cooLboY-Be 0 Posted June 18, 2005 Tanha rahna seekh raha hoon Mar kay jeena seekh raha hoon Mang ke pana seekh liya hai Pa kay khona seekh raha hoon Sabar ko zad-e-rah bana kar Kanch pay chalna seekh raha hoon Phirtay, phirtay sehra, sehra Pyas ko peena seekh raha hoon Marham to rakhna na aaya Zakhm kharochna seekh raha hoon Jeenay kay hain ajab taqazay Zinda rehna seekh raha hoon Madhoshee nay bohat sataaya Hosh main rahna seekh raha hoon Barsoon guzray phir bhi ab tak Man say bichrna seekh raha hoon Dar ker zehar kay pyaalay say Such ko chupana seekh raha hoon Rotay rotay auroon par Khud pay hansna seekh raha hoon Ghum nay mujh ko bohat hai khaya Ab ghum khana seekh raha hoon Is pay hairan hota hoon bohat Kartab kia kia seekh raha hoon Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Talaash 0 Posted June 19, 2005 very nice brother ..... wakay he khud likhe hai :D Dil mien dard dobo latay hain Tanhae mein roo latay hain Aankh baras jati hai aur hum Apma dukh sukh dho latay hain Veranon mein rah latay hain Sahraoon mein soo latay hain Hans lana mushkil hai warna Jab dil chahay roo latay hain Her eik rang kay khaat hai dil mein Jo chahain so booo latay hain mien nay nahie likhe...Farhat Abbas shah nay likhi hai :) :) Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
cooLboY-Be 0 Posted June 20, 2005 Talaash> Thank you very much sister for liking above peotry you may read 'Tere Jaane Say Mera Jahaan Badal Gaya!' iss mein aur bhi poetry he 'Ager ye koshish he to aik koshish aur sahi' ye bhi meri apni hain.. I hope aap ko passand aayein gi. :) Aaj aik aur likhi hay per abhi time nahi he iss liye baad mein yehaan post karoon ga. have a great day :flower: cooLboY Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
cooLboY-Be 0 Posted June 29, 2005 Dil ko pakar ke reh jaata hoon Pooch Na kaisey sharmata hoon Saari baatein sun leta hoon Aadhi baatein keh leta hoon Apna Dukhra keh nahin sakta Aur Judaai seh nahin sakta Kachey Gharey par beh nahin sakta Aik kinaarey reh nahin sakta Kab tak Tum Pardais raho gee Aao gey na khat likho gee Mein ghut ghut kar jaan de doon Phir tum kis ko jaan kaho gee (Poet: Unknown) Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Muhammad Ali 0 Posted June 29, 2005 Nice Poetry lagta hay Baligh hoty ja rahay ho........... Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
cooLboY-Be 0 Posted July 4, 2005 (edited) Kitna piyara hai nizara kabhi samandar per ja ker dekho Apni taraf khenchta hay kaisay kabhi samandar per ja ker dekho. Edited July 4, 2005 by cooLboY-Be Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
parii 0 Posted July 5, 2005 :smilie: hi dear i must say yur overall poetry is really nice Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
night wish 0 Posted July 6, 2005 very good and realistic :( Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
cooLboY-Be 0 Posted July 7, 2005 :smilie: hi dear i must say yur overall poetry is really nice Thanks alot :D very good and realistic thanks for liking... yeah its realistic... sunday ko seaview per hi banaya tha... :D Dedicated to LaLa> Challay aao iss mahfil mein Teri kami mahsoos hoti hay. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
cooLboY-Be 0 Posted July 7, 2005 Barhay maasoom hain ye log, naazuk dil rakhtay hain Qatlana nazar rakhtay hain aur bekhabar rahtay hain :( Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
night wish 0 Posted July 7, 2005 thanks for liking... yeah its realistic... sunday ko seaview per hi banaya tha... kiya waqi mein yaa ap aise he bool rahe Barhay maasoom hain ye log, naazuk dil rakhtay hainQatlana nazar rakhtay hain aur bekhabar rahtay hain kiya khoob kehnay :D Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
