ... kia hi bat hai " WELL BAAT BOHOT GEHRI HE TUM NAHI SAMJHOGI........ANOUSHY MUJHE DIL ME KUCH KUCH HONE LAGA HE ,KISI KI WAJAH SE AUR TUM JANTI HO WO KON HE Edited February 4, 2006 by the_salman Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Anoushy 0 Posted February 4, 2006 "wow very niceeeeeeee kia hi batt haiqasooom kia hi bat hai well ghuma phira kay bat wahi hai.... kay ... kia hi bat hai " WELL BAAT BOHOT GEHRI HE TUM NAHI SAMJHOGI........ANOUSHY MUJHE DIL ME KUCH KUCH HONE LAGA HE ,KISI KI WAJAH SE AUR TUM JANTI HO WO KON HE 171001[/snapback] ya bi bhala pochny wali bat hai zahir hai heart main blood pump hota hai blood say hi khuch na khuch hota ho ga plzzzzzzz jaldi say kessi heart especialist say contect karoo mujhy tu heart attack kay sign lag rahy hain :dontsad: Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
the_salman 0 Posted February 4, 2006 AAP HI BATA DIJIYE AGAR KOI DI KI DOCTOR AAPKE NAZAR ME HO TO... Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Anoushy 0 Posted February 4, 2006 batany ki kia zaroorat hai ... meri 7 years old lil sister apni doll kay heart ka bohat achi tarha say operation kar leti hai .... app us say operation karwa sakty hain :D freeeeeeeee me Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
the_salman 0 Posted February 4, 2006 AISA OPERATION TO ME BHI 8 ,10 KA EK SAATH KAR SAKTA HU........ KABHI AZMA KAR DEKH LENA........ Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Anoushy 0 Posted February 4, 2006 mera heart proper tareqy say work kar raha hai.. aur ager app kar sakty hain tu app apna nahi kar sakty acha chalyein main operation kar deti hooo but aik gar bar hai Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
