Shabo 0 Posted September 7, 2003 Salaaaaam Friends :hi: WOW itni achi aur pyari shairi paish ki hai aap SAB ney.. it was simply wonderful to read... wah ji wah bohot khoob!! This is a little something from me; Khayal ko kisi ki AAS rehti hai Nigah ko kisi surat ki PYAS rehti hai Teray bin kisi cheez ki kami tho nahi Magar teray bin tabiyat UDAS rehti hai... Sx Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
umair.zm 0 Posted September 7, 2003 salam all of u guyzz....... thanx nadan jie.......arey shabnam jie app.......app ko dekh kar hum ko aesa lagha jesey coolyar community ko nayeen zindaghee mil gayeee aur merey moderator RAB se manghoo main kya hum ko sarey jahan kie khushie mil gayee:).........dis for juss to welcome u here............ ab shairon ke beech akar shaire na kroon gha to bura man jayein ghe is liye arz hia...... Kuch Loog Samandar Hoty Hain............ "Kuch loog samandar hotay hain... chup chap say andar hotay hain.. aankhon main wafa k mote aur senay main muhabbat rakhtay hain khushyoon k peyambur hotay hain kuch loog samandar hote hain. jab mann ke agg sulagte haii.. wo dehmay dehmay jalte hain.... khamosh wafa ke rahoon per chup chap wo tanha chalte hain auroon k liay humdam howain... per khud per sitam gar hote hain kuch loog samander hotay hain..... chup chap say andar hotay hain.. ok bye tc all ALLAH HAFIZ Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
adilkhan 0 Posted September 8, 2003 salam all frindes:hi: zindagi muzmir hai teri shoKhi-e-tai'hreer meN taab-e-goyaai se jumbish hai lab-e-tasveer meN ham_chuN nai az nestaan-e-Khud hikaayat mi-kunam bishnau ai gul! az judaai_haa shikaayat mi-kunam.r_s Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
r_s_ 0 Posted September 8, 2003 salam all frindes :hi: Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Shabo 0 Posted September 8, 2003 arey shabnam jie app.......app ko dekh kar hum ko aesa lagha jesey coolyar community ko nayeen zindaghee mil gayeee aur merey moderator RAB se manghoo main kya hum ko sarey jahan kie khushie mil gayee:).........dis for juss to welcome u here............ Salaam Umair :hi: Izat afzaiee ka behad shukriya ji.. u noted my absence wow I'm impressed!! Shairi bhi bohot khoob paish ki hai aap ney.. it's really very nice thanks :D This is from me; Ussey ehsaas dilaieyn to milta hee nahi Wo ajnabi jo roz mila karta tha Ab mujh sey har bat k mainey puchtha hai Jo kabhi meri soch ki tehreer likha karta tha! Nice shairi by Adil.. :) :hi: Hi r_s Sx Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
r_s_ 0 Posted September 8, 2003 salam.. yaad tari mujhay tanha nahi rahnay dati..warna dunia to kahi ka rahnanahi daty..khud ko jo apna sahara ho to phir yah dunia..omar bhar koi sahara nahi rahnadaty..hum ha woh gardisha ayam ka maray hoa loag..zindagi jin ko tumhara nahi rahnay daty..kis say shikwa karo khud mari tabiyatab Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
