mein_hoon_na 0 Posted April 15, 2005 Assalam-o-Alikum all Topic k naam se hi samajh gaein hoon gay app log yahan APP logo nay kerna yeh hai k hmmmmmm hmmmm shair k last word se shair start kerna na hai aur plz plz plz off topic post na kerein :P comments shair likhny k baad aik y do lines k Allowed hain So here's my side Tez hai Waqat ki Raftaar bohat Aur Bohat thori si fursat hai mujhay Ab na woh Josh-e-Tammanna baaqi Ab na woh Ishq ki Wehshat hai mujhay Last Word hai .......... Y Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
junaidrauf 0 Posted April 15, 2005 Yeh or Baat k woh Lab thy Phool se Nazuk Koi Na Sah Saky Lahja Karakht aissa tha Last Word ALIF Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
mein_hoon_na 0 Posted April 15, 2005 (edited) Ajab rangon main guzri hai zindagi apni dilom pe raj kiya phir bhi pyar ko tarse Next Word is .........E Edited April 15, 2005 by mein_hoon_na Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Talaash 0 Posted April 16, 2005 Eik din baharon kay phool murjaha jay gay Jab bholay say kabhi hum yaad aain gay Ehsas ho ga tumhay humari dosti ka Jab duur bohot duur, hum tum say chaly jay gay Next word is "Y" :) Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
mein_hoon_na 0 Posted April 16, 2005 Yeh dhoop kinaray shaam dhalay Miltey hein donon waqt jahan Jo raat na din ,jo aaj na kal Pal bhar ko amar , pal bhar ko dhuaan! Next Word .........N Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Aaman_Eman 0 Posted April 16, 2005 mnh>> neend sai mera taluq hee nahi bersoon sai khwaab aaker meri chat per kion tehaltay hain main na jugnoo hoon na deya, na koi tara roshni walay phir meray naam sai kion jeltay hain Next word again..N Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
junaidrauf 0 Posted April 16, 2005 Na ji Bhar k dekha na kuch baat ki Bari Arzoo thi Mulaqat ki Last Word I Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
khurshid4lov 0 Posted April 16, 2005 IN BADALOUN SEH KEH DO KAHEIN AUR JAH KEH BARSEIN WOOH AAH RAHEY HEIN MILNEY KAHEIN ANCHAL NA BEEGH JAHEYNEXT IS "Y" Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Qaasim 0 Posted April 16, 2005 Yahan kisi ko hasb-e-arzoo na mila kisi ko hum na mile aur humko tu na mila A Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
khurshid4lov 0 Posted April 16, 2005 Aahya he tha khayal keh aankhein chahlak parein aansoo kissi ki yaad keh kitney qareeb thee Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
MuskanKhan 0 Posted April 16, 2005 Eik khawab jo manjhdhar main kub say ghira ha is khawab ko sahil na mila ab kay baras bhi barsoon say jhalusti hwee tanhai ka mousam bhoolay na meray ghar ka pata ab kay baras bhi Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Qaasim 0 Posted April 16, 2005 (edited) IS QADAR PYAR SE TUMKO CHAHATE HAIN HUM, JAB BHI TUMKO DEKHTE HAIN SAB BHOOL JATE HAIN HUM Edited April 16, 2005 by Qaasim Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
MuskanKhan 0 Posted April 16, 2005 Main Khud Zameen Main Hoon Magar Zarf Aasman Ka Ha Kay Toot Kar Bhi Mera Hosla Chatan Ka Ha Bura Na Maan Meray Hurf Hurf Zahan Sahi Main Kia Karoon Yahi Zaika Zaban Ka Ha Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
khurshid4lov 0 Posted April 16, 2005 ISH MEH QESMAT KI KHATAAH HAI NA ZAMANEY KA QASOOR GHAM TUH INSSAN KEH JENEY KI SAZAA HOTEY HEIN Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
mein_hoon_na 0 Posted April 16, 2005 PLZ PLZ MEMBERS LAST WORD DEKHEIN Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
charming 0 Posted April 17, 2005 yeh silsila-e-gerdishay paymana badal jaye tu perdah otha day to tarbkhana badal jaye aa lala-e-sahra ki taraf wadi-e-gul say momkin hai teray husan ka paymana badal jaye ab tak tu samaya hai nigahoon mein tera husan kia ho jo meray zooq ka paymana badal jaye yeh bazam-e-jahan kia hia tera husan-e-tajali tu perda gira day tu parikhana badal jaye kaisa mhn ;) hope u like it now ...its again Y so take care Bye Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
sonoo0 0 Posted April 17, 2005 (edited) no y :P mara jis word say dil kara gamain shair likhoo Gi theek hay na kashoo bhai :D Well mujay y say shair mil giya yaadon main hamari kabhi woh bhi khoye honge, Khuli aankhon se kabhi woh bhi soye honge, Mana hasna hai ada gum chupane ki, par haste-haste kabhi woh bhi roye honge.....! ...................................... Edited April 17, 2005 by sonoo0 Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
charming 0 Posted April 17, 2005 yaad ker apni jafaoon ka tasalsul ay dost bhool jatujhko khabi apna kaha tha mein nay zist-e-aainakhana pay zara gor tu ker teri tasveer thi aur rang bhara tha mein nay Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
sonoo0 0 Posted April 17, 2005 (edited) Charming :anry: main nay y say shair suna diya tha :D so app nay e say bana tha :( and u made shair with Y Yeh shohrat bhi le lo Yeh doulat bhi le lo Bhaley cheen lo...... mujh se meri Jawaani Magar mujh ko lauta do , Bachpan ka saawan, Woh Kaaghaz Ki kashti, woh Baarish ka Paani Edited April 17, 2005 by sonoo0 Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
MuskanKhan 0 Posted April 17, 2005 Insha jee ya aur nagar ha is basti ki reet naiee Sub ki apni apni aankhain sub ka apna apna chand Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Qaasim 0 Posted April 17, 2005 Dil mein tumhare apni kami chod jayenge, Aankho mein aansuon ki nami chod jayenge, Yaad rakhna mujhe dhoondhte firoge ek din, Jab hum ye zindagi chod jayenge. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Talaash 0 Posted April 18, 2005 (edited) nice poetry Edited April 18, 2005 by Talaash Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
khurshid4lov 0 Posted April 18, 2005 aik tehre tamanaa neh kuch ihsa nawazaah mange nahe jate ab kohe duaa hum seh Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Qaasim 0 Posted April 18, 2005 hamen apne dil men basaye rakhna, hamari yadon ke chiragh jalaye rakhna bahut lamba hai safar zindagi ka mere dost, ek hissa hamen bhi banaye rakhna. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
mein_hoon_na 0 Posted April 18, 2005 Aik Umeed thi jo bar ayi Hur taraf roshni nazar ayi Uss pe duniya ne sung bari ki Tehmet-e-ishq jis ke sur ayi Share this post Link to post Share on other sites