umair.zm 0 Posted February 14, 2004 app ka bhie farz banita hia k hum jeson ko itna khuwar na karwain jaldi wapas aa jaya karien Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
napster 0 Posted February 16, 2004 hello 2 much nice poetry yar realy nice Na Shikayatein Na Gila Karey Koi Eysa Shaks Howa Karey Jo Meray Liya JIya Karey Mujhay He Sey Batin Kiya Karey Kabhi Rooey Joo Woh Be Panaah Kabhi Be Tahasha Udaas Ho Kabhi Chupkey Say Rakhey Qadam Meri Pechay Aker Hansa Karey Na Shikayatein Na Gila Karey Meri Qurbatin Mainri Chahatein Koi Yaad Karey Qadam Qadam Main Taweel Safar May Hon Ager Meri Wapsi Ki Dua Karey Na Shikayatein Na Gila Karey ................................................................................... Apny Dil Mein Sambhal Kar Usko Aaj Hathon Se Kho Rahey Hein Usey Hichkiyan Ban Gayi Hein Lafzo Ki Aayna Khaney Roo Rahey Hein Usey ...................................................................................... Usko Kis Roshni Mein Dafnyein Usko Kis Khu'ab Ka Badan Ham Dein Wo Jo Khushbo Mein Dhal Gaya Yaron Usko Kis Phool Ka Kafan Ham Dein ................................................................................. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
umair.zm 0 Posted February 16, 2004 ohh superb poetry napster Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
rukh 25 Posted February 20, 2004 shabo > nice poetry dil hai pakistani > thanx .. i like also ur kawish . good one :) kiran > wow its too good umair > nice collection chand rat :D napstar > urz good toooo tujh sai to koi gilla nahi hai qsimat main hee meray silla nahi hai bichray to najani kia hall ho jo shaks abhi milla nahi hai jeeny ki to arzoo hi kub thee marnai ka bhi hosla nahi hai jo zeest ki motbar bana day aisa koi silsila nahi hai khushboo ka hisab ho chuka hai or phool abhi khila nahi hai sersharee rehbaree main dekha peechay mera qafla nahi hai ik thais per dil ka phoot behna choonai main to koi aabla nahi hai Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
umair.zm 0 Posted February 21, 2004 thank u rukh :) ncie shairss too ;) Mat Dekh Koi Shakhs Gunehgaar Hain Kitna Yeh Dekh Tere Saath Wafadar Hain Kitna Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
napster 0 Posted February 21, 2004 nice one phir yhoon howa kay ankhoon say nikal padee ansoo chrea unka jo kabhi khiloon main aa gia tha Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
umair.zm 0 Posted February 22, 2004 "kabhi na khatam ho apni yeh chahat hamesha dilon main rahe dekho ulfat karo aaj hum se yeh ehad-e-mohubbat k tajdeed ehad-e-wafa ka yeh din hai dilon ki jo dori hai usko mitaden jo hail hai sari diwaren gira dain muhobbat k rahon se qante hata dain k tajdeed ehad-e-wafa ka yeh din hai mohubbat se bhajo muhobbat ka thufa gulon main saja ker yeh chahat ka thufa chupa k shairon main ulfat ka thufa k tajdeed ehad-e-wafa ka yeh din hai wafaoon k moti se daman bharengay sada har qadam sath mil ker chalengay karo ahed har ghum ko mil ker sahengay k tajdeed ehad-e-wafa ka yeh din hai chalo pyar ka ik deep aisa jalayen jise andhiyan bhi bujhane na payen muhobbat k nagmon ko dil pe sajayen k tajdeed ehad-e-wafa ka yeh din hai aye makhmor dil ki yeh dharkan kahegi muhobbat hamesha hamesha rahegi muhobbat karo tum muhobbat barhegi k tajdeed ehad-e-wafa ka yeh din hai Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
rukh 25 Posted March 2, 2004 very nice umair & napstar app log khush zoq kehla saktay hain mere terha ;) Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
