Tabu 0 Posted July 13, 2003 Mere shair, meri ghazlain, meri jan tere nam Gulab, motia, komal, meri jan tere nam Zindagi ki rahoon main jo tu hamsafar ho Jo hushboo ho gi hasil, meri jan tere nam Mere pass na dolat hai na shuhraat Meri jan, mera dil, meri jan tere nam Zindagi ki rahoon main choor kar na jana Kardoon gee main har pal, meri jan tere nam Teri ankhon nain pagal kar deya hai mujhe Apni zindagi main nain kar di, meri jan tere nam!!! By: TABU!(guyz i write a bit poetry 2. hope u all like it)! :) Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Shabo 0 Posted July 13, 2003 Hi Tabu If this is ur own work then.. WOW!!!!!!!! I'm impressed ;) Thanks for sharing and do let us have more! C u around :) Sx Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
ashu 0 Posted July 14, 2003 how r u i hope u will b fine yaar tabu nice shair app tu shairi bhut achi karte hian muje lagta hian app shaira banjayein giii ok bye take care from Aisha Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Tabu 0 Posted July 14, 2003 how r u i hope u will b fine yaar tabu nice shair app tu shairi bhut achi karte hian muje lagta hian app shaira banjayein giii okbye take care from Aisha awwwww... thnx! well no i wanna be a pediatricionist! kids Doctor! guyz i'm only 15!!:) Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Tabu 0 Posted July 14, 2003 Hi TabuIf this is ur own work then.. WOW!!!!!!!! I'm impressed ;) Thanks for sharing and do let us have more! C u around :) Sx sallam.. yes.... itz my own... ok i'll post more soooon! thnxy again! tc... luv ya. buh byeZ!!:) Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
munnibhai 0 Posted July 14, 2003 biphri hawaon k sang naao chulay subah subah jab chand dhalay chaman main ik gulab khilay jangal main ik koyel bolay mast saman' ho barish bersay ashkon ki jesay zanjeer banay magar... ko kisi k dukh ko samjhay hey friends , its absolutely mine , plz do not copy it! Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
munnibhai 0 Posted July 14, 2003 Mere shair, meri ghazlain, meri jan tere namGulab, motia, komal, meri jan tere nam Zindagi ki rahoon main jo tu hamsafar ho Jo hushboo ho gi hasil, meri jan tere nam Mere pass na dolat hai na shuhraat Meri jan, mera dil, meri jan tere nam Zindagi ki rahoon main choor kar na jana Kardoon gee main har pal, meri jan tere nam Teri ankhon nain pagal kar deya hai mujhe Apni zindagi main nain kar di, meri jan tere nam!!! By: TABU!(guyz i write a bit poetry 2. hope u all like it)! :) Just MIND BLOWING..is anyone here who give me some guidence in this field. u can also see some of my old ghazals i made at this site www.deevan-e-muneeb.5u.com plz tell me if u liked it! Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
babarleo 0 Posted July 14, 2003 Good Job... Kepp it up.. shairoo.. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
munnibhai 0 Posted July 14, 2003 baat kehnay ki nahi phir bhi keh deta hoon waqt k saye mai haalat badal jatay hain ye haqeeqat hay k tum meray dil main aaj bhi ho dil badeltay nahi , jezbaat badal jatay hain Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Tabu 0 Posted July 15, 2003 baat kehnay ki nahi phir bhi keh deta hoonwaqt k saye mai haalat badal jatay hain ye haqeeqat hay k tum meray dil main aaj bhi ho dil badeltay nahi , jezbaat badal jatay hain nice! luv it! PS. thnx 4 da comment "MIND BLOWING".. it really made me happy!:D well i just started writin my thoughts 'n i didn't kno dey r good!;) Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Tabu 0 Posted July 15, 2003 biphri hawaon k sang naao chulaysubah subah jab chand dhalay chaman main ik gulab khilay jangal main ik koyel bolay mast saman' ho barish bersay ashkon ki jesay zanjeer banay magar... ko kisi k dukh ko samjhay hey friends , its absolutely mine , plz do not copy it! luv it.... really nice! ur thoughts 'n feelinz or just shok-e-shayari???:) Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
munnibhai 0 Posted July 16, 2003 mohabbat k zakham alfaaz ben ker zuban per aa hi jatay hain Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Asim 0 Posted July 16, 2003 wah wah!!! I really enjoyed reading them all :D Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Asim 0 Posted July 16, 2003 wah wah!!! I really enjoyed reading them all :D Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Tabu 0 Posted July 16, 2003 mohabbat k zakhamalfaaz ben ker zuban per aa hi jatay hain oh acha to yeh nazriya hai...... same wid me! Humara bhi kuch milta hai app se kheyal Kheyal milna bhi to ban jata hai ik sawal!:) Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Tabu 0 Posted July 16, 2003 wah wah!!!I really enjoyed reading them all :D thnx..... me2!:) Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
