R@DhEy 0 Posted November 8, 2003 AGAZ main kiyaa hai ikhtatam tum ker doooo jab chahoo mere jazboon koo be naam tum ker doo baat agar zarff kee hoo tu yunn ker looo tum jeet jayoo ,aur haar mere naam ker doo meri zidagee key gulaab ,meri muskurahate key kanwal le lo apnee gham aur aansoo mere naam ker doo sahil dekh ker kis sooch main per gayee tum agyee bahree jayoo aur mujhee superdee mooj ker doo saakht hai khateen manzil hai duoor joo hoo manzoor tu apna saath mere naam ker doo sirf mere naam ................. i hopr key u like it Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
umair.zm 0 Posted November 8, 2003 radhey dat was really nice stuff yar ;) Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
samra 0 Posted November 8, 2003 gr8 radhay ik shayr mari taraf say "mumkina fayslon main ik hijr ka faisla bhi diya hum nay to aik baat ki,us nay kamal kar diya" howz taht? Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Nazish 0 Posted November 9, 2003 ASsalamu Alaikum wow Radhay good poem :) very nice Samra nice sheir :) Apni yaad key khushbo mujh ko daan ker do Aur apnay dil mein Aanay do Yaa Meri Jhooli Bhar do Yaa mujh ko Mar janay do :) love yaz allz Allah Hafiz Naz Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
umair.zm 0 Posted November 9, 2003 nice stuff guyss nazish gr8 :) Anjana musafir "Betha tha neem ki chaaoun main ek shaam Ek pari aayee aur kaha kay aarzoo kiya hai Kaha kay aankh num hai dil jall raha hai Bas! ek meethi si khushbo-e-Hina hai Kehti hai `MUSAFIR` yeh khushbo kiya hai Kaha kay pagli! sirf ek khayal hai bas Masoom lafzoon main chupi ek tasveer ayaan hai Poochti hai Musafir! yeh jadoo kiya hai Kaha kay Har Nazar na aanay waali Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Nazish 0 Posted November 9, 2003 Assalamu Alaikum thankx again umair :) and ur is so cute, it's sooooooooo pure :) Ik darya hai socho ka ik nadi hai yadoo key mujhay wehshato kay pani say beghair bheegay nikalna hai ik sadyo key msafat hai mujhay laho lahaan jism key thakan ko bhool ker Naye manzilo key talaash mein bhatakna hai kuch nai wadiyo key talaash mein saat samandar paar chalna hai Kya pata phir kya bhool jaoo mein Mujh ko kis jaga per rukna hai Bohat lamba safar hai, rastay hai ajnabi dar hai kay bhatak na jaoo mein kahi Aub tum ko aik kaam karna hai is safar mein meiray saath chalna hai ya phir sooch lo mera intezaar karna hai. Allah Hafiz love yaz allz Naz Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
R@DhEy 0 Posted November 9, 2003 hmmm apun ka bhi hai umair bus ...tun apun kee poem kee tareef kee apun bhoout khoosh huwaa .hey tere kooo tnx bolnee ka apun .. tnx u all r samra ,naz,arrsi,for liking my poem.tnx once again ..... babp bolee tuu kiyaa kiyaa jhakaas entery marii lee bhi mazaa aagayaa qasam see tu ....to thoraa hatee key aaiy laaaa ......wel naz ur poem and shair is alsoo niceee hmmm chaloo jaldi see sab bhathoo car main main aapp sab koooo sea view layee chaltaa hoon .... Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
