munnibhai 0 Posted February 1, 2004 (edited) haqayaq kam hain fasanay bohat guzar gaye hain zamanay bohat wo hi humain nahi chahtay verna hum say milnay k bahanay bohat un k zikar main ik lutaf sa hay verna ghum bhulanay ko may-khanay bohat wisl ki aarzoo main bhataktay ruhay sajaye thay sapnay bhi suhanay bohat jab wo samjhain gay sachai ishq ki wo aain gay humain mananay bohat Edited February 1, 2004 by munnibhai Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Shabo 0 Posted February 1, 2004 It's good.. I feel in a SAD mood aswell today :( Sx Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
NInA 2 Posted February 1, 2004 WOW, very nice dude!! keep it up!! :) ps: but a lil sad :( Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
umair.zm 0 Posted February 2, 2004 muni bhaie piyaar se jakar samjhao samajh jayein ghe aur abhie akar manayein ghe :D don worry ;) nice poetry :hi: Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
umair.zm 0 Posted February 3, 2004 "tumhain hum ne chaha hai chaha karain gain..... tumhain sada dil se pooja karain gain..... mera raah guzar tu mera hum safar tu..... rahe saath har dam ae jaan e jigar tu..... Khuda se duya hum yeh manga karain gain..... tumhain hum ne chacha hai chaha karain gain..... meri bhi khushi hai teri har khushi main..... tum chaho na chaho mujhe zindagi main..... kabhi bhi na hum shikva karain gain..... tumhain hum ne chaha hai chaha karain gain..... nahi koi tera humare siya ab..... nahi koi mera tere siya ab..... tum hi se vafaa ka takaza karain gain..... tumhain hum ne chaha hai chaha karain gain..... tere har situm ko gale se laga kar..... teri chahat main jan apni loota kar..... tujhe har khushi se navaza karain gain..... tumhain hum ne chaha hai chaha karain gain..... jo dhukh bhi mile ga main dil main rakhoon ga..... situm ka tere na charcha karoon ga..... yeh vada hai mera jo poora karain gain..... tumhain hum ne chaha hai chaha karain gain..... bhulana agar hai bhula do tum hum ko..... bhuladoon main kaise meri jaan tum ko..... tumhain pyar khod se hum ziyada karain gain..... tumhain hum ne chaha hai chaha karain gain..... tumhare bina bhi jahaan main jiyain gain..... muhobat main har zhakham hans ke sahain gain..... magar koi saath na dooja karain gain..... tumhain hum ne chaha hai chaha karain gain..... agar tum hoi es jahan main kisi ke..... voh din hongain akheri meri zindagi ke..... tumhain phir kabhi na pukara karain gain..... tumhain hum ne chaha hai chaha karain gain..... judai ka tum dard seh na sako ge..... ke mere bina tum bhi na reh sako ge..... tumhain yaad itna hum aaya karain gain..... tumhain hum ne chaha hai chaha karain gain.... Ab aansuyon ko aankhon mein sajaana hoga chiraag bhuj gaye. . . khud ko jalaana hoga na samjhna ke tumse bichhar ke khush hain hamein logon ki khaatir muskuraana hoga phir shaam dhal gayi ..aap aaye na aaj bhi dil ko aaj phir umeedon se behlaana hoga vaada-khilaafi kar ke muskuraate ho aap dekhna aik din sanam aapko pachtaana hoga lahoo se apne kafan pe tera naam likh jaaungee thaam haath mein kaleeka tumko aana hoga abhi se na ki jiye takaaze masroofiyat ke aap abhi utth-ni hai arthi kaandha to lagaana hoga muddaton kiya hai tera intezaar aye sanaam umar kat chuki. . .ab tujh ko bholaana hoga :) Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
munnibhai 0 Posted February 3, 2004 jaan-e-tumanna jab say tumhain pyaar kia tha raatain aankhon main kat-ti theen tera intezaar kia tha teri qarbat main zindagi thi teray deedar main jo khushi thi kab kaheen or mil saki thi tujhay dil main basaya tha ik sapna aankhon main sajaya tha teri yaad nay... mera chain churaya tha nawk-e-mishgaan say too nay dil ko nishana banaya tha dil tab say tujh pay nisaar kia tha tera intezar kia tha Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
rukh 25 Posted February 3, 2004 nice poetry munnibhai .. wohi nahi chahtay werna hum say milnay kay hain bahany bohat very nice ..:) Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
