msalman 0 Posted April 19, 2006 Bachpan say hain suntay aaye Koye yaad agar aata hay Aati hay Hichki Lekin ye sab jhoot hay Sara sar jhoot Ab lagta hay mujhe ko Yon hota to phir Tumahri Hichki to Band kabhi hona hi nahin thi Mere Jan ! Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
REEM 0 Posted April 19, 2006 WOWOWOW!! AWESOME! very nice and very true thought mr.msalman. :flower: Do keep sharing. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Sahir 0 Posted April 19, 2006 SALMAN DOST BUHUT HI ACHE LAGE HAIN MUJHE YEH ALFAZ PATA HE KIO KIO K 2 DIN SE MUJHE HICHKI LAGI HOI THI OR MAIN NE YEH ALFAZ KESI KO KAHE THE BY GOD SAME ALFAZ THAY KEEP SHARING SALMAN DOST Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
msalman 0 Posted April 20, 2006 Walekum Asslam ! ISAY KEHTAY HAIN SAHIR BRO. K "DIL KO DIL SAY RAH HOTI HAY" AAP K JAZBAT KI TARJUMANI IN LINES K ZARYE MAIN NAY KAR DI. SAHIR DOST BUHUT THANKS AAP KO PASAND AAYE, AB IN ALFAZ KI QADR-O-QEEMAT AUR BHI BARAH GAYE HAY. AAP KOYE APNA BEST/ALL TIME FAVOURITE SHAIR SUNAEN. THANKS FOR YOUR COMPLIMENTS Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
jehan shah 0 Posted April 20, 2006 msalman, bohat achi hay.haan yahi sunte aaye hain.k hichki aaye to koi yaad karta hay.pata nahi sach hay ya jhoot hay.waise koi yeh bhi keh gaya hay. KISI KI AKHIRI HICHKI KISI KI DIL LAGI HOGI... Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
msalman 0 Posted April 21, 2006 Walekum Asslam ! Bohat thx shah jee :P & Thx Miss Jee :D Miss Jee aap kya kehti hain is baray main k Hicki aanay k matlab kisi ka yaad karna hay? Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Sahir 0 Posted April 21, 2006 SALMAN DOST JEE BUHUT BUHUT SHUKRYA AAP KA YEH POEM SHARE KERNE K LYE OR SAMAN TUM NE KAHA K MAIN APNA KOI FAVOURITE SHAIR SUNAOO TU BRO ZAROOR SUNA DETA HOO AAP KO ONE OF MY FAVOURITE IS CHAND KALYAN NISHAT KI CHUN KER HUM SADYOON MEH-WE-YAAS REHTE HAIN TUM SE MILLNA KHUSHI KI BAAT SAHI TUM SE MILL KER UDAS REHTE HAIN SHAH JEE SHAYED AAP NE SAHI KAHA MAGER MAIN TU YEH SHAIR KAHOO GA AAP K IS MISRE K BADAL MAIN MOUT KI AAKHRI HICHKI KO ZARA GHOOR SE SUN ZINDAGI KA KHOLASA ISI AAWAZ MAIN HE Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
msalman 0 Posted April 22, 2006 Very Nice Sahir One of my Favourite Shair IS NA MUKAMMAL HAY TERAY HUSUN KI TOUSEEF ABHI TAK QALAM SARAY TOOT GAYE UNGLIAN TOTNAY WALI HAIN Sahir agar is "Favourite Shair" per topic post kiya jaye to CY community members kafi acchi poetry share kar saktay hain. Your suggestion/opinion please? Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Sahir 0 Posted April 23, 2006 BHAI TOPIC SHARE KERNA HOO TU POETRY K LEHAZ SE KERNA K SAB POETRY MAIN JAWAB DAIN BAS MAIN TU ITNA HI KEH SAKTA HOO AAP K IS SHAIR K LYE BHAI MAIN TU SIRF ITNA KAHOO GA K JO MERE ZABT KA SHIRAZA MUNTASHIR KER DE TERE HUSN KO ABHI WOH AADA NAHIN AAYI Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Miss_Jee 0 Posted April 23, 2006 (edited) Assalm o Alikum, Msalman I Belive key agar koi yaad karey (sachey dil sey :P ) tu hicki atti hai :D Edited April 23, 2006 by Miss_Jee Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
msalman 0 Posted April 25, 2006 Walikum Asslam ! Miss jee i agree with you, lekin is poem ka kya kiya jaye? Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Sahir 0 Posted April 25, 2006 MISS JEE SORRY MAIN AAP KI IS BAAT SE ITEFAQ NAHIN KERTA KIO K AGER ESA HOO TU AADHI SE ZYADA DUNYA HICKYAN HI LETI RAHE :D Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
