parii 0 Posted July 5, 2005 mere saath tum bhii duaa karo yuuN kisii ke haq men buraa na ho kahiin aur ho na ye haadasaa koii raaste me.n judaa na ho mere ghar se raat kii sej tak vo ik aaNsuu kii lakiir hai zaraa chaaNd se puuchhanaa vo isii taraf se gayaa na ho sar-e-shaam Thaharii huii zamiin, aasamaaN hai jhukaa huaa isii moD par mere vaaste vo charaaG le kar khaDaa na ho vo farishte aap hii DhuuNDhiye kahaaniyo.n kii kitaab men jo buraa kahen na buraa sune koii shaKhs un se Khafaa na ho vo visaal ho ke firaaq ho terii aag mahakegii ek din vo gulaab ban ke khilegaa kyaa jo charaaG ban ke jalaa na ho mujhe yuu.N lagaa ki Khaamosh Khushbuu ke hoNTh titalii ne chhuu liye inhin zard patton kii oT me.n koii phuul soyaa huaa na ho isii ehatiyaat men main rahe, isii ehatiyaat men vo rahaa vo kahaaN kahaaN mere saath hai kisii aur ko ye pataa na ho Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
cooLboY-Be 0 Posted July 6, 2005 very nice... especially this one.. vo farishte aap hii DhuuNDhiye kahaaniyo.n kii kitaab men jo buraa kahen na buraa sune koii shaKhs un se Khafaa na ho btw yehaan daad dene wala koi nahi hota bas apne aap ko daad milti rahti hai abhi mene note kia ye post 14 logoon nay parhi per reply kisi nay nahi kia. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
parii 0 Posted July 6, 2005 very nice... especially this one.. vo farishte aap hii DhuuNDhiye kahaaniyo.n kii kitaab men jo buraa kahen na buraa sune koii shaKhs un se Khafaa na ho btw yehaan daad dene wala koi nahi hota bas apne aap ko daad milti rahti hai abhi mene note kia ye post 14 logoon nay parhi per reply kisi nay nahi kia. thanku so much for liking my post this is my first post on this forum.... or logon ko shayed pasand naeh aye isliyeh reply nahe dia :( Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
cooLboY-Be 0 Posted July 8, 2005 Logoon ki apni pasand hoti hay aur kisi nay jawab nahi dia iss ka ye matlab nahi kay aap new hain ya shairi achi nahi hay... I think log sirf apnay selected topics per hi reply kartay hain aur post karnay wala ka nick dekh kay post read kartay hain lakin mein yeqeen say nahi kah sakta... aik waja aur bhi hay kay log kisi new ya old member ki post ka reply iss liye bhi kartay kay wo reply mein kia likhain... Anyways aap nay bohat acha likha hay iss liye dil chotta karnay ki zaroorat nahi hay :) hopefully sab theek ho jaye ga... see ya arround with new poetry.. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Aaman_Eman 0 Posted July 8, 2005 parii Buht accha likha ..keep sharing wid us more ! koi reply keray ya nahi don't feel this...aap ye soch ker post kerin k aap ko khood ko describe kernay ka chance mil raha hai :) cooLboY-Be sahi reason tou mujay be nahi pata ;) ..well aap nai kafi had tak theek kaha hai. :) Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
achi-bachi 0 Posted July 8, 2005 SALAM. nice keep it up fairy ops parii EMAAN>AP KE LEYE SHABASHH.PATA HAI NA KEU :) Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Kashif Khan 0 Posted July 8, 2005 Yep Very Nice Parii Bohut hi Nice Likha hai Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
parii 0 Posted July 8, 2005 parii Buht accha likha ..keep sharing wid us more !koi reply keray ya nahi don't feel this...aap ye soch ker post kerin k aap ko khood ko describe kernay ka chance mil raha hai :) cooLboY-Be sahi reason tou mujay be nahi pata ;) ..well aap nai kafi had tak theek kaha hai. :) Thank YU :) Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
parii 0 Posted July 8, 2005 Yep Very Nice Parii Bohut hi Nice Likha hai thankss kashif bhaii Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
parii 0 Posted July 8, 2005 SALAM.nice keep it up fairy ops parii EMAAN>AP KE LEYE SHABASHH.PATA HAI NA KEU :) aap fairy he keh lain aik he bat hay :P Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
parii 0 Posted July 8, 2005 Logoon ki apni pasand hoti hay aur kisi nay jawab nahi dia iss ka ye matlab nahi kay aap new hain ya shairi achi nahi hay... I think log sirf apnay selected topics per hi reply kartay hain aur post karnay wala ka nick dekh kay post read kartay hain lakin mein yeqeen say nahi kah sakta... aik waja aur bhi hay kay log kisi new ya old member ki post ka reply iss liye bhi kartay kay wo reply mein kia likhain...Anyways aap nay bohat acha likha hay iss liye dil chotta karnay ki zaroorat nahi hay :) hopefully sab theek ho jaye ga... see ya arround with new poetry.. hmm theek kehrhay hain app Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
kashish* 0 Posted July 9, 2005 (edited) mujhe yuu.N lagaa ki Khaamosh Khushbuu ke hoNTh titalii ne chhuu liye inhin zard patton kii oT me.n koii phuul soyaa huaa na ho this one is really good..... Edited July 9, 2005 by kashish* Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
parii 0 Posted July 10, 2005 mujhe yuu.N lagaa ki Khaamosh Khushbuu ke hoNTh titalii ne chhuu liye inhin zard patton kii oT me.n koii phuul soyaa huaa na ho this one is really good..... thankss kashish Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
parii 0 Posted July 24, 2005 Very Nice PARII 148052[/snapback] thanks dear Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
parii 0 Posted July 24, 2005 BraVoo! 148093[/snapback] thankss alot :flower: Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
