Dil Hai Pakistani 0 Posted May 7, 2004 Hellowww Now we are start a new game. this game is like as poetry. in this game we do e.g: parwana tujh se karta hai a shama piyar kion ab is shair ko complete next menber kare ga jaise ye jan be qarar hai tujh par nisar koin now start the game ye na thi hamari qismat k visale yar hota is k aage kiya hai yar mujhe kuch sahi dikh nahee raha Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
NaDaN 0 Posted May 7, 2004 DHP nice game.. But tell me can we compose or complete it wid our own made line... Do let us know the Rules so we can follow!.. well wasay mujhay is sher ka next line nahe atte! but if allowed i can complete it wid my own :) Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Kiran 2 Posted May 8, 2004 Nice game DHP i'll join u guys later :) Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
NaDaN 0 Posted May 10, 2004 ok Good DHP ye na thi hamari qismat k visale yar hota Jab B baat barhai.. tu udher say inkaar he hota :D.. yes yes i know the badest countinuing line but.. pass ker yeah bardast ker ok new line! From Insha's Shiry! Yeah Batin Jhootee Batin Hian Yeah Logo nay pehlaii hain Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
SinlneR 0 Posted May 22, 2004 Okie i like this one. its goood game. Now me COnt..... Yeah Batin Jhootee Batin Hian Yeah Logo nay pehlaii hain Yeh rahein jhooti rahein hain yeh logo ne banai hain.. Dil aate hain uspe, jis mein ada ka khazana ho... Aankhon ko bhane wale to bohot miljata hein..... Acha tha??/ Pata nahin ..... Well next One..... Khud se bhi duur nikal aya, ab aur kaha jao mein. Dil phir bhi tum ko hi chahe to dil ko kya samjhao mein. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
fati 0 Posted May 25, 2004 ab mujhay kiya karna hai Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Dil Hai Pakistani 0 Posted May 28, 2004 fati aap ko pata tha k ye kitna comlicated game hai phir aap ne is ka start kion liya jab aap ko shairi aati hi nahee hai to aap ne ye kion shiro kiya ab hum se aur pooch rahee hain ab mujhay kiya karna hai dekho yar kese log hain jab pata hai ye mujh par bhari hai mujhse nahee hoga phir start le liya ab ALLAH hi samjhe ga aise logon ko Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
fati 0 Posted May 29, 2004 Dil hai Pakistani :o ap na tu khas typical pakistanioun wali baat ki hai.. ya nahi ke bata dein ab kia karna hai.. discourage ker rahay hain.... Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Bugs 0 Posted May 31, 2004 apko is say ugla shair kehna hai kuch bhi keh dein ya koi misra. kahir shair ka juwab deta hoon movie ka song hai dil to hai dil dil ka itebar kiya kejiey a gia ju kisi per piyar tu kiay kijiey. now complete this shair dekhai diey yoon keh bau khud kiya Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
*Lahori* 0 Posted July 14, 2004 Apun ki Kismat hi kharab hay :( Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
rukh 25 Posted December 5, 2004 ok ill try to complete bugs shair dekhai diey yoon keh bau khud kiya dil lay ker mukker gaye yeh kia zulm kiya ok next shair is na mehrban .na ajnabi , na dostee .na dushmanee! who ll complete dis???? Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
mansoor 0 Posted December 5, 2004 :( kia yaa waqayee koee shair hai ? Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
rukh 25 Posted December 5, 2004 ohoo mansoor .. app ko khud apnee sooch say complete kerna hay .... sub next line khud banain gay ...! :D Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
mein_hoon_na 0 Posted December 5, 2004 YEH SHAIR HAI YA KISSI TAQRIR KA KOI HISA Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
mansoor 0 Posted December 5, 2004 mian bhee soooch raha tha mera shairs ka stock khatam hoo gia shayad :D lets c na mehrban .na ajnabi , na dostee .na dushmanee! Yaa Illlaheee Yaa mamlaa kia hai ;) ( Asal shair yaa hai ) Hum hai n mustaq aur woo beezarr Yaa Ilahee yaa Mamla kia hai :D .. abb koee aur hee tarahh day day main too petry say baz ayya ;) Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
mein_hoon_na 0 Posted December 5, 2004 MANSOOR BHAI APP SIRF KHANA PAKKEIN :D Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
