coolest 0 Posted September 21, 2003 :) Salam , hope you will enjoy this poem of mine.:P TERI YAAD ! TERI YAD AKSAR MUJHE ATI HAI, PAL PAL MUJHE SATATI HAI, YEH KAISE BEICHANI HAI, KAISE BADNASEEBI HAI, TUJHE DEKH KAR ANKHON KE, SARAY BAND TOT JATAY HAIN, SARAY ZABT BHOOL JATAY HAIN, JAB JAB TASVEER DEKHTAY HAI TERI, TUJHE ZINDA DEKH NA CHAHTE HAIN, BAS KHENA CHAHTE HAIN TO , FAQT ITNA KE, TERI YAAD BOHAT ATI HAI. ENJOY IT:!: ;) :( :o ................. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
NaDaN 0 Posted September 22, 2003 oh Nive Collest!! Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
coolest 0 Posted September 23, 2003 SALAM, THANX NADAN FOR THE APPRECIATION! Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
mishi 0 Posted September 23, 2003 good post by the way how's yadd Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
umair.zm 0 Posted September 23, 2003 cooolest ur poetry was cool but dear y were u crying yar....hota hia:d.......ab main kuch farmata hoon.... ZINDAGI MERI ... "zindagi meri bund kitaab hey jis k khaali verk, kerrahey hain intizaar, k koi to likh jaaey in main apna sawal, koi to le jaaey in se apna jawab. muntazir hain ye kisi apney k, kisi sapney k, jo bher jaey in main khushi k pal, jo lejaaey in se saarey khuwab ok bye tc all ALLAH HAFIZ Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
sensetive 0 Posted September 25, 2003 salam, nice coolest.keep it up. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
sensetive 0 Posted September 25, 2003 SALAM, NICE TRY MY DEAR :P. WAISAY AGA TUM ASLEE MEIN RO RAHAY HO TO BATADO MEIN ROMAL E KAR AJATA HUN ABHI KE ABHI :P (JUST KIDING). KEEP IT UP!AISE HI POEMS LIKHTYA RAHO MAGAR ITI UDASS NA LIKHO MERI TARHA ACHAY BACHOON KI ARHA ACHI ACHI POEMS LIKHA KARO:!: . BHOOL JOA UN CHEEZON KO JO ZAKHMON KO YAAD DELATEIN HAIN . YADEIN WO RAKHO JO TUMHARAY JEENAIN KE KAAM AA SAKEIN. OKAY! NOE GOT TO GO, THANX AGAIN FOR SHARING SACHA LOVELY POEM, ENJOY HERE, HAVE A GOOD DAY, BYE, WHO CAN IT BE, ITS ONLY, "SENSETIVE".:!: Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
umair.zm 0 Posted September 25, 2003 yar sensetive waqayee too bara sensetive hia....yahan to bas coolest ne shiaree kie hia is ka matlab yeh nahien k woh sach main ro raha hia:p.... Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
coolest 0 Posted September 26, 2003 thanx but no thanx Mr umair.zm(i dont mind)he is my best frind thts why i am asking him tht! Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
umair.zm 0 Posted September 26, 2003 ya i know u both r good friends...i have read ur post in make new friend corner where u write about ur friendship well..i was juss enjoying wid u gusss:)...ab kuch arz hia.... }{uM Tu}{ D0n0 "raah e wafa pe saath chalain gay hum tum dono her gham ko aik saath sahain gay hum tum dono ger kantay bhi aaye raahon main hamari in kanton ko phool karain gay hum tum dono gham bhi bohot se aain gay is zindgi main hanstay hanstay seh jaain gay hum tum dono ger khuda ne judaai likh di apni qismat main milnay ki feryaad karain gay hum tum dono zindgi ki bhool bhulayyon main ger kho bhi jaain phir se ik din aan milain gay hum tum dono hazar baatain karain gay log hamari mohabbat per sab logon ko pagal keh dain gay hum tum dono jab dunia bhool jaaye gi mohabbat ka matlab kia hai mohabbat batla dain gay hum tum dono ishq main is dunia se begaanay ho ker aasmaan ko chu jaain gay hum tum dono yaad hai us ka wo kaandhay pe sar rakh ker kehna saath jiyain gay saath marain gay hum tum dono ok bye tc all ALLAH HAFIZ Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
umair.zm 0 Posted September 27, 2003 thanx coooooooooooool:) Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
umair.zm 0 Posted September 28, 2003 ma pleasure nadan :) Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
amish 0 Posted September 28, 2003 shairi to bohat acvhi hai . Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
umair.zm 0 Posted September 28, 2003 thanx amish bhaie:) Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
malikinside 0 Posted September 30, 2003 "Bass Itna Kehna hai” "A Kawish By Shamoon Malik" niceeyes81@hotmail.com< www.malikinside.cjb.net > Mujhe bass itna kehna hai, kabhi main yaad aoon to Kabhi tanha raatain, tumhai satayen to Kabhi titli par na pilay to, aur jugnu lot jaye to Kabhi jab dil bhar jaye, aur Koi sun bhi na paye to Kabhi sab dost saathi bhi tum se jo rooth jayen to Kabhi jab khud se lartay lartay thak jao to Kabhi chahte huwe bhi akele roo na pao to Apni aankhon ko band kerkay mujhe awaz dena tum Phir mere tasawwur se jo chahay baatain keh dena Mere kandhe per sir rakh ker tum jitna chahe ro lena apni sari siskiyan aur gum mujhey day kar tum apni duniya main loat jana liken bas ithna kehna hai Ke jab bhi dukh ya khusyoon main Humain dil se pukaro ge Humain tum apni darkano say bhi pass pao gay Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
umair.zm 0 Posted October 1, 2003 malik bhaie har jagha yehi same post na karo yar:)okchange it every where ok:y: Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
coolest 0 Posted October 5, 2003 NICE POST MR. MAILK Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
SLLeepyism 0 Posted October 7, 2003 dubbay ma dubba dubbay ma kake mary sahaly lakho ma aik Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
sensetive 0 Posted October 8, 2003 WHOSE UR SAHALY? Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
umair.zm 0 Posted October 8, 2003 sleepism yeh larki ka sher kaha hia kya tum ne? Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
SLLeepyism 0 Posted October 8, 2003 accha ab larko walay shair kahoonga "door sa dakha anday obal rahay tha pass ja k dakha gunjay ochul rahay tha ab theek hay? Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