rukh 25 Posted March 2, 2004 kawish ______E________Rukh kitnay din guzer gayee ,kitnee raatain guzer gayeen tujh sai bat keye hoyee kai tujh say millay hoyee kitnee hee saAtaiN guzer gayeen ik derd ka alam rehnay laga is bay derd dil main jub say tere batain tere yaddain is main ther gayeen faslay kub berhatay hain mohabbat ko logoo ik teray na honay sai char sooo bay yaqeene ki fazain phail gayeen tuu nai dhoond leye hain shiad nayee sathee ,naye hamsaffer key ab to tere mohabbat ki khushboain bhi hum say khafa khafa see rehnai lageen jin ki Ass per kia tha hum nai aghaz-e-saffer munzil say pehlay ..! wohee raahian ab badalnay lageeen ! Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
umair.zm 0 Posted March 2, 2004 khush zoq main to hon ;) lakin app ne kab se kehilwana shroo kya :P very nice poetry Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
rukh 25 Posted March 3, 2004 thanx ..but i am sure app nay yeh poetry read nahi ki ;) Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
umair.zm 0 Posted March 3, 2004 ab kar di it was really nice :) tum kehtai ho "YEH AAG NAHI HAY AB BHUJHNAI WALI SARI DUNIYA HAI AB JHULSNAI WALI TUM KEHTAI HO YAHAN AMAN RAHAI JUNG KARTAI HO NA KARNAI WALI TUM JAMA KARTAI HO LAOO LASHKAR KHALAQ HAI BHOOK SAI MARNAI WALI BANJH LAGTI HAIN AB TU SARI ZAMEENAI AB MUHABBAT NAHI HAY YAHAN UGNAI WALI AB KAI SAWAN HAY KARAI MAUSAM KA YEH CHUT BHI HAI GIRNAI WALI HAY KHULAOO KO BHI TUM SAI KHATRA AB HAWA BHI NAHI YAHAN CHALNAI WALI Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
saamia 0 Posted March 4, 2004 wah g wah is nazam say lagta hai k aap ko hai milnay walla koi award hai Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
umair.zm 0 Posted March 4, 2004 itni honestly se award miliney hotey to mujhey 10 15 award kab k miley hoye hotey thanx for appriciating :) Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
saamia 0 Posted March 4, 2004 mill gayay ga himmat nahee hartay Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
umair.zm 0 Posted March 4, 2004 himat nahien harey ... lakin miliney ki umeed bhie nahien rakhitey Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
saamia 0 Posted March 4, 2004 phir bhee koshish jari rakhay app Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
umair.zm 0 Posted March 4, 2004 aik saal se jari hie hia :) Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
rukh 25 Posted March 5, 2004 mujhay neend say jagna ab acha nahi lagta jub bhi main neend say jagee mera her KHUAB hee toot jaata hai ! Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
umair.zm 0 Posted March 10, 2004 Hai Jaane Jaan Tu Mere Dil Ki Haqeeqat Ko Kya Jaane Mujhe Tum Se Mohabbat Hain, Tere Dil Ki Khuda Jaane Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Dil Hai Pakistani 0 Posted March 15, 2004 umair>best yar tu to door reh k bhi hamaray dil ki bat janta hai yar wo itne nadan kion hain jo hain hamare dil k pas Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
saamia 0 Posted March 15, 2004 ALLAH sab k dil ka haal janta hai Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
mein_hoon_na 0 Posted March 15, 2004 MERI ZINDAGEE KO AIK NAYA ROOG DE KE MUJHE ISHQ KI AAG MAIN JALTA CHOOR JARAHI HAI WO BARSOON POORANE RISHTEY NAATE TOOD KE MUJHE BHULA KE JARAHI HAII KAISE GUZARON GA YE SADYOON JAISE SAAL WO BHARI MAHFIL MAIN MUJHE TANHA KAR JARAHI HAII JATE JATE US KI AIK NAZAR KAH GAYI"ZAIB" WO AAJ PHIR APNA DIL MERE PASS CHOORE JARAHI HAI Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
rukh 25 Posted March 24, 2004 (edited) nice poetry main hoon na ~~!!kawish_E_rukh~~!! meray khuaboon kay nager main ! or teray shehar main ! ik bat hay mumasil ..! jantay ho woh kia hay ? tera shaher roshan hay teray wajood say meray khuwab bhi chamktay hain teray noor say lakin qismat dooo ki juda hay tera shaher teray annay say abaad ho gya ! or teray bichernay say mera khuwaboon ka nager berbaad ho gya ! Edited March 24, 2004 by rukh Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
umair.zm 0 Posted March 24, 2004 pakistani wahh yar main ho na :very nice :hi: rukh yeh app ki apni likhi huee hia kya :P very nice Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