umair.zm 0 Posted February 3, 2004 nice munibhaie :hi: rukh shayad woih bhool gaya ho gha miliney ke bahaney Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
umair.zm 0 Posted February 3, 2004 hai zid ke wo ghalti na thi... phir un aankhon mein dekhnay se kyun ghabrata hai ye dil... usse dekhay bina bhi us ki ahat ko jaan leta hai... najanay kyun us khawab ko itna chahta hai ye dil... us ko shama khud ko parwana bana baitha hai jab... phir aik choti si baat us se kyun na keh pata hai ye dil... kehta hai mujhe usse bhool gaya hoon main... phir har roz muskuratay huay kyun aanso bahata hai ye dil... khud pe hansta hai ke ye na sahi to koi aur sahi... phir lakhon mein kyun usi per nazar jamata hai ye dil... ye manta hai ke us ki aas ab bilkul baimuraad hai... phir har ghari us ki yaad se kyun satata hai ye dil... ye janta hai ke us ke bin kabhi jee na saken ge hum... phir roz roz mere jazba-e-ishq ko kyun azmata hai ye dil... ye sochtay huay ke zindagi mein kitne hi gham hain... ek chotay se gham ko kyun na bhula pata hai ye dil... janta hai ke maut ka saman nahi mere paas... phir zindagi se kyun itna uktata hai ye dil... Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
munnibhai 0 Posted February 7, 2004 ye sochtay huay ke zindagi mein kitne hi gham hain... ek chotay se gham ko kyun na bhula pata hai ye dil... wow!!!!! Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
munnibhai 0 Posted February 11, 2004 (edited) hello all , here is my geet, actually i bought a wrist watch for her from a shop , i thought that she will wear it , i loved her with very sincerety but she don't even care of me , main nay us ki khatir aadhi university koapna dushman bana lia , baat ye hoti thi k agar koi us larki ka sochta bhi tha to main us ki aisi ki tesi pher deta tha....wo sab meray dushman ho gaye , us larki ko bhi pata hay magar phir bhi usay meri koi pervaa nahi. then i came to know that she is already engaged , then i started smoking and can u beleive my avg ratio of smoking is 2 packs everyday. I also suffered from Bronchitis once. its all due to her. Then , may be it is good for my future , my gruop's girls (as boys r all same) sat with me to make me understand that what is the reality of life. Actually im very sensitive and i feel even a minor thing. they told me this is not the life that if u could not get a girl then u started smoking and u decided to left the university. i was going home leaving university and lahore as i thought that Lahore's atmosphere is not of my type. i m a simple person , love and want love and sincerety from everyone , they told me that this is lahore. here people run after money , when they need us , they r our friends , when they have no need , they just kick us off. and it was all true. i had its experience. she said that she know that im sincere to her but she dun even want to see ur face , she hates u then y im wasting my time n life after her. i said that what r u talking to , a broken heart , a frustrated man ? HUH... but she said "its only ur thinking. u dun want to forget her. u do not laugh , u smoke , u were intelligent student of class but now u r dullest student of class. ur assignment of Physiology was best in whole class but now u r making assignment by copying another guy's assignment. what happened to u? when someone left us , we feel that our life has no colors , we will die , but we live, facing the life and after a time , we forget them.it is only an attraction which has prevailed over to u. U also face the life and study. what r u here for and what r u doing? Be happy , laugh , enjoy life. its very colourful." Her name is Zill-e-Huma. she has got a friend , her name is Abeer , her thinking is that no one have any right on anyone. she knew that i smoke , i love her. she says that she is my friend...but i know y she says so. cuz she wants to know what do i think about Zill-e-Huma then she explains her in negative mind. and she is the girl due to which i could not get her. Zill-e-Huma is so simple and she is not arstroctaric. she is so innocent , so soft that u can't even