umair.zm 0 Posted October 13, 2003 bhaieee gunjey uchal rahey the to too kyoon yahan uchal raha hia Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
SLLeepyism 0 Posted October 13, 2003 ma tumhay bata raha tha na ka aasay kar k ochal rahay tha ..:P Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
rythm 0 Posted October 13, 2003 coolest ---> very nice poem.. apki apni hai na? :flower: 4 u umair.zm---> apki poems bhi bohat nice hain :flower: for you malikinside---> urs was also good :flower: for u aur Sleepyism ---> apki to kia hi baat hai.. ap to CHHAA gaye ho :flower: hehehe Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
rythm 0 Posted October 14, 2003 thx:flower: ur welcome :flower: Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
SLLeepyism 0 Posted October 14, 2003 thx for a bunch of flower:flower: Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
umair.zm 0 Posted October 16, 2003 thanx rythem :) ~~~~~KÖÏ TÖ HÖTÄ~~~~~ "koi to hota ? Main jis kay dil ki kitab banta Main jis ki chahat ka khawab banta Main hijar mosam ki lambi raaton main yaad Ban kar azaab banta Koi to hota? Jo meri khwaish main uth kar raaton ko khoob rota Dukhon ki chadar lapait kar hajoom duniya say door hota Main rooth jaata manata mujh ko kay chahe mera kasoor hota Koi to hota? Jo mujh ko dil ka karar kehta Ragoo ka apni fishar kehta Udaas mosam main tazgi ki biyar ban kar Jo meri bahoon ko arzoo ka diyar kehta Koi to hota? Dua say apni jo dukh bhi meray samait leta Woh iss jahan say ghamon ka meray hisab leta Woh sari duniya ki rafaqaton kay tamam rishtay Koi to hota? Main jis kay itna kareeb hota Na paas koi rakeeb hota Main tanha uss ka habbib hota Yeh silsila bhi ajeeb hota Koi to hota? UMAIR Koi to hota? Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
SLLeepyism 0 Posted October 16, 2003 :yes: yaar mazah aagay zabardast and i like your post ex cellent Main hijar mosam ki lambi raaton main yaad Ban kar azaab banta shabash Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
sanober qazi 0 Posted October 16, 2003 wah wah umir bohta khoub Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
SLLeepyism 0 Posted October 18, 2003 sanober g nice magar ma na kaha tha aap sa always smell your own cookies waisay ya bhi ma pahlay post kar chuka hu aap na adhoora post kia hay well i love the poetry of wasi sha and hope to listen some nice poetry of shah Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
umair.zm 0 Posted October 18, 2003 nice post sano :) aur sleepism poetry ke uper naam nahien likha hua tha k sirf too hie usey post karey gha :P ab jo bhie karey is se hamain kya ...we have to juss appriciate eachother stuff ok :) tub sai tum sai pyaar kia hai "jub dunya mein hum nai kadum rakha tub sai tum sai pyar kia hai jub kali bun kai niklay tub sai tum sai pyar kia hai jub hum kanwal bun kai khilay tub sai tum sai pyar kia hai jub hum jawani mein nahaye tub sai tum sai pyar kia hai jub baharon mein bheegay tub sai tum sai pyar kia hai jub beechar kai tardpay tub sai tum sai pyar kia hai ab to shayad yaad nahi kai kub sai tum sai pyar kia hai ab sleepism bol too ne pehley post kie hia :P Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
neesha 0 Posted October 19, 2003 hmmmmm nice!!!!!!!! Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
