babarleo 0 Posted May 30, 2003 "Guum naam " Chalay jaa rahay thay hoo ker guum naam kaheen, Khabar manzil ki na pata hoo jay sham kaheen. Guum naamee ki tareekiyon main dur hai roshan maqam kaheen, Safar buhat lamba hai na maloom utray gi thakan kaheen. Shidat hai dhoop main na hee kam hai tareeki raat main kaheen, Gar punchay gay bhi kay hoo gain gay bay-maqam kaheen. Tuptay sahra, ghanay jungle, bahtay darya hain sath maray kaheen kaheen, Magar nahi miltay nishaa mujhay manzil ka kaheen. Chalay jaa rahay thay hoo ker guum naam kaheen, Khabar manzil ki na pata hoo jay sham kaheen. Babar Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
babarleo 0 Posted June 17, 2003 Thanks fati... your r the only one,.... Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
cooLboY 1 Posted June 17, 2003 Salamz to all :) very nice... Chalay ja rahay thay ho kar gum naam kaheen, Khabar manzil ki na pata hoo jaye sham kaheen. bohat khoom but you still need to improve ur urdu writing. sorry if you mind. :play: cooLboY Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
babarleo 0 Posted June 17, 2003 yes.... it my fav.. lines of this poem,.. too pls tell me where i am on mistake.. either in URDU nor urdu roman text.. u mean Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
sajjal 0 Posted August 24, 2003 wonderful keep it up Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
pretty_sara 0 Posted August 25, 2003 Nice...Keep it up Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
