junaidrauf 0 Posted December 30, 2003 Woh Duur rah kar bhi kissqadar Qareeb agay Mein Pass rah kar bhi Duur raha tum_____ se ___________________________________________________ Dil ki Baat na karo to acha hai Aaj Mulaqat na karo to acha hai ____________________________________________________ Di jiss nay Shanakht tujhy Zindagi ki Sanam Mohabbat ki wohi Gumnaam Pehchaan hon Mein ______________________________________________________ Yunhi kabhi beath kar sochna tum mere barry mein Kabhi Raat k Andheery mein kabhi Din k Ujjaly mein _________________________________________________________ Uttha rakho Takaluf ki ik Deewar inn Marasim mein Yun Qareeb akar mujhy Tanhai ka Ahsas na ______do Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
NaDaN 0 Posted January 3, 2004 Juanid very nice.. really good! Keep It Up!!.. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
rythm 0 Posted January 4, 2004 (edited) wow.. so much nice.. tazy kahan hain.. woh apko batayengi ki aap pakkay shaiir ho ya kachay heheheheh main to kahoongi ki pakkay huay ho Edited January 4, 2004 by rythm Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
NaDaN 0 Posted January 4, 2004 haha Rythm waqai kachay howa tu wo paka b bana dain gay! :) nice reply rythm! Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
junaidrauf 0 Posted January 7, 2004 Thanks NaDaN n Rythm Arry Yaar abhi itna Pakka bhi nahi hoa. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
NaDaN 0 Posted January 9, 2004 Juniad You have been modest.. Your Work is really good! Snober Long Time...! Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
junaidrauf 0 Posted January 9, 2004 Thanks Alot NaDaN Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
NaDaN 0 Posted January 10, 2004 You r Always Welcome Friend! Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
rukh 25 Posted January 10, 2004 nice poetry JUNNAID SUB KA SATH NIBHANAI WALAY KHUD KION TANHA REH JATAY HAIN Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
junaidrauf 0 Posted January 10, 2004 Thanks Rukh Sab ka jo Saath Nibhaty hain Log yeh Samjhty hain k inn Logon ko kissi k saath ki Zarrorat nahi or woh unn ko Tanha chor jatty hain. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
rukh 25 Posted January 11, 2004 NAHI JUNNAID KABHI MAMLA BARAKS BHI HOTA HAI JAISAI SHAIR NAI KAHA SUBH HEE LOG SHaREEK THAY US KAI JANAZI MAIN TANHAYE KA KHOF SAI JO SHAKS MAR GIYA ! Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
meeran 0 Posted January 19, 2004 MANA WADIAY ISHQ MAIN PAON ANDHA RAKHNA PERTA HAI LAIKIN GHAR KO JANAY WALA RASTA RAKHNA PERTA HAI HIJR KA DARYA AAN PARA HAI BEECH TO KOI BAAT NAHI ISHQ MAIN SATHI THORA SA TO HOSLA RAKHNA PERTA HAI Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
