charming 0 Posted June 26, 2005 ab to aja kay tera raasta taktay taktay meri ankhoon mein khataknay lagi binaee ab tum kia bol rahay hoo kuch samjh nahi aya Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
rukh 25 Posted June 26, 2005 (edited) baith ker saya gul main nassir hum bohat royee woh jub yad aya charming > signature ik dum zaberdast hain ! last word >A Edited June 26, 2005 by rukh Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
mansoor 0 Posted June 26, 2005 (edited) Drassl ajj kal meraa shairee ka zooq " chutee par gia hai " lehaza i will try may be shair ghlat hoo ;) Arzoo thee tughay gul kay rabraoo kartyee hum aur ( i dun rember the words) guftagu kartye i think kay yaa kaffi ghlat hai here is one more Aa raha hai yad mugg ko guzra hoowa zamana woo kalYoon ka muskurana woo parindoon ka chhachana :( I hate poetry !! Edited June 26, 2005 by mansoor Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
charming 0 Posted June 26, 2005 ankhoon ko intazaar ka dayker hunar chalagaya chaha tha eik shaks ko janay kidher chalagaya din ki woh mehfilein gayein raatoon kay ratjagay gaye dekhker meray wajood ko beqarariyaan kidher chalagaya thx rukh Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
charming 0 Posted June 26, 2005 ohhh God wats dis mansoor ager apko poetry nahi ati so plz dont try it mujahy dilli dukh howa apki peotry perh ker its ok mein apkay haq mein dua keroon gi Allah apk zoq-e-shairi ko thora say increase kerday Ameen :) loving charming Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
caratamity 0 Posted June 26, 2005 Aik Shab Aik Sarayay Main Makeen Thay Donon Main to Soya Hi Nahi , Woh Bhi Kahan Khwaab Main Tha ------------------------------------------------ A dream is a writing, and many writings are just dreams Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
mansoor 0 Posted June 27, 2005 ohhh God wats dis mansoor ager apko poetry nahi ati so plz dont try it mujahy dilli dukh howa apki peotry perh ker its ok mein apkay haq mein dua keroon gi Allah apk zoq-e-shairi ko thora say increase kerday Ameen loving charming :( abb main kia kahoonnn .. kahir app sirf zoq e shairi kay liyee dua na kee jiyee ga balkay zooq aghahee aur zoq e ibadat kay liyee bhee dua kee jiyee ga .. main nahayat mamnoon hoon ga Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Kashif Khan 0 Posted June 27, 2005 Aankhon ne der tak koi manzar nahin roka Aa kar bhi mere paas, sitamgar nahin roka.. Katra ke yoon nikalne ki aadat si parh gayi Rasty me dekh kar bhi main aksar nahin roka Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Kashif Khan 0 Posted June 27, 2005 :( abb main kia kahoonnn .. kahir app sirf zoq e shairi kay liyee dua na kee jiyee ga balkay zooq aghahee aur zoq e ibadat kay liyee bhee dua kee jiyee ga .. main nahayat mamnoon hoon ga Do goli shair wali out of date khana INSHA ALLAH faida ho ga Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
rukh 25 Posted June 27, 2005 Ai kash koi hum say poochay rat bher kion jagay ho kon see bat hay tum main aisee itnai achai kion lagtai ho Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
mansoor 0 Posted June 28, 2005 :D Nice shairs !! Ai kash koi hum say poochay rat bher kion jagay ho kon see bat hay tum main aisee itnai achai kion lagtai ho Phool shabnam ,saryee mausam kabhi chand kabhi tarye lagtyee ho kon se bat hai tum main aisee itnai achyee kuin lagtyee hoo Kashif Khan Acha Maswara hai i think over it ;) Acha shair kidhar say shuru karna tha hann... O woh jo hum main tum main qarar tha , tumhain yad ho k na yad ho wohee wada yaani nibah ka tumhain yad ho k na yad ho woh jo lutf mujh pey thay paish ter , woh keram k tha mere hal per mujhay sub hay yad zara zara , tumhain yad ho k na yad ho MansOor [/code] Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
