Qaasim 0 Posted January 27, 2005 Ikrar karne se pehle hi humne udasi ka jam pi liya hai, Jab jana ke unone kab ka kisi aur ka pyar pa liya hai, Hum kyu nahin samajhte ke mohabbat mere naseeb me nahin, Jo aaj phir se rah-e-ishq ko azma liya hai? Pyar nahin to dosti hi sahi, unka saath hi to chahate hai, Par kyu unse bar bar mil kar hum yuh gabrate hai, Chahat ke phool to khilte hai roz hi magar, Hume une dil me ek raaz ki tara chupate hai! Si liye hai hoonth, band kar li hai ankhen, Aise hi aab wafa-e-dosti adat karte hai, Duaon me mangi unki kushi aur salamti, Par khud aab roz gut gut kar marte hai! Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
*jadoo* 0 Posted January 27, 2005 (edited) Jo ho sake to meri rooh main tehleel ho jao, dill-o-nighah ke rishte to akser toot he jaate hain. - Aankhen he kaha kerti hain sab dill ke chope raz, quen tujh ko yaqeen meri nighahoon per naheen he Edited January 27, 2005 by *jadoo* Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
sonoo0 0 Posted January 27, 2005 lolzzzzz Well Jadoo app mhn hoo sachi bataoo jhoot jhoot Well Qasim it is really nice post and bohat say logoo ki zindagi main aisa kuch na kuch hota hay na Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Qaasim 0 Posted January 27, 2005 (edited) lolzzzzzWell Jadoo app mhn hoo sachi bataoo jhoot jhoot Well Qasim it is really nice post and bohat say logoo ki zindagi main aisa kuch na kuch hota hay na thanks Sonoo0 for liking it jadoo yaar nice sher magar plzz is ke first two lines tu explian kar deyna in pm ;) Edited January 27, 2005 by Qaasim Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
*jadoo* 0 Posted January 27, 2005 (edited) jadoo yaar nice sher magar plzz is ke first two lines tu explian kar deyna in pm ;) ok Qasim i will tell tafseel but in PM :P Edited January 27, 2005 by *jadoo* Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
mein_hoon_na 0 Posted January 27, 2005 khud ko khushiyoun sey kinaray na karo khud ko ghum k hawalay na karo koi hai jo tumhay dakh k khush khush rehata hai ,buhat koi hai jo tumhay dakh k ghum main khud jalta hai ,buhat koi hai jisay aapni khushi se bhi bher kay khushi tumkari aazeez hai tu bas usi k liay tum bhi khud ko tamanoun may gheray rakho khud main umeedoun ko cheeray rakho Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
*jadoo* 0 Posted January 28, 2005 AaGaz hai abhi ye anjaam nahi hai Mayusiyon ka iz dil me koi kaam nahi hai Pehchan na sake woh hazaron ki bheer men Itna bhi to ajeeb mera naam nahi hai Jo usko hai dia woh mujhe kyon na mil saka Shikwa hai zindaGi se ye ilzaam nahi hai Roshan na kar sake jise hadd-e-inteha Aisa to is jahan me koi kaam nahi hai Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Qaasim 0 Posted January 28, 2005 very good boht of u :) Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
sonoo0 0 Posted January 28, 2005 :D nice oing u all guyzzzz na keep it up Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Talaash 0 Posted January 29, 2005 very nice poetry ....keep it up Muskara Kay Taal Na Dai ... kisi dardmand kay kam aa kisi dubtay ko uchal day yeh nighahain lutfo karam kisi kamnaseeb per war day main isi khyal say aaj tak usay dil ki baat na keh saka keh wo hai ranj o gam say be khabar kahin muskara Kay taal na day :) Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
MuskanKhan 0 Posted January 29, 2005 :o :o :o yahan tu lagta ha compitation chal raha ha :D Qasim, jadoo ,mhn , talaash goooooddd :) Woh Jo Geet Tum Nay Suna Nahi Mari Umar Bhar Ka Riyaz Tha Meray Dard Ki Thi Woh Dastan Jisay Tum Hansi Main Ura Gaiea Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