munnibhai 0 Posted July 16, 2003 mohabbat k zakhamalfaaz ben ker zuban per aa hi jatay hain oh acha to yeh nazriya hai...... same wid me! Humara bhi kuch milta hai app se kheyal Kheyal milna bhi to ban jata hai ik sawal!:) wo aaye rukh pay zulf pareshaan' liaye huaye baadlon' ki ot (behind) chand ka saman' kiaye huaye aik or may khanay (sharab khana) main namaz parhi main nay log samjhay sharab pi main nay Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
munnibhai 0 Posted July 16, 2003 i use " ' " after n for "noon gunna" Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Tabu 0 Posted July 16, 2003 woowwwwwwwwwwww! munnibhai! awesum! did u write deze onez????? dey r aweum! well i just make minez up while i reply!;) Dil de kar hum be ghar ho gaye hain Koi a ke bata de kahan mera kasoor tha? Woh tanha chor geya hai mujhe sham ko yun bin bataye Kitna main nain kaha tha mujhe andheron se dhar lagta hai! Tabu!:) Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
munnibhai 0 Posted July 16, 2003 very nice.....keep it up tenha-revi mujhay gwara nahi magar tu khod bhatak raha hay teray saath kia chalon (its not mine) its mine Tumhain yaad to hongay wo sapnay Jo mil k dekhay thay hum nay Wo reet suhanay khwabon ki Wo shokh say cehray ki masti Wo din jo k beet gaye Jab dil dukhaya that sab nay Tumhain yaad to hongay wo sapnay Wo larki i deevani si Afsana tha ya kahani thi Hum ik doojay main kho jatay Or hoti ik shaam suhani si Or phir wo raat judaai ki Aansoo bahaye jab in aankhon nay Tumhain yaad to honagay wo sapnay Ye must zulfain lehraata aanchal Shokh nighah main sharmata kaajal In aankhon main aansoo jesay Bars raha ho koi baadal Jo khhaen thi tum nay qasmain Jo kiay thay waday hum nay Tumhain yaad to hongay wo sapnay did u like it? Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
queeno 0 Posted July 16, 2003 KABHI KABHI Kabhii kabhii mere dil me.n Khayaal aataa hai... keh zindagii terii zulfo.n kii narm chaao.n me.n guzarane paatii to shaadaab ho bhii sakatii thii ye tiirgii jo merii ziist kaa muqaddar hai terii nazar kii shuaao.n me.n kho bhii sakatii thii ajab na thaa ke mai.n begaanaa-e-alam ho kar tere jamaal kii raanaaiiyo.n me.n kho rahataa teraa gudaaz badan terii niim-baar aa.Nkhe.n i.nhii.n hasiin fasaano.n me.n maaho rahataa pukaaratii.n mujhe jab talKhiyaa.N zamaane kii tere labo.n se halaawat ke ghuu.NT pii letaa hayaat chiikhatii phiratii barahanaa-sar, aur mai.n ghanerii zulfo.n ke saaye me.n chhup ke jii letaa magar ye ho na sakaa aur ab ye aalam hai ke tuu nahii.n, teraa Gam, terii justajuu bhii nahii.n guzar rahii hai kuchh is tarah zi.ndahii jaise ise kisii ke sahaare kii aarazuu bhii nahii.n zamaane bhar ke dukho.n ko lagaa chukaa huu.N gale guzar rahaa huu.N kuchh a.njaanii guzar_gaaho.n se muhiib saaye merii simt ba.Date aate hai.n hayaat-o-maut ke pur_haul Khaarazaaro.n se na koii jaadaa na manzil na roshanii kaa suraaG bhaTak rahii hai Khaalaao.n me.n zindagii merii i.nhii.n Khalaao.n me.n rah jaauu.Ngaa kabhii khokar mai.n jaanataa huu.N merii ham-nafas magar yuu.N hii kabhii kabhii mere dil me.n Khayaal aataa hai Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Tabu 0 Posted July 17, 2003 very nice.....keep it uptenha-revi mujhay gwara nahi magar tu khod bhatak raha hay teray saath kia chalon (its not mine) its mine Tumhain yaad to hongay wo sapnay Jo mil k dekhay thay hum nay Wo reet suhanay khwabon ki Wo shokh say cehray ki masti Wo din jo k beet gaye Jab dil dukhaya that sab nay Tumhain yaad to hongay wo sapnay Wo larki i deevani si Afsana tha ya kahani thi Hum ik doojay main kho jatay Or hoti ik shaam suhani si Or phir wo raat judaai ki Aansoo bahaye jab in aankhon nay Tumhain yaad to honagay wo sapnay Ye must zulfain lehraata aanchal Shokh nighah main sharmata kaajal In aankhon main aansoo jesay Bars raha ho koi baadal Jo khhaen thi tum nay qasmain Jo kiay thay waday hum nay Tumhain yaad to hongay wo sapnay did u like it? u asked if i like it i say i luved it! itz v. nice! iz dere a lyfe story behind it? perhaps urz? Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
munnibhai 0 Posted July 17, 2003 meri kahani is say kuch mkhtalif hay...us nay koi wada nahi kia tha ..na main nay koi qasam khai... she just reject me! :'( Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Tabu 0 Posted July 18, 2003 meri kahani is say kuch mkhtalif hay...us nay koi wada nahi kia tha ..na main nay koi qasam khai...she just reject me! :'( awwwwwwwww.... sad... kuch nahi hota.. app ka jor kahin na kahin zaroor hai aur app ko zaroor mile gaa.... iss liye apni zindagi ko dukhi mat kejiye gaa!:) .... app ka sitara app ko hi mile gaa! keya rishte ki bat chali thi aur uss ki taraf se na hui.. agar essa hai to kuch nahi..... app ko app ki "woh" zaroor mile gee.. kaunke is dunya main kabhi jo hum chahte hai woh hamein nahi milta aur jo hum sochte nahi hain woh ho jata hai! move on.... 'n live happily(InshAllah)!B) Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