imagine. so i was saying that she never said me that dun smoke...but she always said that leave Zill-e-Huma. she said so because she never want her to be with me. im waiting for time when i will take my revenge from her. i told this because when my group was making me understand , i thought that , one is Abeer who says that no one has no right on anyone and other r they who care of me. i smoke , i love , i leave study , i leave lahore . nothing would happen to them , but again they made me understand cuz un ko mera ehsaas hay...Abeer ko nahi hay. i was finished and the ratio i was smoking with , i would die after 2 or 3 months. (i started smoking a 3 months ago). so i decided to get out of this hell . I know that its very very difficult to forget her and it can take years to forget her but now i have decided to forget her so im hopeful that i will be successful. They said, " we r thinking that we r wasting our words n time." but i said "no...ab main insaan ban chuka hoon" U beleive i was very rude guy , all bad habbits were in me , i left all those habbits for her , but what i got..nothing :(.............so here is that geet.. tu jab say meri chah thi tujhay kuch denay ki tumanna thi wo aik garhi thi mujhay achi lagi thi tujhay pehnanay ki garaz say ik dukan say khreedi thi socha tha... jab to sajay gi , sanwray gi wo ghari bhi pehna keray gi teri kalai main achi laga keray gi magar... too nay jab say mujahy thukra dia main nay udaasion ko dost bana lia or wo garhi aaj bhi wesay hi rakhi hay tera intezar kerti hay :'( Edited February 11, 2004 by munnibhai Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
umair.zm 0 Posted February 11, 2004 ohh GOD muni bhaie koun se janam ka badla le rahey ho intie bri poetry koun parhey gha yar Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
munnibhai 0 Posted February 12, 2004 yaar shayad aap nay is ko poora nahi perha, verna aap kabhi bhi is terha na kehtay...and anybody studying in Lahore University can confirm all the above conditions :( , pl do not laugh at me , 1st read all of above then give ur comments :( Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
umair.zm 0 Posted February 12, 2004 hey muni bhaie r u kidding.... is dis all true about u?????????????? how can it be ........ wat r u saying i juss cant believe on u Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
munnibhai 0 Posted February 14, 2004 hmm i know , u won't beleive until u see me, i said that u can confirm it from my university n from my class fellows. Name Muneeb Aslam (C.R of class) Roll No. 023 2nd smester Pharmacy Dept. Univ. of lhr Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
umair.zm 0 Posted February 14, 2004 arey yar sanbhalo khud ko kya pagal ban rahey ho... hosh mian aao yar... Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
munnibhai 0 Posted February 16, 2004 aaj main nay us ko kaha , ab main nay darvesh ban jana hay or sara din yaha beth ker sirf Cigrette pia karon ga. Us nay kaha k tum log is terha apna hi nuqsaan kion kertay ho , main nay kaha k tum nahi samjho gi :( Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
munnibhai 0 Posted February 16, 2004 umeed bhi toot gai , dil to toota hi tha phir peeni pari , jaam abhi choota hi tha (i will complete it this night) Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
decent 0 Posted February 16, 2004 aray munna bhai kitna toota hai ray tu Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
munnibhai 0 Posted February 16, 2004 jinay tukray hoye dil dayyy har tukray tay tera naam howay Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
umair.zm 0 Posted February 16, 2004 arey muna bhaie kisi aik kie waja se zindaghee khatam nahien hoti Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
munnibhai 0 Posted February 19, 2004 khatam to nahi hoti magar jeena to mushkil ho jata hay na Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
decent 0 Posted February 19, 2004 Dil k totay howay hazar Koi yahan gira koi wahan gira Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
