rukh 25 Posted March 18, 2005 chehray pe gard pairoon main safar hay k nahi hay tu daikh k meri manzil pe nazar hay k nahi hay! jaa apnay liye dhoond lay kisi ehl-e-mahal ko na janay meri qismat main ghar hay k nahi hay teray pas hain abhi aur dard to wo bhee mujhay day na pooch k mujh main aur sabar hay k nahi hay meri neendain to mar chuki hain rat-jagoon kay haath teray khuaaboon ko bhee koi aesa dar hay k nahi hay! ye soch k ley aya hoon main jangal say kuch jugnoo najanay ab qismat main sahar hay k nahi hay tu dekh mera shaoq, meri shikastoon ko na dekh pairon taley teray ghar ki dagar hay k nahi hay! maanga hay tujhay Rub say k ik zid si hay kub say dekhoon to meri duaoon main asar hay k nahi hay! Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
mein_hoon_na 0 Posted March 18, 2005 chehray pe gard pairoon main safar hay k nahi hay tu daikh k meri manzil pe nazar hay k nahi hay! jaa apnay liye dhoond lay kisi ehl-e-mahal ko na janay meri qismat main ghar hay k nahi hay teray pas hain abhi aur dard to wo bhee mujhay day na pooch k mujh main aur sabar hay k nahi hay meri neendain to mar chuki hain rat-jagoon kay haath teray khuaaboon ko bhee koi aesa dar hay k nahi hay! ye soch k ley aya hoon main jangal say kuch jugnoo najanay ab qismat main sahar hay k nahi hay tu dekh mera shaoq, meri shikastoon ko na dekh pairon taley teray ghar ki dagar hay k nahi hay! maanga hay tujhay Rub say k ik zid si hay kub say dekhoon to meri duaoon main asar hay k nahi hay! VERY NICE RUKH KI POST Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Talaash 0 Posted March 18, 2005 veryyyyyyyyyyyyyy nice post rukh sis uski mohabbaton ka tareeka kuch aur hai kehta wo mujh say aur hai kerta kuch aur hai jo us pay betti hai wo maloom hai mujhy jab us say poochti hoon batata kuch aur hai :( Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
**LaLa_1** 0 Posted March 19, 2005 ye soch k ley aya hoon main jangal say kuch jugnoo najanay ab qismat main sahar hay k nahi hay tu dekh mera shaoq, meri shikastoon ko na dekh pairon taley teray ghar ki dagar hay k nahi hay! maanga hay tujhay Rub say k ik zid si hay kub say dekhoon to meri duaoon main asar hay k nahi hay! Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Hayia 0 Posted March 20, 2005 chehray pe gard pairoon main safar hay k nahi hay tu daikh k meri manzil pe nazar hay k nahi hay! jaa apnay liye dhoond lay kisi ehl-e-mahal ko na janay meri qismat main ghar hay k nahi hay teray pas hain abhi aur dard to wo bhee mujhay day na pooch k mujh main aur sabar hay k nahi hay meri neendain to mar chuki hain rat-jagoon kay haath teray khuaaboon ko bhee koi aesa dar hay k nahi hay! ye soch k ley aya hoon main jangal say kuch jugnoo najanay ab qismat main sahar hay k nahi hay tu dekh mera shaoq, meri shikastoon ko na dekh pairon taley teray ghar ki dagar hay k nahi hay! maanga hay tujhay Rub say k ik zid si hay kub say dekhoon to meri duaoon main asar hay k nahi hay! VERY NICE DEAR DUAOONMAIN ASAR HAI KA NAHI... VERY NICE SORY FOR MY LATE REPLY HAM BAHUT LAZYHAIN IS LAIY ANYWAY....GOD GOING Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
rukh 25 Posted March 21, 2005 thanx to All :) talash > nice one us nai kaha mujh sai tumhain kitna payar hai ? mene kaha sitaroon ka koi shumar hai ! us nai kaha kon tumhain hai bohat aziz ? mene kaha dil pey jisai ikhtyar hai us nay kaha kon sa tuhafa hai mun pasand? mene kaha kai woh shaam jo ab tuk udhar hai us nay kaha khizan main mulaqat ka jawaz? mene kaha qurb ka mutlub bahar hai us nay kaha sainkroon ghum zindge main hain mene kaha ghum nahi ,jub ghumgusar hai us nay kaha sath kahan tuk nibhao gai ? mene kaha jitnee sansoon ki taar hay us nay k mujhay yaqeen aye kis terha mene kaha nam mere aitbar hai ! Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
