HamZaad 0 Posted February 11, 2004 (edited) Hi friends here you can post the poetry on given subject...and we will continue with a proper subject...e.g chand (moon), hina ya mehndi, phool, raat etc. so here I am going to start with subject "dost or dosti".....plz continue on this subject. first from me. Ager hum dost hotey.... Agar Ham Dost Hotey To Karam Ki Inteha Kartey Tumhen Palkon Pey Rakhtey Ham Tumhen Dil Men Basatey Ham Agar Tum Rooth Jaatey To Tumhen Kitna Manatey Ham Jo Milney Tum Nahi Aatey To Aa kar Khud Tumhen Miltey Tumhari Laghzishon Ko Bhi Hansi Main Ham Ura Detey Agar Apni Khata Hoti To Khud Ko Bhi Saza Detey Magar Ye Sab Jabhi Hota Agar Ham Dost Hotey To Magar Itna Hi Jana Hey K Tum Ney Aaj Tak Ham Ko Paraya Keh Kar Jana Hey Kabhi Hamdam Naa Mana Hey Agar Ham Dost Hotey To....... Edited February 11, 2004 by HamZaad Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
umair.zm 0 Posted February 11, 2004 filhal dost koiee yaad nahien aa raha :D well nice poetry jigar :hi: Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
rukh 25 Posted February 12, 2004 good idea hamzad .. ab DOSTEE ki nahi hoslay ki bat hai lazim nahi kai tu bhi mera ham khiyal ho ab kai woh derd day kai main rooon tmam ummer ab kai laga woh zakham kai jeena mahal ho phir tu nai chair dee hai gayee saatoon ki baat woh guftgu na ker kai tujhay bhi malal ho Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
umair.zm 0 Posted February 13, 2004 himmm nice rukh Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Dil Hai Pakistani 0 Posted February 13, 2004 Assalam o alaikum idea is very well Good poetry from rukh n humzad mujhe shair o shairy aaty nahee koshish kar raha hoon achi lage to batana n mistakes bhi collect kar k dena ta k achi poetry likh sakoon Thanx ager hum dost hote to dil main hote un k wo dost hain humare ye dil o jaan hain un k dosti main ye shart nahee hai k jisay hum chahain wo dost banai hume ye apna muqader hai k unhe hum kia lage ye un pe lazim nahee k hum doston main rahian un k Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
decent 0 Posted February 13, 2004 APNE ZATH KO SAB SE CHUPA KER RKHA HAI IS DIL KE TOFANOON KO DABAH KER RAKHA HAI DEKH NA LE KOI MERE DIL KE TOFAN KO IS LIYEE KUDH KO SAB SE CHUPA KER RAKHA HAI by urooj syed Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Shabo 0 Posted February 13, 2004 Very creative HamZaad Nice shairi HamZaad, Rukh, DHP n decent.. Umair nice running commentary ji, kuch aap bhi irshad karte to kitna maza ata :D dosti jab kisi se ki jaaye dushmanon ki bhi raaye li jaaye maut ka zahar hai fizaaon mein ab kahaan jaa k saans li jaaye bas isi soch mein hoon dooba hua ye nadi kaise paar ki jaaye mere maazi ke zaKhm bharne lage aaj phir koiee bhool ki jaaye botalein khol k to pi barason aaj dil khol ke bhi pi jaaye Sx Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
NInA 2 Posted February 14, 2004 Very Nice topic Humzaad and nice ghazal's everyone!! :) here i go with one!! Dostoon ki shikayat keroon mein Yeh be mujko gawara nahi hai Dostoon nay karam woh kiye hain Zindage ki tamana nahi hai Log kantoon say bach ker chaltay hain Humne to phooloon say b zahkam kain hain Tum to gharon ki baat kerte ho Humne tu apne bhee azmaie hain Soch kay bewafa kahi yeh Khul na jaie jurm appka hee Azmaya hai duniya ko meine App nay mujhko perkha nahi hai Ho kay baytaab mayet mari Tum yeh kyun beneqab agye ho Ummer bhurji se parda kia tha Aaj kyun iss say parda nahi hai Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
