rukh 25 Posted November 21, 2003 BOHAT HEE MUDAT KAI BAD KAL JUB KITAB-E-MAZI KO MAINAI KHOLA BOHAT SAI CHEHRAI NAZER MAIN UTRAI BOHAT SAI NAMOON PEY DIL PASEEJA AIK AISA SAFHA BHI US MAIN AYA LIKHA HOA THA JO AANSOON SAI KAI JIS KA UNWAN "HUM SAFFER "" THA JO SAFHA SUB SAI HEE MUTABER THA KUCH OR AANSOO PHIR IS PEY TAPPKAI PHIR IS SAI AGAI MAIN PERH NA PAYA KITAB-E-MAZI KO BAND KER KAI TUMHAREE YADOON MAIN KHO GIYA MAIN AGER TU MILTA TO KAISA HOTA INHEE KHIYALOON MAIN SOO GIYA MAIN Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
NaDaN 0 Posted November 21, 2003 hey wow Rukh very Nice!!.. is Kitab may mujhay b kahen likh lo..!! achi Yadoon may..!! Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Shabo 0 Posted November 22, 2003 Very nice Rukh... Yaadein.... yeh yaadein kisi dil o janam k chalay janey k baad yaad athi hain Sx Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
rukh 25 Posted November 22, 2003 nadan > maini app sai kaha tha na aik dafa ...main loggon ko kabhi nahi bholtee.. .app ka koiasi bhool saktee hoon SHABo> u r ight ... pata nahi is poem ko perh ker main khud rona shroo ho jatee hoon .. i dont know y ..per bohat aggresive hay yeh hai na ? Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Shabo 0 Posted November 22, 2003 It's a very touching poem rukh. I try to put myself in his situation tho bohot dukh hota hai :( I guess shairi ka yehi to kamal hai... na chahtey huay bhi dil thak pahonch jati hai ;) Sx Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
rukh 25 Posted November 22, 2003 haan yeh to hay shabo .... :) Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
NaDaN 0 Posted November 22, 2003 hey Rukh.. dunya ka sab say kamzor lamha wo hota hay jab app rotay ho or sab say skoon wala lamha b ronay ka hota hay mager kabhi kabhi asa lagta hay kay ager kuch na ho saka tu hum ro tu saktay he hain na!! is liya ronay ko hamesha last option may rakhna cahiya.. zindagee may tu her dafa kuch na kuch asa a jata hay kay roi bina banta he nahee but koshish honee cahiya kay in problems in kamzoriyon ko sudharan na kay un per roai.. or rona tu sirf tab cahiya jab Ankhain saaf kernee hon :D.. anyways be happy...!! or rona kabhi nahee..!! ok..! Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
arsii 0 Posted November 22, 2003 very nice dear rukh u r going very well keep that up Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
rukh 25 Posted November 23, 2003 THANX ARSI :) NADAN > u r right .... but ronai per kub ikhtyar hoa kerta hai ansoo ka samunder to bay muhar hoa kerta hai ..main rotee nahi hoon :D ... Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
NaDaN 0 Posted November 23, 2003 mmm han Iktayar he ke tu baat hay,,,!! :).. chalo rote nahee ho tu buhat acha kerte ho!! Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
NaDaN 0 Posted November 23, 2003 ok i like this Poem.. Dedecated To Rukh..!! Mujhay bas itna kehna hai.............................. Kabhi main yaad aaoon to Kabhi tanhai ki raatain Tumhain ziada sataein to Kabhi titli na bolay to Aur jugnoo lout jaye to Kabhi jab dil bhi bhar jaye Koi jab sunn na paye to Agar sab dost sathi bhi Jo tum se rooth jaaein to Kabhi jab khud se lar lar kar Thakan se choor ho jao Kabhi chahtay huay bhi khud akelay Ro na paao to Apni aankhon ko band karna Mujhay aawaz de dena Aur phir meray tasawwur se Jo chaho batain keh dena Meray kaandhay pe sir rakh kar Tum jitna chaho ro lena Phir khud main jab loat jao to Us he duniya chalay jana Magar bas itna kehna hai Ke jab bhi dukh ya khushiyon main Hamain dil se pukaro gay Hamain tum saath pao gay....... Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