*jadoo* 0 Posted January 31, 2005 "Haath chootay bhi to rishtay nahi choota kertay....... waqt ki shaakh say lamhay nahi toota kertay....... jisnay pairon kay nishaan bhi nahi choray peechay...... uss musaafir ka pata bhi nahi poocha kertay....... tu nay awaaz nahi di kabhi murh ker werna....... hum kai saddiyaan tujhay ghoom kay dekha kertay....... beh rahi hay teri jaanib hi zameen pairon ki....... thakh gaye dortay daryaaon ka peecha kertay.... jis ki awaaz main silwat ho nighaahon main shikan...... AEsi tasveer kay tukray nahi jora kertay....... shehed jeenay ka mila kerta hay thora thora...... jaanay walon kay liay dil nahi tora kertay....... lag kay saahil say jo behta hay usay behnay do...... aisay darya ka kabhi rukh nahi mora kertay....... haath chootay bhi tu rishtay nahi choota kertay....... Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Qaasim 0 Posted January 31, 2005 nice talaash :flower: and jadoo Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Qaasim 0 Posted January 31, 2005 (edited) Zindgi mein to tumhari aa na sake, ab khwaabon mein chale aate hain Tum laakh nazrein pher lo sanam, hum phir bhi chale aate hain Kahne ko to tum bhul chuki thi, phir bhi anjaane mein pukarti ho Tum kabhi bhuli nahin thi, sirf jaankar anjaane mein pukarti ho Mann to mann hai, mann ko kya kahena Hum aayenge sapno mein, sapno ko kya kahena Hum bewafa nahin, tum paas aao ya na aao, hum mar ke bhi maray nahin, humari yaadon ko gale se lagao......!! Edited January 31, 2005 by Qaasim Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Qaasim 0 Posted January 31, 2005 thanks jadoo dear khachi deewar hoon tokar na lagana mujhko, apni nnazro mein basakar na girana mujhko, tumko ankhon mein tasveer ki tarha rakhta hoon, dil mein dhadkan ki tarha tum bhi basana mujhko, baat karne mein jo mushkil ho tumhe mehfil mein, mein samajh jaonga nazro se batana mujhko, wada utna hi karo jitna nibha sakti ho, khwab pure jo na ho woh na dikhana mujhko, apne rishtey ki nazakat ka baram rakhlene, MEIN TO ASHIQUE HOON DEEWANA NA BANA DENA MUJHKO....... Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
*jadoo* 0 Posted February 7, 2005 Teri talaash main niklay thay hum haath maltay huay Rula diya aaj humain suraj ne dhaltay huay Utaar Zehan Ke Gaaron Main Roshni-e-Mabood Zamana Guzar gaya Seenon main dard Paltay Huay Kisi ghata se kaho, Hum ko ab utha le jaaye Ke Umer Beet gayee hum ko jaltay huay Yahan to kuch bhi nahin hai siwaye kaanton ke Kahan tak aagaye hum is raastay per chaltay huay Sikha rahi hai zamanay ko zindagi ka chalan Guzarti hai rail Dewane, Patrian badaltay huay. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
*jadoo* 0 Posted February 8, 2005 Milnay chalay aao sabhi udaas mosam hain kabhi milnay chalay aao dukhon main hum to gum sum hain kabhi milnay chalay aao tumharay baad kesi ronaqain is dil ki nagri main sabhi charagh madham hain kabhi milnay chalay aao tumharay paas to hon gi zamanay bher ki sab khushian hamaray paas to bus gham hain kabhi milnay chalay aao tumhari yaad ab dil ko bohat taklif deti hai nigahain bhi to purnam hain kabhi milnay chalay aao lagay hain zakham kitnay bay baha dil pay mohabbat main tumharay lafz merham hain kabhi milnay chalay aao bohat hamderd hain yun to hamaray bhi zamanay main mager phir bhi bohat kam hain kabhi milnay chalay aao yeh pather hi na ho jaain nigahain dekhtay rasta k khushian bhi to berham hain kabhi milnay chalay aao na janay kab yeh larka haar day saanson ki bazi ko isay lahaq tere gham hain kabhi milnay chlay aao Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Qaasim 0 Posted February 22, 2005 Nazare churate churate kab nazare mil gayi, Pata na chala. Dil sambhalte sambhalte kab dil kho gaya, Pata na chala. Aapase milte milte kab juda ho gaye, Pata na chala. Muskan aate aate kab aansu aa gaye, Pata na chala. Hamare aate aate kab der ho gayi, Pata na chala. Khwab dekhate dekhate kab aankhe khul gayi, Pata na chala. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Syra 0 Posted February 23, 2005 bahut achay but zara yah gahur say suno...yah Poem kitni pyari hai.......I love this poem.......... bahut khoobsorat hai........aik aik lafz dil mein utarta hai............... ITNA MAALOOM HAI Apney bister pe buhut dair se mein neem daraz Sochti thi ke woh iss waqt kahan par ho gaa? Mein yahan hoon magar uss koocha-e-rang-o-boo mein. Roz ki tarha say woh aaj bhi aya ho gaa Aur jab uss ne wahan mujh ko naa paya ho gaa........... He is asking: Aap ko ilm hay,woh aaj nahin aai hain? Meri har dost se uss ne yahi poocha hogaa Kiyoon nahin aai woh? Kiya baat hui hay aakhir? Khud iss baat par so baar woh uljha ho gaa Kal woh aaiey gee tu mein uss se nahin boloon gaa Aap hi aap kai baar who rootha ho gaa Woh nahin hay tu bulandi ka safar kitna kathin Seerhiyaan charhtey huey uss ne socha ho gaa Rahdaari mein, harey lawn mein,phoolon ke qareeb Uss ne har simt mujhey aan ke dhoondha ho gaa Naam bhooley se jo mera kahin aya ho gaa Ghair mehsoos tareeqey se woh chonka ho gaa Aik jumley ko kai baar sunaya ho gaa Baat kartey huey sau baar woh bhoola ho gaa Yeh jo larki nai(new) aai haikahin woh to nahin? Uss ne har chehra yahi soch ke dekha ho gaa Jaan-e-mehfil hai magar aaj faqat merey baghair Hai kiss darja wohi bazm mein tanha ho gaa Kabhi sannaton se wehshat jo hui ho gee ussey Uss ne besakhta phir mujh ko pukaara ho gaa Chaltey chaltey koi maanoos si aahat paakar Doston ko bhi kissi uzr se roka ho gaa Yaad kar ke mujhey num ho gai hon gee palkein aankh mein par gaya kuch keh ke yeh tala ho gaa aur ghabra ke kitaabon mein jo lee ho gee panah har satr mein mera chehra ubher aya ho gaa jab mili ho gee ussey meri alaalat ki khabar uss ne aahista se deewar ko thama ho gaa ittifaqan mujhey uss shaam meri dost mili mein ne poocha ke ,suno,aaiey they woh? Kaisey thay? USS ne aik lamhey ko dekha mujhey aur phir hans dee uss hansi mein to who talkhi thi ke uss se agey kiya kaha uss ne..mujhey yaad nahin hai laiken itna maaloom hay.................... itna maaloom hay "khawabon ka bharam toot gaya" (Parveen Shakir) achi hai na :) but khawabun ka bharam toot gaya :( Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
**LaLa_1** 0 Posted February 23, 2005 Aap ko ilm hay,woh aaj nahin aai hain?Meri har dost se uss ne yahi poocha hogaa Kiyoon nahin aai woh? Kiya baat hui hay aakhir? Khud iss baat par so baar woh uljha ho gaa Kal woh aaiey gee tu mein uss se nahin boloon gaa Aap hi aap kai baar who rootha ho gaa Woh nahin hay tu bulandi ka safar kitna kathin Seerhiyaan charhtey huey uss ne socha ho gaa Rahdaari mein, harey lawn mein,phoolon ke qareeb Uss ne har simt mujhey aan ke dhoondha ho gaa Naam bhooley se jo mera kahin aya ho gaa Ghair mehsoos tareeqey se woh chonka ho gaa Aik jumley ko kai baar sunaya ho gaa Baat kartey huey sau baar woh bhoola ho gaa Yeh jo larki nai(new) aai hai…kahin woh to nahin? Uss ne har chehra yahi soch ke dekha ho gaa Jaan-e-mehfil hai magar aaj faqat merey baghair Hai kiss darja wohi bazm mein tanha ho gaa Kabhi sannaton se wehshat jo hui ho gee ussey Uss ne besakhta phir mujh ko pukaara ho gaa Chaltey chaltey koi maanoos si aahat paakar Doston ko bhi kissi uzr se roka ho gaa Yaad kar ke mujhey num ho gai hon gee palkein aankh mein par gaya kuch keh ke yeh tala ho gaa aur ghabra ke kitaabon mein jo lee ho gee panah har satr mein mera chehra ubher aya ho gaa jab mili ho gee ussey meri alaalat ki khabar uss ne aahista se deewar ko thama ho gaa bohot acchi hai magar Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Syra 0 Posted February 23, 2005 I know Lala :( its Gr8 :( Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