cooLboY-Be 0 Posted July 8, 2005 kiya waqi mein yaa ap aise he bool rahe jee waqe hi... mostly I try to post my own poetry. shairi kay liye aik khas mahool create karna parta hay aur jab tak wo mahool mahsoos na ho shairi nahi hoti... agar koi shair banjata hay ussay note down ker lena chahiye warna kam say kam mein to bhool jata hoon aur yaad karnay ki koshish karta hoon per tabtak uss shair ka pata nahi kia hashar ho jata hay... aur issi liye kafi din tak mein koi shair hi nahi post karta ya phir kabhi selected shairs mein say koi shair/gazal post kar deta hoon. kiya khoob kehnay :D thanks.. ye bhi mene kal hi banaya tha... per i don't know kaisa hay.. khair jesa bhi ho mujhe acha laga iss liye yehaan add kar lia. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
achi-bachi 0 Posted July 8, 2005 SALAM. BHAI apki ka collection zaberdast hai. thora sa contribution mere side sai. *************************** zindagi ka safer katna hai ager agg per raks kerney ka funn sekh lo jism cahey jaley,rohh pholey phaley jeena chaoo tou merney ka fun sekh lo ********************************* Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
cooLboY-Be 0 Posted July 9, 2005      ***************************       zindagi ka safer katna hai ager     agg per raks kerney ka funn sekh lo     jism cahey jaley,rohh pholey phaley    jeena chaoo tou merney ka fun sekh lo   ********************************* bohat khoob kia aap ka apna shair hay? kisi ka bhi ho bohat acha shair hay :D Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
cooLboY-Be 0 Posted July 9, 2005 Hum bohat khush thay kay koi khush hoga Socha na tha apna ghum koi chupata hoga :( Door hum say rah ker bhi koi tanha hoga Raaz jaan kay humaray itna khamosh hoga :( Dil torh kay hamara koi muskurata hoga Wafa na ker sakta to bewafa bhi na hoga Dard zamanay kay sah ker bhi khush hoga Yaad mein kisi ki aanso tak na bahata hoga Kis khush fahmi mein thay tum ae Rasheed Zamanay bhar ke dard kaisay koi sahta hoga Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
ABBAS_MASOOM 0 Posted July 11, 2005 Tanha rahna seekh raha hoon Mar kay jeena seekh raha hoon Mang ke pana seekh liya hai Pa kay khona seekh raha hoon Sabar ko zad-e-rah bana kar Kanch pay chalna seekh raha hoon Phirtay, phirtay sehra, sehra Pyas ko peena seekh raha hoon Marham to rakhna na aaya Zakhm kharochna seekh raha hoon Jeenay kay hain ajab taqazay Zinda rehna seekh raha hoon Madhoshee nay bohat sataaya Hosh main rahna seekh raha hoon Barsoon guzray phir bhi ab tak Man say bichrna seekh raha hoon Dar ker zehar kay pyaalay say Such ko chupana seekh raha hoon Rotay rotay auroon par Khud pay hansna seekh raha hoon Ghum nay mujh ko bohat hai khaya Ab ghum khana seekh raha hoon Is pay hairan hota hoon bohat Kartab kia kia seekh raha hoon wa kyaa baat ha really m serious maza aaa gya kya kya tasweer khanchi ha print our la raha hon app ki is ghazal ka zabardast wo kahty hain balka main kahta hon ka insaaan ka likhny sa os ki zahneyat ka pata chal jata ha our jab yaa baat shairi ki ho to yon ka sakty ho kainsaan ka andar pata chal jata ha zabardat Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
cooLboY-Be 0 Posted July 11, 2005 wa kyaa baat ha really m serious maza aaa gya kya kya tasweer khanchi ha print our la raha hon app ki is ghazal ka zabardast wo kahty hain balka main kahta hon ka insaaan ka likhny sa os ki zahneyat ka pata chal jata ha our jab yaa baat shairi ki ho to yon ka sakty ho kainsaan ka andar pata chal jata ha zabardat aap say msn per baat ho gayee iss liye no need to reply here :D Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