rukh 25 Posted November 23, 2003 ok i like this Poem..Dedecated To Rukh..!! Mujhay bas itna kehna hai.............................. Kabhi main yaad aaoon to Kabhi tanhai ki raatain Tumhain ziada sataein to Kabhi titli na bolay to Aur jugnoo lout jaye to Kabhi jab dil bhi bhar jaye Koi jab sunn na paye to Agar sab dost sathi bhi Jo tum se rooth jaaein to Kabhi jab khud se lar lar kar Thakan se choor ho jao Kabhi chahtay huay bhi khud akelay Ro na paao to Apni aankhon ko band karna Mujhay aawaz de dena Aur phir meray tasawwur se Jo chaho batain keh dena Meray kaandhay pe sir rakh kar Tum jitna chaho ro lena Phir khud main jab loat jao to Us he duniya chalay jana Magar bas itna kehna hai Ke jab bhi dukh ya khushiyon main Hamain dil se pukaro gay Hamain tum saath pao gay....... oh my GOD nadan :o itr superb yara thanx alot :) maini issai apni DIRAY main note ker liya hai .. i can never ever forget ur dis sweet dedecation :flower: baz dafa TASWER per bhi pabndi lag jatee hai yara ..phir kia kerain ;) Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
NaDaN 0 Posted November 24, 2003 mm !! Thanks Rukh..! but you r worth this poem.. Tasaweer kiya Rukh kabi kabhi sab kuch bus say bahir hota hay,.. asay may sirf duwaink am ate hain!!.. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
arsii 0 Posted November 26, 2003 arey rukh rotee kiyoon hai ajj to enjoy kerne ki raat hai to u should all forgot ur griefs and decide to spent ur life wid all the happiness coz this is a special moment wish u all ma dear friends chand mubarak andeid mubarak in advance ok be happy babye take special care of urself Allah hafiz Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
NaDaN 0 Posted November 29, 2003 Haan Piyaar Nahi, Ishq Nahi, Ibadat Ki Hai Mein Ne Rasmon Se Riwajon Se Baghawat Ki Hai Apni Makhmoor Nigahon Main Basa Kar Mujh Ko Tu Ne Bhi Toot Ker Mujh Se Jo Mohabbat Ki Hai Qabool Ker Ke Mujhe Thukra Dia Hai Duniya Ko Main Ne Bhi Tere Liye Duniya Se Adaawat Ki Hai Haseen Azaala Hai, Karam Hai Ya He Khush Bukhti Apne Malik Se Main Ne Jo Shikayat Ki Hai Karoon Main Kese Adaa Shuker Iss Nawazish Ka Mere Maahboob Tu Ne Jo Inaayat Ki HaiKhood Se Bhi Berh Ker Main Ne Tujh Chahat Ki Hai Haan Piyaar Nahi, Iahq Nahi, Ibadaat Ki Hai Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
rukh 25 Posted November 30, 2003 wowwwwwww its nice NADAN good one :) Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
NaDaN 0 Posted December 7, 2003 Thanks Rukh!! :flower: Kuch Log Badal Gaay Hain Is raat ki.. tanhaeeyo ke Sab rang badal gaye hai Chand nikla hai waise hi Andhere badal gaye hai Jinke bharose thi khusiyan Wo badal gaye hain Manzile to abb bhi wo hi hain Kuch rastay badal gaye hain Jinpe kiya tha bharosa humne Wo dost bicharr gaye hain Dakhe thay kabhi jo humne Wo kahwab badal gaye hain Jo banay thay kabhi hamsafar Aaj wo hi mukarr gaye hain Ais tutay huye dil kay saray.. jazbaat badal gaye hain Na badle kabhi hum Na badle hamaray khayalat Bas rona hai yahi...... KUCHH LOG BADAL GAYE HAIN .. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
arsii 0 Posted December 8, 2003 very nice friends keep that up Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Kiran 2 Posted December 8, 2003 wow nadan kiya classic ghazlas hain Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
arsii 0 Posted December 8, 2003 realy nadan has done a spelendid job realy and now listen that one mother Your eyes are like a blue sky Your bones, like my bones. Your eyes the same eyes as mine. The sky like your lips like the sky. Your head like my head. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
NaDaN 0 Posted December 8, 2003 Thanks Kiran & Arsii..! Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
rukh 25 Posted December 8, 2003 nadan superb dear ..u r collectionz iz really nice SUB JAZBAY KHO GAYEE LAMHOON KI DHOL MAIN AB DHERKAN KAI SIWA IS DIL MAIN KUCH NAHI !! Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
rukh 25 Posted December 9, 2003 DO PHOOL KHILAY AIK SATH PER DONOO KI QISMAT JUDA JUDA AIK KO SEHRA MILA AIK QABAR PER SAJA i dont know y i like it tooooo much ...bohat depth hai is main ..:) Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
