Mehro 0 Posted August 2, 2010 Salam frinds yahan main apni poetry book main say gazals and shair post keron ge hope u like my collection. thanks Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Mehro 0 Posted August 2, 2010 Fana tere zaat me itna ho jao me ALLAH jo mujh ko dekhe use tujh sai Mohabbat ho jae Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
kamal 82 Posted August 2, 2010 Fana tere zaat me itna ho jao me ALLAH jo mujh ko dekhe use tujh sai Mohabbat ho jae Wah kya Baat hai ap ki Bohat khoob Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Uncleg 2 Posted August 2, 2010 Wah kya Baat hai ap ki Bohat khoob Bay wazan shai'r ki correction kartey hein na k daad deitay hein. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
kamal 82 Posted August 2, 2010 Bay wazan shai'r ki correction kartey hein na k daad deitay hein. Uncle g sory Mujhe acha lagha tha ise liye likh diya.Very Sory Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
shahabi 23 Posted August 3, 2010 walaikum salam, welcome in shair o shairi section. keep post your favourite love ones. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Uncleg 2 Posted August 3, 2010 Uncle g sory Mujhe acha lagha tha ise liye likh diya.Very Sory Sorry tou mujhay kehna chahiay, laikin doosray missray mein Muhabbat ki jagah Pyaar likhnay sey correction ho jaati hai. " JO MUJH KO DAIKHAY USAY TUJH SEY PYAAR HO JAAEY" Your choice has been always very fine so I had to write those unpleasant words. I hope you don't mind. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Emaad 56 Posted August 3, 2010 Lolzzz pehlay share per hee tankeed... Mehroo yeh app nay khud likha hai ya kisi ka hai ? Good Start UncleG Use encouraging way also for corection Shair Bay Wazan tu nahi i think.., But that u correct its good. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
kamal 82 Posted August 3, 2010 Sorry tou mujhay kehna chahiay, laikin doosray missray mein Muhabbat ki jagah Pyaar likhnay sey correction ho jaati hai. " JO MUJH KO DAIKHAY USAY TUJH SEY PYAAR HO JAAEY" Your choice has been always very fine so I had to write those unpleasant words. I hope you don't mind. Uncle g Good correction.Main ap ki baat  ka mind kaise kar sakta hoon. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Amaya 3 Posted August 3, 2010 ary kiyon bai...come sis n share..... Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Emaad 56 Posted August 4, 2010 Mehro ap tu medan chor ker bhag gai... Be brave.. app iss topic ko top collection bana sakti hain... Dil chota mat kerain..Best of luck.. u can do it..! Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
shahabi 23 Posted August 4, 2010 tum log comments band karo ge to woh share karen gi apni poetry Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Uncleg 2 Posted August 5, 2010 will not share more My dear Mehro, it was a welcome like that of a first year student. You should have acted like "Aamir Khan" of three ediots and would have thrown a bunch of Ghazals on me. I am really sorry. It must have hurt you. I know if I were at your place, I would have felt very much that way. Now I request you to please carry on with your poetry book and if you don't do that, I will asume that you have not accepted my apology. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Uncleg 2 Posted August 5, 2010 Lolzzz pehlay share per hee tankeed... Mehroo yeh app nay khud likha hai ya kisi ka hai ? Good Start UncleG Use encouraging way also for corection Shair Bay Wazan tu nahi i think.., But that u correct its good. You are absolutely right Emaad. I should not have done that. Itna bhi bay wazan na tha. I hope my apology note in reply to Mehro will do the needful. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
shahabi 23 Posted August 8, 2010 come on mehro and post your loveones poetries..... Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
SimpleRayyan 4 Posted August 8, 2010 ahan...kiya shair likha hai mehroo u ne Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