asimahmed 0 Posted September 9, 2003 Assalam O' Alaikum, Nice postings friends... Tu kahin bhi rahe sar pe tere ilzaam to hai tere haathon ki lakiiron mein mera naam to hai Mujhko tu apnaa bana ya na bana teri Khushi. tu zamaane mein mere naam se badnaam to hai Mere hisse mein koi jaam na aayaa na sahi teri mehfil mein mere naam koi shaam to hai Dekh kar log mujhe naam tera lete hain is pe main Khush hoon muhabbat ka ye anjaam to hai Woh sitamagar hi sahi dekh ke usko "Sabir" shukr is dil-e-bimaar ko aaraam to hai Take Care Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Shabo 0 Posted September 9, 2003 Wah wah, lovely poetry by r_s and Asim baad muddat unhein dekh kar yoon lagaa jaisey betaab dil ko qaraar a gaya arzuon k gul muskuraney lagey jaisey gulshan mey jaan-e-bahaar aa gaya tashnaa nazrein mileen shokh nazron sey jab mai barasane lagi jaam bharaney laga saqiyaa aaj teri zaroorat nahi bin piyey bin pilaayey Khumaar aa gaya raat sone lagi subah honay lagi shamaa bujhney lagi dil machalney lagey waqt ki roshni mey nahaaiee huiee zindagi pe ajab saa nikhaar aa gaya har taraf mastiyaan har taraf dilkashi muskuratey dilon mey Khushi hi Khushi kitna chaaha magar phir bhi utth na saka teri mehfil mey jo ik baar aa gaya Sx Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
asimahmed 0 Posted September 9, 2003 Hi, Thanks Shabo... Badanaam mere pyaar kaa afsana hua hai deewane bhi kahte hain ki deewana hua hai Rishta tha tabhi tou kisi be-dard ne todaa apnaa tha tabhi tou koi be-gaanaa hua hai Baadal ki tarah aake baras jaaiye who ik din dil aap ke hote huye viraana hua hai Bajte hain Khayaalon mein teri yaad ke ghunghroo kuch din se mera ghar bhi pari-Khaanaa hua hai Mausam ne banaya hai nigaahon ko sharaabi jis phool ko dekhun wahi paimana hoa hai Bye Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
umair.zm 0 Posted September 9, 2003 salam all of u guyzzz....... thanx shabnam jie......wesey ap ko koie shak tha kya k app ko hum ne miss naihen kya ho gha:p........ anywaz nice posting shabnam,asim and r_s........coool poetries yar........ab man kuch arz karta hoon;)...... ''''Izhare Pyar'''' "Hum unse karte hain pyar per jatana nahi ata sochta hoon apna hale dil unko sonaoo per na hojaye woh mujhse khafa yeh daar hai sata ta aj jo apna hale dil likh dala khat me un ko khat phar ker woh kuch is tarhan se bole izhare pyar keliyee kaghaz ka sahara nahi liya jata or yeh keh ker chal diyee jaoo tumhe pyar karna nahi ata... bas yaro ab app hie batao izhar e pyaar kese kya jaye;)..............:) ok bye tc all ALLAH HAFIZ Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
asimahmed 0 Posted September 9, 2003 Thanks Umair and nice posting...but don't worry you will learn one day. :inlove: Apne haathon se yun chehre ko chhupaate kyon ho mujh se sharmaate ho tou saamne aate kyon ho Tum kabhi meri tarah kar bhi lo ikraar-e-vafa pyaar karte ho tou phir pyaar chupaate kyon ho Ashk aankhon mein meri dekh ke rote kyon ho dil bhar aataa hai tou phir dil ko dukhaate kyon ho In se vaabastaa hai jab mera muqaddar phir tum mere shaanon se ye zulf hatate kyon ho Roz mar mar ke mujhe jeene ko kahte kyon ho milne aate ho to phir laut ke jaate kyon ho Bye Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Gr8wajiha 0 Posted September 9, 2003 hmm... Beautiful Poem Shab its my fav one ;) well, something frm me... Yehi Wafaa ka silaah hai, to koi baat nahi Yeh dard tum ne diya hai, to koi baat nahi Yehi bohot hai ke tum dekhte ho sahil se Safeena doob raha hai, to koi baat nahi Rakha tha aashiyana-e-dil main chuhpa ke tumko Woh ghar tumne chor diya hai to koi baat nahi Tum hi ne aayena-e-dil mera banaya tha Tum hi ne tor diya hai to koi baat nahi Kise majaal hai, kahe koi mujh ko deewana Agar yeh tumne kaha hai to koi baat nahi charay pe meray zulf ko bikhraoo kisi din kiya roz garajtay ho barass jaoo kisi din Khezan Kay Phool Ki Tarha Bekhar Gaya Koi Tujhay Khabar Na Hoi aurr Mar Gaya Koi :( :( :( Regards; Wajiha Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Gr8wajiha 0 Posted September 9, 2003 Apne haathon se yun chehre ko chhupaate kyon homujh se sharmaate ho tou saamne aate kyon ho Tum kabhi meri tarah kar bhi lo ikraar-e-vafa pyaar karte ho tou phir pyaar chupaate kyon ho nice poem Asim I liked the whole but these 2 shairs has touched my heart ;) bbye W.K. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
umair.zm 0 Posted September 9, 2003 nice posting asim.......thanx for comments..... now ma turn:) KHAYAL AAYA " Jab mAi nE socHa ke pyar ko kya naam doon tOu bass Zindagi ka khayal aaya, Jab mai ne socha ke zindagi ko kya naam doon tu Tumhara hi khayal aaya, jab mai ne socha ke dil ko kya naam doon tu Dillagi ka khayal aaya, jab mai socha ke dosti ko kya naam doon tu Dil ki khushi ka khayal aaya, jab mai ne socha ke duniya ko kya naam doon tu Sach aur Jhoot ka khayal aaya, jab mai soch ke sakhoon ko kya naam doon tu Ghar ka khayal aaya, jab mai ne socha ke Allah ki rehmaat ko kya naam doon tu Maa ,Baap ka hi khayal aaya, jab mai ne socha ke muhabaat ko kya naam doon tu app ka khayal aaya, ok bye tc all ALLAH HAFIZ Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
NaDaN 0 Posted September 9, 2003 Very Nice Shabo..! And Wow Asim! :) Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
umair.zm 0 Posted September 9, 2003 salam all of u guyzz...... sahie hia nadan jie hamaree to koie tareef hie nahien kie:(....nice posting wajihaa... Phir Yun Howa Tanha Raat Dhali "Zindagi ki veeraan raahon mein Dil ki sisaktee aahon mein Kaali daraowni raaton mein Honton pay ruki un-kahi baaton mein Bhatak rahi thi kab sey tanha Ristay naasoor liyey dil mein pinha Nazar dhoondh rahi thi haseen saaton ko Rooh Pyaasi thi rimjhim barsaaton ko Phir yun howa Tanha raat dhalee meri Dil ki murjhaaei kali khili meri Woh mila kuch iss adaa sey mujhay Badal ko barkha jaisey choo jaaye Lehar saahil pay jaisey khud ko samo jaaye Banjar zameen pay koi beej bo jaaye Badlee ki aghosh mein chandaa.. jaisey so jaaye Ishq ki mazboot panaahon mein.. husn jaisey kho jaaye Woh mila kuch iss adaa sey mujhay Palkon mein chupay aansu.. taaron sey jhilmila uthay Lamhay dard bharay.. pyar sey khilkhilaa uthay Woh mila kuch is adaa sey mujhay Honton pay merey muskaan bikhar gayi Siyaah hotay chehray ki rangat.. dekhtay hi dekhtay nikhar gayi Yun pyar sey choowa usnay mujhay Dil ki woh barhti veerani Jaanay Kidher gayi Usee ki khushbu maan mein basi hai Usee kay pyar sey duniya meri saji hai Usee ki chahat dil mein diye ki surat jali hai Usee kay aanay sey tau maut ki... ye ghari tali hai ok bye tc all ALLAH HAFIZ Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Shabo 0 Posted September 9, 2003 Rakha tha aashiyana-e-dil main chuhpa ke tumko Woh ghar tumne chor diya hai to koi baat nahi Salaam :hi: Thanks for the compliments Wajiha ;) I loved ur contribution too especially this couplet! Sx Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Shabo 0 Posted September 9, 2003 Rishta tha tabhi tou kisi be-dard ne todaa apnaa tha tabhi tou koi be-gaanaa hua hai Wah wah, Asim bohot khoob Sx Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Shabo 0 Posted September 9, 2003 Woh mila kuch iss adaa sey mujhay Palkon mein chupay aansu.. taaron