aarzoo 0 Posted January 20, 2003 Salamz to allz !!!!!!!!!!!!! How r u allz?????? Well here is my another poem !!!!!!!!!!! App sab zaroor bateyeah ga key app ko kasi lagi??? SEHAL NAHIN Aaa kabhi a ker to dekh Bikhar ker sanbhalna Sehal nahin janah Dil jo tum toor ker gaey they Is ko joorna Sehal nahin janah Woo unkahi bateen anjani chateen Unko bhula deena Sehal nahin janah Tum kitney bhi bewafa sahi bhooltey nahin Tumhari judaey sehna Sehal nahin janah Koey kitna bhi aehtabar key qabil ho Phir kisi pey aehtabar kerna Sehal nahin janah Woo apni dastras maen nahin hey Dil ko yeah samjhana Sehal nahin janah Tumheen apni yadoon sey bedakhal kerdoon Aeesa bhi soochna Sehal nahin janah Aeey Khuda ab usko merey samney na laana Aeesi dua kerna Sehal nahin janah aarzoo(uzma) okz babyez ALLAHHAFIZ Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
cooooolll 0 Posted January 20, 2003 salam wonderful stuff .......bohat khoob! Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Shabo 0 Posted January 20, 2003 Salaam Aarzoo Is this ur own work?? WOW its fantastic!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Thanks for letting us have a read :;): Sx Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
aarzoo 0 Posted January 22, 2003 wasalamz shabooo !!!!!!!!! And hello to everyone!!!!!!!!!!! How r u allz? Well thx to cooool and shaboo for ur liking and encouragement :) yeah shabo itz mine and u r always welcome :;): okz babayez takecarez chaooz ALLAHHAFIZ Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
yaad 0 Posted February 9, 2003 Asalam-o-Alaikum Arzoo This is really cool....zabardast hai Takecare and smile ALWAYS! Allah Hafiz Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Waqas 48 Posted February 9, 2003 Its really a cool one Thanks for sharing it with us and keep up the good work ! Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Najeeb 0 Posted February 10, 2003 salam, Good poem arzoo, but what does "Sehal" mean ? Allah Hafiz Najeeb Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
zinozt 0 Posted February 10, 2003 Salam & Hi!:) Good Question Najeeb Bhaia....:) "Sehal " ka matlab "Asan","easy"hai :D aapko shayed to Urdu nai ati Take Care, Khosh Raho Hameshaaa(Ameen) Allah Hafiz... Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
army_qan 0 Posted February 10, 2003 Salamz to allz !!!!!!!!!!!!! How r u allz?????? Well here is my another poem !!!!!!!!!!! App sab zaroor bateyeah ga key app ko kasi lagi??? SEHAL NAHIN Aaa kabhi a ker to dekh Bikhar ker sanbhalna Sehal nahin janah Dil jo tum toor ker gaey they Is ko joorna Sehal nahin janah Woo unkahi bateen anjani chateen Unko bhula deena Sehal nahin janah Tum kitney bhi bewafa sahi bhooltey nahin Tumhari judaey sehna Sehal nahin janah Koey kitna bhi aehtabar key qabil ho Phir kisi pey aehtabar kerna Sehal nahin janah Woo apni dastras maen nahin hey Dil ko yeah samjhana Sehal nahin janah Tumheen apni yadoon sey bedakhal kerdoon Aeesa bhi soochna Sehal nahin janah Aeey Khuda ab usko merey samney na laana Aeesi dua kerna Sehal nahin janah aarzoo(uzma) okz babyez ALLAHHAFIZ assalam-o-alaikum. YEH BJI SEHAL NAHI JANAB Aaa kabhi kha ker tou deikh Khud paka ker khana Sehal nahi janab Dish jo tum toor gaey thay Is ko joorna Sehal nahin janab Woo saas ajnabi susral Unko qabo kerna Sehal nahin janab Tum kitnay bhi bafadar husband side meri leytey nahi Abb apni baat manwana Sehal nahi janab Saas:Koey kitna bhi tareef kay qabil ho Agar baho hai tou tareef kerna Sehal nahi janab Baho:who janti nahi meinay suun liya hai Abb unn ka bachna Sehal nahi janab Inn sub ko ghar say be dakhal kerdon :P Per assa kerna :( Sehal nahi janab Aeey khud samna kernay ki himmat deyna Yeh dua qabol hona Sehal nahi janab army_qan ( ......) ;) Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