umair.zm 0 Posted February 14, 2004 ohh very don guyss shabash keep iit up :D shabo>> ab dosti kie poetry nahien to mian kya karoon Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Shabo 0 Posted February 14, 2004 Â shabo>> ab dosti kie poetry nahien to mian kya karoon Umair> o i c ;) dost miltey hain yahaan dil ko dukhaane k liye ungaliyaan rakhte hain vo ham pe uthaane k liye kyaa qusoor un ka ye ik rasm chali aaiee hai tohamatein hoti hain duniya mein lagaane k liye naaKhudaa maan k baithe hain jin ki kashti mein vo hamein maujon mein laaye the Dubaane k liye vo havaaon ki tarah ruKh ko badal lete hain ham naseebon se larre they jinhein paane k liye Sx Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
HamZaad 0 Posted February 16, 2004 very nice poetry by shabo, DHP, PLG, decent and rukh... :hi: Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Shabo 0 Posted February 22, 2004 :hi: Thanks HamZaad Kabhi roottha nahe kartay.... sono aisa nahe kartay.... jinhay pana na ho aasan unhain socha nahi kartay.... jinhain shab bhar tarapna ho kabhi soiya nahi kartay....... zara se baat par ai DOST....... yoonhi roiya nahe kartay....!!!!! Sx Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
HamZaad 0 Posted March 6, 2004 again very nice shabo... Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
NaDaN 0 Posted March 12, 2004 And Forgive Me You forgive me for liking you too much, And I'll forgive you for not liking me enough. You forgive me for missing you so, And I'll forgive you for being so cold. You forgive me for the loud racing of my heart, And I'll forgive you for not hearing it. You forgive me for playing your games, And I'll forgive you for toying with my emotions. You forgive me for finding you so attractive, And I'll forgive you for not noticing. You forgive me for raising you up so high, And I'll forgive you for bringing me down so low. You forgive me for wanting to be with you, And I'll forgive you for avoiding me. You forgive me for being so pathetic, And I'll forgive you for taking advantage of it. You forgive me for not being able to let go, And I'll forgive you for never having latched on. You forgive me for having hopes and dreams, And I'll forgive you for crushing them Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
decent 0 Posted March 12, 2004 You Are My Friend And I Hope You Know That's True. No Matter What Happens I Will Stand Right By You. In Times Of Grief I Will Give You Belief. I'll Be There For You Whenever You Are In Need. To Lend You A Hand To Do A Good Deed. So Just Call On Me When You Need Me, My Friend! I Will Always Be There For You Right To The End! Best Friends Forever! ALLAH HAFIZ DOSTO Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
NaDaN 0 Posted March 12, 2004 Stuck in your Scent . just yew hun.........just ........ time trickles away All day long i sit on the floor painting the wall with my gaze waiting for you to open that door hoping you come out of that haze breeze brings again your scent the very scent , i used to chase life rushes by i have lost the will to live craving to free my soul from you but something doesnt let me give and its a part of me , not you i walk away ,to come back my heart wants you, maybe me too . your scent stops my feet again if only ; if only you were here wid me again ! Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
umair.zm 0 Posted March 12, 2004 superb both of u :) Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
mein_hoon_na 0 Posted March 12, 2004 aray bhaiya umair kia english aate hai ya assay hi acha bol deya Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
umair.zm 0 Posted March 12, 2004 bhaie tere par niheni gaya :P ko 5 class main se hie bhagh k aya ho Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
mein_hoon_na 0 Posted March 12, 2004 laykin mein tu saray 5 class per bhaga tha jub k tum tu sawa 5 k bad se nazar nahi ayee thay Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
umair.zm 0 Posted March 12, 2004 main wahien tha lakin too to pehley 5 main he bhagh gaya tha kahan se dekhita mujhye :P Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