sey jhilmila uthay Lamhay dard bharay.. pyar sey khilkhilaa uthay Salaam Umair :hi: WOW fantastic shairi.. I really like this one ;) Wah ji kya kehnay aap k.. aap k liay tho tareef hee tareef hai pehley to apney dil ki razaa jaan jaiyey phir jo nigaah-e-yaar kahey maan jaiyey pehley mizaaj-e-raahaguzar jaan jaiyey phir gard-e-raah jo bhi kahey maan jaiyey kuch kah rahi hai aap ke seeney ki dharkaney meri sunein to dil ka kahaa maan jaiyey ik dhuup si jami hai nigaahon k aas paas ye aap hain to aap pe qurbaan jaiyey shayad hazoor se koiee nisbat hamein bhi ho aankhon mey jhaank kar hamein pehchaan jaiyey Sx Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
r_s_ 0 Posted September 10, 2003 salam all frindes. Rah-e-talab mey kon kisee ka apney bhee bey ganey hain Chand sey mukhrey rashk-e-ghazalan sab janey pehchaney hain Tanhai see tanhai hai,kaesey kanhain,kaesey samjhain Chashm-o-lab-o-rukhsar kee teh mey roohon key weeraney hain Ufff!yeh talash-e-husn-o-haqeeqat kis ja thehrain,jain kanhan Sehen-e-chaman mey phool khiley hain,sehra mey deewaney hain Ham ko sahaarey kia raas aein,apna sahaara hain ham aap Khud hee sehraa khud hee deewaney shama-e-nafs parwaney hain Bil akher thak haar key yaro!ham ney bhee tasleem kia! Apnee zaat sey Ishq hai sacha baki sab afsaney hain.r_s_ Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
r_s_ 0 Posted September 10, 2003 App ki yaad aye to dil kiy kary jo dil dil ko jalaye to dil kiya kary shikwa bhi app say shikayat bhi app say gussa bhi app say Muhabbat bhi app say App kay bin jiya ab na jaye to dil kiya kary app ki yaad aye to dil kiy kary jo dil dil ko jalaye to dil kiya kary. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
asimahmed 0 Posted September 10, 2003 Thanks Wajiha, Nadan, Umair and Shabo. Aankh se door na ho, dil se utar jaye ga. waqt ka kiya hai, guzarta hai guzar jaye ga itna manoos na ho khilwat-e-ghum se apni tu kabhi khud ko bhe dekhe ga tu dar jaye ga tum sar-e-rah wafa dekhte reh jao gay aur woh bam-e-rafaqat se utar jaye ga zindagi tere ata hai tu yeh jaanay wala tere bakhshish tere dehleez pay dhar jaye ga dobte dobte kashte ko uchala dai doon mein nahi, koi tu sahil pay utar jaye ga zabt lazim hai magar dukh hai qayamat ka 'Faraz' zalim ab ke bhe na roye ga tu marr jaye ga. Take Care zabt lazim hai magar dukh hai qayamat ka 'Faraz'zalim ab ke bhe na roye ga tu marr jaye ga. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
umair.zm 0 Posted September 10, 2003 salam all of u guyzzz...... thanx shabnam jie:)kisee ne to tareef kie:(........well nice shabnam jie.......r_s n asim nice effort u guyzzz.....ab main kuch arz karta hoon:) samander kinaray "Rait Per Likh Ker Mera naam Mitaya na karo Aankh Such Bolti hay Pyar Chupaya na karo Log Har Baat Ka Afsana Bana Detay Hein Sub Ko Haalaat Kee Rudad Sunaya na karo ok bye tc all ALLAH HAFIZ Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
r_s_ 0 Posted September 10, 2003 salam. ye udaas udaas se baam-o-dar ye ujar ujar si rah guzar chalo hum nahi na sahi nagar sare koye yaar koi to ho.. r_s Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
r_s_ 0 Posted September 10, 2003 [/b]1.Wo Larhey tere liye aur Tu azaad rahe kHoob nukta hai yeh Allah kare yaad rahe 2.ye jo ham hijr meiN deewaar-o-dar ko dekhte haiN kabhee saba ko kabhee naamaabar ko dekhte haiN Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