army_qan 0 Posted February 10, 2003 assalam-o-alaikum, acha ji tou arz0o behan app ney achi khoshish ki keep it up deikhein mujhe achi lagi hai tou mei ney ess ki parody ki hai na inshallah app mind nahi karein gi :) chalein ager app nay ker bhi liya tou hum mana lein gay theak hai na apna dhair sara khiyal rekhna ALLAH HAFIZ Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
zinozt 0 Posted February 10, 2003 Salam & Hi!:p Wel Done army_qan aapki parody to real se bhi achi hai ....but ab asa nai ke real achi nai... ...sahi na...asa na ho ke Aarzoo bahan meri pitai lagaein ke yeh sehal hai...... keep it up Take Care, Khosh Raho Hameshaaa(Ameen) Allah Hafiz... Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
army_qan 0 Posted February 10, 2003 Salam & Hi!:p Wel Done army_qan aapki parody to real se bhi achi hai ....but ab asa nai ke real achi nai... ...sahi na...asa na ho ke Aarzoo bahan meri pitai lagaein ke yeh sehal hai...... keep it up Take Care, Khosh Raho Hameshaaa(Ameen) Allah Hafiz... assalam-o-alaikum, ji bahut bahut shukriya zinozt behan yeh tou app kay zoik ki baat hai pata nahi arz0o behan ka kya reaction hota hai khair ji enjoy aur apna dhair sara khiyal rekhna ALLAH HAFIZ Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
aarzoo 0 Posted February 10, 2003 Wasalamz to allz !!!!!! How r u alllz ???? Well thx for ur likings and appreciations yaad.waqas,najeeb,army_qan,zinozt and allz :P And haan army_qan u did a good job and zinozt ji mujhey bura maneney ki kiya zaroorat hey ager app ko parady ziada achi lagi hey to yeah to app ki pasand per hey nah :) anyway i like ur safgoeeey jee. Our army_qan merey reactions saey derney ki koey zaroorat nahi yeah kabhi bhi negative nahi ho sakhthey our woh bhi itney achey our piyarey dostoon key liey tu bikul nahi :;): Alwayz smilez ok gtg babayez chaozzz tataz ALLAHHAFIZ Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
fzawan 0 Posted February 10, 2003 Well arzo and army_queen both deserve aprreciation. Nice try by both of you. Khuda karay zooray qalam aur ziada Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
aarzoo 0 Posted February 11, 2003 Well arzo and army_queen both deserve aprreciation. Nice try by both of you.Khuda karay zooray qalam aur ziada salamz allz!!!!! Ameen :) and thx for ur swheet prayer fzawan ok gtg ALLAHHAFIZ Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
army_qan 0 Posted February 11, 2003 Well arzo and army_queen both deserve aprreciation. Nice try by both of you. Khuda karay zooray qalam aur ziada assalam-o-alaikum, ji shukriya 4 ur appreciation but its army_qan :) not army_queen :D but ji what does this mean "khuda karay zooray qalam aur ziada" yeh baat samjhe nahi i :( ok ji take care n ALLAH HAFIZ Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
army_qan 0 Posted February 11, 2003 Wasalamz to allz !!!!!! How r u alllz ???? Well thx for ur likings and appreciations yaad.waqas,najeeb,army_qan,zinozt and allz :P And haan army_qan u did a good job and zinozt ji mujhey bura maneney ki kiya zaroorat hey ager app ko parady ziada achi lagi hey to yeah to app ki pasand per hey nah :) anyway i like ur safgoeeey jee. Our army_qan merey reactions saey derney ki koey zaroorat nahi yeah kabhi bhi negative nahi ho sakhthey our woh bhi itney achey our piyarey dostoon key liey tu bikul nahi :;): Alwayz smilez ok gtg babayez chaozzz tataz ALLAHHAFIZ assalam-o-alaikum, ji shukriya arz0o kay app ko bhi pasand i waisey ager app na likhti tou mei kaisay likhti ;) theak hai ji sahi kaha na mei nay aur ji reaction kabhi negative nahi ho sakta thats g:):)d aur ji hum bhi itnay achay doston ko naraz nahi kertay hamari khoshish oti hai agay .............. :;): take care n ALLAH HAFIZ Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