mansoor 0 Posted March 21, 2005 hmm Nice shairzz RUKH :D waisay ur 1st poem reminds me one of of my old syllabus poem .. shayd in grade 6 or 7 .... i think it was by ameer menaiii MAtlaa younn thaaa Abb sooccchh merry dost Khuda hai kay nahi hai " :D Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Asim 0 Posted March 22, 2005 nice shairi rukh... looking for more from u Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Niya 0 Posted March 22, 2005 Kah raha hai shor e darya se samandar ka sakoot jitna jiska zarf hai utna hi woh khamosh hai..... Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Hayia 0 Posted March 22, 2005 (edited) chehray pe gard pairoon main safar hay k nahi hay tu daikh k meri manzil pe nazar hay k nahi hay! jaa apnay liye dhoond lay kisi ehl-e-mahal ko na janay meri qismat main ghar hay k nahi hay teray pas hain abhi aur dard to wo bhee mujhay day na pooch k mujh main aur sabar hay k nahi hay meri neendain to mar chuki hain rat-jagoon kay haath teray khuaaboon ko bhee koi aesa dar hay k nahi hay! ye soch k ley aya hoon main jangal say kuch jugnoo najanay ab qismat main sahar hay k nahi hay tu dekh mera shaoq, meri shikastoon ko na dekh pairon taley teray ghar ki dagar hay k nahi hay! maanga hay tujhay Rub say k ik zid si hay kub say dekhoon to meri duaoon main asar hay k nahi hay! WAH RUKH JI SARY NO TU APP LAY GIEN NA... HAM K AY AKRIN...REALY IT SOOPERB ....KEEP IT UPPPP Edited March 22, 2005 by Hayia Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Aaman_Eman 0 Posted March 23, 2005 Rukh main kiya kahoon..believe me appreciative words nahi mill rahay :( really Superb buht mature poetry hai. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
rukh 25 Posted March 25, 2005 thanx to all amman & haiya its not mine creativity yeh to pata nahi kis nay likha hei mainy to bus select ke hay janab ..app nay itne tareef ker dee khamkha :D Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
rukh 25 Posted March 25, 2005 ab jo jo is poem ko perhay to woh yeh zaror bataye kay us k khiyal main is poem main NUQTA say kia murad hai waitting Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Aaman_Eman 0 Posted March 25, 2005 (edited) Rukh chalein koi baat nahi hai na..yeh choice to aap ke hai na..tou bas hum nai aap kai acchay taste ko appreciate kiya hai :) well rukh according to my opinion the Nuqata means neglect one's own self.."khoodi" , "aana" ko khatam kerna Nuqta..yeni Na..apni zaat ke nafi kerna..jab hum apni "main" ko khatam ker dein gay or wo kerin gay jo Hamara Allah chahata hai tou es kai bad hum loogon ke perwa choor ker bas oos ko razi kernay ke koshish kerin gay...wesai be baqool Baba Bulleh Shah na main momen wich maseeta na main pakka wich paleeta na main Mosa na Feraoon kee jana main kon kee jana main kon well not sure ..looking others ;) Edited March 25, 2005 by AAMAN_EMAN Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
sanum 0 Posted March 25, 2005 Ek question mark wich gul mokdi hay??????? iniiiiiiiiiii okhi poetry mano kakh samajh nahi aae Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Aaman_Eman 0 Posted March 26, 2005 :P oOO Miss G tusee samjan walay bano..main tai Rukh kis liyee hain wahan..esi tawano aik aik line translate ker k deyaa gein :D Wesai Sanum yeh Bulleh Shah ka kalam hai jo k bas........ ko samaj aata hai :P just jokin ..don't mind Ok Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
mansoor 0 Posted March 27, 2005 Rukh yaa app nay Kia Post kar dia ? main idhar ziada nahi likhaoon gaa Sirf aik line main hee explain karoon ga Nuqtaa darasl Wahdat ul wajoott Ka Istaraa hai Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
rukh 25 Posted March 28, 2005 amman > haan app ka mutlub ik terha saye sahee ..lakin main yeh pochna chah rahee the kay NUQTA ka lafz kis nisbat say aya hay sanum > lolz itna preshan na hoon hum kis ley hain app kay khadim :D mansoor> right ..meray bhi yahe khiyal tha kay nuqta jis terha AIK hay to is ki nisabt-e-mazaje he ho gee ALLAH say ! well thanx for telling :) Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
mansoor 0 Posted March 31, 2005 ahhhhhh :( Rukh .. u Should'nt had post this Poem .... Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
rukh 25 Posted April 1, 2005 kion ? kia ho gya itne ache poem to hay ! Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