ABBAS_MASOOM 0 Posted July 12, 2005 aap say msn per baat ho gayee iss liye no need to reply here :D :D Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
achi-bachi 0 Posted July 13, 2005 SALAM. BRO APKO PASAND AYA. MUJE BHE YE PASAND HAI. Hum bohat khush thay kay koi khush hogaSocha na tha apna ghum koi chupata hoga Door hum say rah ker bhi koi tanha hoga Raaz jaan kay humaray itna khamosh hoga Dil torh kay hamara koi muskurata hoga Wafa na ker sakta to bewafa bhi na hoga Dard zamanay kay sah ker bhi khush hoga Yaad mein kisi ki aanso tak na bahata hoga Kis khush fahmi mein thay tum ae Rasheed Zamanay bhar ke dard kaisay koi sahta hoga ********************** YE HEE DORR HAI AJ KALL KE ENSANNO MAIN TEREY DEWARR SE ONCHI MERI DEWARR RAHEY THORA HEE WAQAT HAI ZAMANEY KE JAHANAUM BANNEY MAIN MAHOLL ESHARRA KERTA HAI,HALAAT GAWAHEE DETTEY HAI******************************* JO KHOUD LIKHI HAIN WOH BHEE YAHA POST KARO GI INSHALLAH. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
*jadoo* 0 Posted July 27, 2005 Tanha rahna seekh raha hoon Mar kay jeena seekh raha hoon Mang ke pana seekh liya hai Pa kay khona seekh raha hoon Sabar ko zad-e-rah bana kar Kanch pay chalna seekh raha hoon Phirtay, phirtay sehra, sehra Pyas ko peena seekh raha hoon Marham to rakhna na aaya Zakhm kharochna seekh raha hoon Jeenay kay hain ajab taqazay Zinda rehna seekh raha hoon Madhoshee nay bohat sataaya Hosh main rahna seekh raha hoon Barsoon guzray phir bhi ab tak Man say bichrna seekh raha hoon Dar ker zehar kay pyaalay say Such ko chupana seekh raha hoon Rotay rotay auroon par Khud pay hansna seekh raha hoon Ghum nay mujh ko bohat hai khaya Ab ghum khana seekh raha hoon Is pay hairan hota hoon bohat Kartab kia kia seekh raha hoon nice CB :D Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
anjali 0 Posted July 29, 2005 Â :D 147511[/snapback] hello........bht zaberdast likha hian ap nai...wasey muj poetry main koi interest nahin tha lakin ab ho gia hai........... Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
areesha khan 0 Posted July 29, 2005 Tanha rahna seekh raha hoon Mar kay jeena seekh raha hoon Mang ke pana seekh liya hai Pa kay khona seekh raha hoon Sabar ko zad-e-rah bana kar Kanch pay chalna seekh raha hoon Phirtay, phirtay sehra, sehra Pyas ko peena seekh raha hoon Marham to rakhna na aaya Zakhm kharochna seekh raha hoon Jeenay kay hain ajab taqazay Zinda rehna seekh raha hoon Madhoshee nay bohat sataaya Hosh main rahna seekh raha hoon Barsoon guzray phir bhi ab tak Man say bichrna seekh raha hoon Dar ker zehar kay pyaalay say Such ko chupana seekh raha hoon Rotay rotay auroon par Khud pay hansna seekh raha hoon Ghum nay mujh ko bohat hai khaya Ab ghum khana seekh raha hoon Is pay hairan hota hoon bohat Kartab kia kia seekh raha hoon 143570[/snapback] very nice Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
cooLboY-Be 0 Posted July 30, 2005 Thanks to all above who appreciated poetry. :flower: and sorry I was not in good possition for continueing but i'm feeling better now so adding some lines, hopefully everyone will like it. Aise ujhdra he mera ghar basaane ko dil nahin karta Kaise loota he kisi ne bataane ko dil nahin karta Mohabbat ke sabhi roopon se yaqeen uth gaya mera Abb kisi ko galay laganay ko dil nahin karta Her toote armaan ke badlay kaante day doon Per kia karoon kisi ka dil dukhanay ko dil nahi karta Zamaane me tujh sa sangdil mile ga kahaan Mera aansoon bahaanay ko dil nahin karta Sadme se hoi pather aankh se aansoo nahin nikla Aur hansne hasaane ko dil nahin karta Zindagi mein jeene ki ab aas bhi nahin Aur mera dhoob ke mar jaane ko dil nahin karta Ehsaas do-jahaan me bari hoi rusvaai Abh kisi ko apna banaane ko dil nahin karta Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
