sensetive 0 Posted September 15, 2003 ASALAM-O-ALIKUM, UMEED HAI KE APP SAB KHARIYAT SE HUN GAY , AJ APKAY HUZOOR APNI NAI NAZM PEESH KAR RAHAY HAIN UMEED KARTAY HAI KE APKO PASAND AYE GI!:) :D .. AJ BHI HUM AKAILAY HAIN:!: BARSOON PEHLAY IK KHAWAB HUM NAY DEKHA THA, USSI KHAWAB KE ZAIRAY ASAR AKSAR YE KAHA KARTAY THAY, AJ HUM HAIN AUR HUMARAY SAATHIN HAIN, HUM HAIN DUKH AUR KHUSHIAN HAIN, MAGAR KIA MALOOM THA KE, KHALISH IK RHE JAYGE BARSOON KE LIYAY, ZINDOON MEIN SE HAIN KE MURDON MEIN SE HAIN, BAS YAAD HAI TO FAQT ITNA KE, AJ BHI HUM AKAILAY HAIN. (:) HOPE U GUYZ WILL LIKE IT) Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Kiran 2 Posted September 15, 2003 nice efforts.... :) Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
junaidrauf 0 Posted September 15, 2003 Nice Stuff Keep it up Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
jaan 0 Posted September 15, 2003 sensetive ji its lovely.bohut khoob. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
sensetive 0 Posted September 15, 2003 ASALAM-O-ALIKUM, THANX FOR YOUR WARM APPRECIATION! Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
sensetive 0 Posted September 16, 2003 THANX NADAN FOR THE WARM APPRECIATION! Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
NaDaN 0 Posted September 17, 2003 You Guys R Always Welcome! Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
sensetive 0 Posted September 18, 2003 SALAM, THANX ANYWAY! Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
coolest 0 Posted September 26, 2003 NICE SENSETIVE.AND TRUE MANN Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
umair.zm 0 Posted September 26, 2003 hey sensetive ...dat was really nice poetry...well keep it up.. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
sensetive 0 Posted September 29, 2003 HEY! COOLEST THANX BUDDY ! BARI JALDI MERI POEM PARHI TUM NE. BY THE WAY THANK YOU UMAIR FOR LIKING IT! Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
SLLeepyism 0 Posted October 11, 2003 The great 1 think that B) its good Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
umair.zm 0 Posted October 12, 2003 sensetive achie cheezain wesey bhie der se dikhteen hian ;) ok :) cheer up Mita dayna... "Sarak k kinaray... Darakhtoon k yay dortay say... Main pechay choray ja raha hoon.. Ufaq kay us paar.... Paharon kay daman main simat-ta yay soraj.. Mujhay apnay paas bulata hay.. Brish k baad... Mitti ki bheni khushboo.... Phool per bethi titleee... Meri diary main ik sokha gulab... or angan main khili chambayleee... Main bohat door choor aya hoon... Ab nahen loat sakoon ga.. Shayad kabhi nahen..... Kabhi yaad aon tum koo... to bhegay takiyey per apni ugleeoon say.. Mera naam likh ker... Mita denaa.... Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
SLLeepyism 0 Posted October 13, 2003 ab ma kia kaho bhai yahi kahoonga nice Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
SLLeepyism 0 Posted October 13, 2003 muhabbato ma ya izhaar ka bahanay tha magar ya kum tha,charaag aur bhi jalanay tha humay hi rakha gaya kis lia nishanay par hamaray pass bhala koan sa khazanay tha ya tum na yaad dilaya to yaad aay hay warna hum ko ya ahsaan bhool janay tha zubaan sa harfa sadakut phissal gaya tha zara phir is k baad ma tha aur taazianay tha mukabilla tha mara moaj moaj sa mahdi ka panio pa likjay nakhsh mitanay tha Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
SLLeepyism 0 Posted October 13, 2003 buhut mushkil ha har chahray sa dil ka raaz parh lana jo gahray loag hotay hay wo pahchanay nahi jatay Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
umair.zm 0 Posted October 22, 2003 "MERY MEHBOOB MERY PIYAR SEY INKAR NA KER NAZAR CHORA KEY IS DIL KO BEKARAR NA KER MYN JO BYTHA HOON TERI RAH PEY TERI KHATIR TU KISI AUR KEY AANEY KA INTAZAR NA KER Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
SLLeepyism 0 Posted October 24, 2003 ab chhalakate hue saagar nahii.n dekhe jaate taubaa ke baad ye ma.nzar nahii.n dekhe jaate mast kar ke mujhe, auro.n ko lagaa muu.N saaqii ye karam hosh me.n rah kar nahii.n dekhe jaate saath har ek ko is raah me.n chalanaa hogaa ishq me.n rahazaan-o-rahabaar nahii.n dekhe jaate ham ne dekhaa hai zamaane kaa badalanaa lekin un ke badale hue tevar nahii.n dekhe jaate;; ;; Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
KHUSHI 0 Posted October 25, 2003 ASALAM-O-ALIKUM, UMEED HAI KE APP SAB KHARIYAT SE HUN GAY , AJ APKAY HUZOOR APNI NAI NAZM PEESH KAR RAHAY HAIN UMEED KARTAY HAI KE APKO PASAND AYE GI!:) :D .. AJ BHI HUM AKAILAY HAIN:!: BARSOON PEHLAY IK KHAWAB HUM NAY DEKHA THA, USSI KHAWAB KE ZAIRAY ASAR AKSAR YE KAHA KARTAY THAY, AJ HUM HAIN AUR HUMARAY SAATHIN HAIN, HUM HAIN DUKH AUR KHUSHIAN HAIN, MAGAR KIA MALOOM THA KE, KHALISH IK RHE JAYGE BARSOON KE LIYAY, ZINDOON MEIN SE HAIN KE MURDON MEIN SE HAIN, BAS YAAD HAI TO FAQT ITNA KE, AJ BHI HUM AKAILAY HAIN. (:) HOPE U GUYZ WILL LIKE IT) AOA, WOW NICE MR.SENSETIVE U R REALLY VERY SENSETIVE WHT A DEEP THINKING U HAVE ITS SIMPLY MARVELLOUS! ~!~!~!~"KHUSHI"~!~!~!~! Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
R@DhEy 0 Posted October 25, 2003 hmmm u all r going very smooth hmm keep it up all u r intersted in poetry , Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
umair.zm 0 Posted October 26, 2003 KUCHH LOG BADAL GAYE HAI "Is raat ke.. tanhaeeyo ke >Sab rang badal gaye hai >Chand nikla hai waise hi >Andhere badal gaye hai >Jinke bharose thi khusiya >Wo badal thahar gaye hai >Manzile to ab bhi wo hi hai >Kuchh raste badal gaye hai >Jinpe kiya tha bharosa hamne >Wo dost bichhad gaye hai >Dekhe the kabhi jo hamne >Wo khwab badal gaye hai >Jo bane the kabhi hamsafar >Aaj wo hi mukar gaye hai >Is tute hue dil ke sare.. >jajbaat badal gaye hai >Na badle kabhi ham >Na badle hamare khayalat >Bas rona hai yahi...... >KUCHH LOG BADAL GAYE HAI Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