cooooolll 0 Posted February 11, 2003 salam army_qan :D Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
aarzoo 0 Posted February 12, 2003 Wasalamz !!!!!!!!!!!!!!! U r alwayz welcome army_qan :) chaloo ishi bhaney acheeeeyyy dost to kaha ok gtg take carez ALLAHHAFIZ Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
army_qan 0 Posted February 13, 2003 assalam-o-alaikum, arrey arz0o ji achay dost kehney kay liye bhi kya bahanoon ki zarorat hoti hai ??? dost tou hotey hi dost hain na ;) aur ji app ney koi aur poem nahi likhi i mean ur taza taza qalam ....... ;) intezar rahay ga theak ji waisey likhtey tou hum bhi bara kuch lakin post ess liye nahi kertey kay unn ka bhi wohi haal na ker dein log jo hum .................... :laugh: apna khiyal rakhiyey ga ALLAH HAFIZ Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
aarzoo 0 Posted February 13, 2003 Wasalamz !!!!!! Well bhaney wali to bat sirf mazak thi but app u bura hi man gaeen dost :P our haan likhna hmmmmmz ab chorh hi diyah hey taqreeban wasey app ney meri "aik pagal si larki" nahi perhi kiya ???yaheen posted hey woh bhi :) us pey comments ka bhi intizar rahey ga :;): Our gee app bhi khuch share kareen nah wasey hum aap ki poetry ka woh haal nahi karegey jo app - - - - -- - - - - -- - :fire: yaqeen rakheen APP key comments our poetry ki posts key jald hi muntazir heeen hum - -- - :sleepy: ok gtg take carez babayez ALLAHHAFIZ Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
zinozt 0 Posted February 13, 2003 Salam & HI! Arey nai aarzoo Bhahna...Army_qan khabhi bhi apna kalaam sare aam nai laeingi...kunki in ho ne jub kissi ko nai bakhsha to phir koi in ke saath kio... :sleepy: Ahem ahem....baja fermaya na meine Army_qan Take Care, :;): Khosh Raho Hameshaaa(Ameen) :inlove: Allah Hafiz... Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
army_qan 0 Posted February 13, 2003 assalam-o-alaikum, ji tou arz0o dost mei ney bura nahi manaya :) bura manao aur woh bhi mei ??????? mei ?????? :D achi ji khair well app ka topic mei ney abhi tak nahi deikha aik pagal si larki abhi tasalli mei deikhti hon :) tou phir mei bhi inshallah sochti hon uss per kuch likhnay ka acha ji take care n ALLAH HAFIZ Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
army_qan 0 Posted February 13, 2003 assalam-o-alaikum, ji tou zino behan app kuch keh rahi hai :;): hmmmmmm well ji shayad app sahi keh rahi hain arrey nahi nahi baga ferma rahein hain ;) yaad hai na aik dafa share ki thi tou kuch logon ney translation ki practice ki thi :D acha laga lakin bas chorein kya kigiyey its a life naaa ok ji apna dhair sara khiyal rekhna n ALLAH HAFIZ Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
aarzoo 0 Posted February 13, 2003 Wasalamz !!!!!! army_qan yeah to achi bat hey key app bura nahi manati hum to sirf check ker rahey they app ko Chaleen app tassali sey socheen jab tak hum wait ker laeeengey Our haan yeah kiya bat hoey app to loogoon sey derthi heeen - - - -- - - - :oh: Hum heeen nah wah wah kerney key liey app apni poetry share to kareen nah zara :;): Well zinozt behana chanda app dekheay ga hamari itni achi dost hum sey to apna kalam zaroor share kareengi -------- kion sahi hey na army_qan achi dost gee Alwayz Smilez Take Carez ok gtg babyez ALLAHHAFIZ Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