rukh 25 Posted December 5, 2004 lolzz lakin app nay next shair to nahi diya .. ..ab game agay kaysay chalain app ki last line ko main shair bana laytee hoon :P abb koee aur hee tarahh day day main too petry say baz ayya anjnay main afsha ho gya raz-e-dil yeh kaysa muqam ayya next is Tum jo badlay to badal gayee hum bi ! Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
mansoor 0 Posted December 6, 2004 Tum jo badlay to badal gayee hum bi ! kuin na badlain,gardish main hai jahan hamara! Baqool ghalib gardish main hai sath zameen asaman Kuch na kuch hoo rahay ga Ghabrain kia :D Main hoon na hmm :D app kee nazar Koee bat hai joo CHUP hain warna kia bat hai joo kar nahi atee yaa baqi sab kee nazar pehlay atee thee hall dil paa hansee Abb kissse bat par nahi atee Moot ka aik din Moyyan hai neend kuin rat bahar nahi atee Kabbay kiss mun say jaoo jay Ghalib Sharam tum koo magar nahi atee Ohhh man :( i hate poetry have a try on that Tum joo chup hoo too chup hai sara zamana Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
rukh 25 Posted December 6, 2004 lo kahan to shair nahi dya ja raha tha kahan nazam hee post ker dee:P well nice dedication :) Tum joo chup ho to chup hai sara zamana kuch to hay jis ki perda daree hay (asal sher tha ) Baykhudee bay sabab nahi ghalib kuch to hay jis ki perda daree hay :D ok next is kia roz kertay ho gilla kabhi humain bhi manaoo ! Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
mansoor 0 Posted December 7, 2004 COLOR=blue] Oo BoY No more Ghalib !! :!: :D rukh app bhee ghalib koo lay aieenn ... :D kuch to hay jis ki perda daree hay Tum hee samjh jaoo yaa aqal mandee tumhare hai game dunya Gjhame farda Ghame Ishaq Aur kia ?? yaa zindagi hamare hai Bandhh kar azad kia, azad kar kay bandha iss ka next misraa main Open choodta hoon for u ppl to try lets c where were we ? kia roz kertay ho gilla kabhi humain bhi manaoo ! zaroor manayeen gay, gar koee khaye *Man-aaoo ! (Man for Mansoor Aoo for Come ;) ) this is for the game Hoo dedd kee tamanaa too ankoon koo band kar" mansoor [/color][/color] Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
rukh 25 Posted December 8, 2004 (edited) misra to agay day dain gay lakin ager ghalib nay khuab main aker daraya to :P kuch to hay jis ki perda daree hay Tum hee samjh jaoo yaa aqal mandee tumhare hai game dunya Gjhame farda Ghame Ishaq Aur kia ?? yaa zindagi hamare hai Bandhh kar azad kia, azad kar kay bandha Par kat key sayyad nay rassi toree hamaree hai :ph34: so back to the game Hoo dedd kee tamanaa too ankoon koo band kar kay Aks myra in main na dekh lay yeh sheher ok next is yeh bat bay bat jhgerna kis bat ka hay ishara ? ! compelet dis ! Edited December 8, 2004 by rukh Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
mansoor 0 Posted December 9, 2004 hahah Agar ghalib Khwab main ayyaa too uss kar frnd MEER say help mang loon ga :D Thanks for misra Tum nay Misraa dia Yaa nawazish tumahre hai hmmm WaOoooooooooo zberdst shair ban gia Hoo dedd kee tamanaa too ankoon koo band kar kay Aks myra in main na dekh lay yeh sheher Achaa next misraa kia tha yeh bat bay bat jhgerna kis bat ka hay ishara ? ! Kay Fidweee hoo gia hai Ashiq tumhara ! MansOor Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
mein_hoon_na 0 Posted December 9, 2004 mansoor bhai app k badlay mein aaker shair ki first line batao ga kia Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
rukh 25 Posted December 10, 2004 mansoor > meer ghalib kay frd hain na kay app kay ...to woh ghalib ka sath dain gay na kay app ka :P bayjan samjhtay ho jazbon ko hamray ? jo lafzoon ko zaban day day woh SHAIyree hamaree hai (dis shair dedecate to ghalib :D ) waysay bandh kay azad ki azad ker kay bandha ....is shair ka idea woh IQBAl kay shair jaysa nahi hay teray azad bandoon ki na yeh dunya na woh dunya yahan jeenay per pabandi wahan mernay per pabandi Main hoon na > main bhi yehe sooch rahee hoo :D ..mansoor sahab apni teraf say game hee khtum ker kay chalay gayee:P well koi gul nahi next Missra main he dobara daytee hoon haare hoye bazee jeetna hum ko aata hai B) complete dis now . Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