umair.zm 0 Posted November 10, 2003 nazish ma pleasure :).....aur radhey bherooo seaview too hie jaa apun nahien ja rela hia ...wahan oil ka kuch locha hua hia ....kham o kha tabiyat pani kharab ho jaye gha... chal ab yahan aya hoon to aik poetry pesh karita hoon ;) Aye mohabbat tere anjaam pe rona aaya..!! "Aye mohabbat tere anjaam pe rona aaya, Jaane kyun aaj tere naam pe rona aaya.. Yun to har shaam ummeedon me guzar jaati thi, Aaj kuch baat hai, jo shaam pe rona aaya.. Kabhi taqdir ka maatam, kabhi duniya ka gila, Manzil-e-ishq me har gaam pe rona aaya... Jab hua zikr zamaane me mohabbat ka Mujhko apne dil-e-bekaam pe rona aaya..... Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
R@DhEy 0 Posted November 10, 2003 umair behroo kiya jhakass see poem layaa tu hmm dada mazza aagyaa ...keep it upppp apun bhi tere liyee ek jhakass item liyaa market main lee be sune.... apney ahsaas see choo key mujheesandal ker dooo main sadiyoon see aadhoraa hoon mukammal ker dooo na tumhee hoosh raheee aur na mujhee hoosh rahee is qader toot key chahoo mujhee pagal ker dooo tum hathilee koo mere pyar kee mehndi see ranguo apni aankhoon main mere naam ka kaajal ker dooo us key saayee main mere khayoob dhakke uthee gayee mere charee pee mehktaa huwaa aanchal ker dooo maslaa hoon tu nighaheen na choorayoo mujhee seee apni chahat ,apni tawajaa see mujhee halee ker dooo dhoop he dhoop hoon main toot key bersoo mujhee per is qader bersoo meri rooh main jale thall ker dooooo ba bye fook's Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
umair.zm 0 Posted November 11, 2003 theen tarah kay dost "dunya mai theen tarah kay dost hotey hain ek woh dost jo serf app kay bat cheet ki had tak dost hotey hain en ko app ki problems say kio sarokaar nahi hota aur na hi woh app ka sath deney kay liye tayaar hotey hain 2 dosry qesam kay dost woh hotey hain jo app ka sath dena ka wada kertey hain laken dermiyaan mai app ko tanha choor deytey hain aur trsree qesam kay dost woh hotey hain jo sari zindagi app ka sath denay ka wada kertey hain aur martey dam tak app ka sath bhi deytey hain yehi asal mai app kay sachey dost hotey hain aur aisay dost bohut nayaab hotey hain bohut qematey hain bohut mushkil say miltey hain aur jin ko mil jaye woh bohut khush qesmat hotey hain. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
NaDaN 0 Posted November 12, 2003 mm wow nice words Umair..!! and Nazish ur peom was ..WOW really good! Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Nazish 0 Posted November 12, 2003 Assalamu alaikum Thankx :flower: terii ummiid teraa i.ntazaar jab se hai na shab ko din se shikaayat na din ko shab se hai kisii kaa dard ho karate hai.n tere naam raqam gilaa hai jo bhii kisii se terii sabab se hai huaa hai jab se dil-e-naasabuur beqaabuu kalaam tujhase nazar ko ba.Dii adab se hai agar sharar hai to bha.Dake, jo phuul hai to khile tarah tarah kii talab tere rang-e-lab se hai kahaa.N gaye shab-e-furqat ke jaaganevaale sitaaraa-e-sahar ham-kalaam kab se hai Tata love yaz allz Naz Allah Hafiz Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
umair.zm 0 Posted November 20, 2003 nice poetry nazish :) .... thanx kiran :).... ab main kuch arz karita hoon umeed hia u guyss like dat ;) mujhe tum se mohabbet hai "chand ko sitoron se or mujhe tum se mohabbet hai phoolon ko baharon se or mujhe tum se mohabbat hai mefil main jo milna nighahen jhukalena koi samajh na pai ke mujhe tum se mohabbat hai ab tere hijr main bus ek kaam hai asman takna tum sitaron pe likh dena mujhe tum se mohabbat hai hamain ehsas hai tum ko bhi ham se pyaar hai lekin yeh mere roohbarooh kehna mujhe tum se mohabbat hai Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