mansoor 0 Posted June 28, 2005 (edited) Idhar doo dafa post hoo gayee theee Edited June 28, 2005 by mansoor Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
caratamity 0 Posted June 28, 2005 Weeraan Hai Maykada Khum-o-Sagar Udaas Hain Tum Kia Gaey keh Rooth Gaey din Bahar Kay ------------------------------------- Mehboob woh hota hai jis ka 'Na Theek' bhi 'Theek' Lagay. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Kashif Khan 0 Posted June 28, 2005 yeh phool mughe koi wirasat se mile hain tum ne mera kaanton bhara bistar nahi dekha hamari zindage mein phool ban ker koi aaya tha uss ki yaad mein abb tak tehreeren mahekti hain kaghaz ke phool sar pe saja ker chali hayat nikle jo gher se raah mein barish ne aa liya Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
caratamity 0 Posted June 28, 2005 (edited) Aa Gai Fasl-e-Sakoon Chaak Grebaan Walo Sil Gaey Hont, Koi Zakhm Silay ya na Silay Dosto, Bazm Sjao keh Bahaar Aey Hai Khil Gaey Zakhm, Koi Phool Khilay ya Na Khilay ------------------------------------------------ Mehboob woh hota hai jis ka 'Na Theek' bhi 'Theek' Lagay. Edited June 28, 2005 by caratamity Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Kashif Khan 0 Posted June 28, 2005 abhi woh dard baqi hai agarche waqt marham hai magar kuch waqt lagta hai kisi ko bhool janey mein dobara dil basaney mein abhi kuch waqt lagna hai abhi woh dard baqi hai Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Muhammad Ali 0 Posted June 28, 2005 Yah Mujay Chain Q nahin ata !!! Ak hi Skhas thaa jahin maiN kiya Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
rukh 25 Posted June 28, 2005 Ankhain khulee rahain gee mernai kay bad bhi Inhain Adat see hogyee hay Intizar ki ! Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Bheegi_Palken 0 Posted June 28, 2005 ITNA TO HAME BHI YAKEEN HAI KI HAME BHULA NA SAKE HONGEY, YEH BAAT AUR HAI GAIRON KI TARAH MILE PAR DIL KO CHAIN DILA NA SAKE HONGEY. NEXT WORD IS...Y :) Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
mansoor 0 Posted June 28, 2005 uff :( O Mannn !! koee shair yad nahi aa raha . aik dam close ho gia hai Mind BTW kia yaa tension shair series chal rahi hai :D ok next word is still Y Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Bheegi_Palken 0 Posted June 28, 2005 uff :( O Mannn !! koee shair yad nahi aa raha . aik dam close ho gia hai Mind BTW kia yaa tension shair series chal rahi hai :D ok next word is still Y Yeh Bhi Aadab Hamare Hain, Tumhain Kya Malum Hum Tumhain Jeet Ke Harey Hain, Tumhain Kya Malum Ek Tum Ho Ke Samajhte Nahi Hum Ko Apna Ek Hum Hain Ke Tumhaare Hain, Tumhain kya Malum Next Word Is ... M :) Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Bheegi_Palken 0 Posted June 28, 2005 uff :( O Mannn !! koee shair yad nahi aa raha . aik dam close ho gia hai Mind BTW kia yaa tension shair series chal rahi hai :D ok next word is still Y Mind ko close nahi open rakha karain :D :P Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Kashif Khan 0 Posted June 29, 2005 Mujhay Fareeb Na Milta Auger Sitaroon Se...... Mein Asman K Agan Mein Ghar Bana Layta Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
caratamity 0 Posted June 29, 2005 Aisay Qaatil Ko Koi Haath Lagata Hai Fraaz Shukr Kar Shukr keh Woh Dushman-e-Jaan khwaab Main Tha --------------------------------------------------------------------------- Mehboob woh hota hai jis ka 'Na Theek' bhi 'Theek' Lagay. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Kashif Khan 0 Posted June 29, 2005 aik main aur meri tanhaai shab-e-hizar mein aur tumhaari yaadon ke sahaare hote hain Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
