Kiran 2 Posted July 24, 2005 Main..! Main Sahil Pey Likhi Hoi Ibarrat Nahi Jo Lehroon se Mit Jaati Hai Main Barish Ki Barasti Boond Nahi Jo Baras Kay Thum Jaati Hai Main Koi Khuwaab Nahi Jissey Dekha Aur Bhulla Diya Main Koi shamma Nahi Jissey Phoonka Aur Bhuja Diya Main Hawa Ka Jhoonka Nahi Jo Aaya Aur Guzer Gaya Main Chaand Bhi Nahi Jo Raat Kay Baad Dhal Jaaye Main To Woh Ehsaas Hoon Jo Tujh Main Lahoo Ban Ker Gardish Karey Main To Woh Rung Hoon Jo Teray Dil Per Charhey To Kabhi Na Mittey Main Woh Geet Hoon Jo Kabhi Teray Labon Se Judda Na Hoga Khuwaab, Ibarrat, Shama Ki Tarah Chaand, Boond, Hawa Ki Tarah Meray Mitnay Ka Sawaal Hi Nahi Kiyon Kay Mohabbat Ka Koi Zawal Nahin Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Choudhry 0 Posted July 24, 2005 Nice work Kiran, Khud likhi hai, Nahi bhi likhi Tub bhi nice Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Talaash 0 Posted July 24, 2005 Mohabbat ka koi Zawal nahie Really Nice peom :) Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
iftikhar 0 Posted July 24, 2005 salaam boaht achi ha poem zaber 10 Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
kashish* 0 Posted July 24, 2005 zaber10 kiran buhat hi buhat hii achhi poetry hai...keep it up :) Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Kiran 2 Posted July 26, 2005 Thx everyone :D n btw yeh meri creation nahi hai i read it n shared with u ppl :) Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
caratamity 0 Posted July 26, 2005 Gr8, Fantastic is the Word that came out of my Mouth. Nice Work. would you give me the name of the Poet or Poetess ? I'll be Thankful to you. :) keep it up, Sharing such a fine piece of Work. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Kiran 2 Posted July 27, 2005 caratamity i don't know it's name but i'll try to find :) anyway thx for liking Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Charmer 0 Posted July 27, 2005 wowww !!! great poetry... Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
cute_ooky 0 Posted July 28, 2005 aww this is was so cute! Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Kiran 2 Posted July 28, 2005 thx aimon but decide karo thi yeh hai :P Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Kiran 2 Posted July 28, 2005 WAPSI Usnay Kaha........... Sun Aihad Nibhanay Ke Khatir Mat Aana Aihad Nibhanay Walay Aksar Majboori Ki Thakan Say Lota Krtay Hein Tum Jao.. !! Aur Darya Darya Piyas Bhuja-O Jin Aankhoon Main Doobo Jis Dil Mein Bhi Utro Mari Jalan Aawaz Na Dy Ge Lekin Jab Meri Chahat.. !! Aur Meri Khuwahish Ke Low Itne Nayz Aur Itne unche Ho Ja-ay ... Jab Dil Ro Dy Tab Lout Aana.. !! Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
anjali 0 Posted August 8, 2005 WAPSI Itne unche Ho Ja-ay ... Jab Dil Ro Dy Tab Lout Aana.. !! 149052[/snapback] very nice kiran........bht zaberdst likha hian wasey ager ap nai khud nahin likha tab bi nice selection hain :dontsad: Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Kiran 2 Posted August 12, 2005 :D thx anjali magar meri apni creation nahi :) Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Kiran 2 Posted August 24, 2005 A day without you, Is a day without me, For you make me who I am, And who I want to be. A day without you, Is a day without light, For you light up the sky, And you light up my life. A day without you, Is a day without sound, For I open my ears, To hear you around. A day without you, Is a day without cheer, For you make me smile, And you don't cause a tear. A day without you, Is a day without sight, For you open my eyes, And make my World bright. But a day without You, Will never be, Because I trust in You.. That you will never hurt me ...! Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Kewl_Kash 0 Posted August 31, 2005 (edited) Kuch Loog Badal Gayay..... Is raat ki.. tanhaeeyo ke Sab rang badal gaye hai Chand nikla hai waise hi Andhere badal gaye hai Jinke bharose thi khusiyan Wo badal gaye hain Manzile to abb bhi wo hi hain Kuch rastay badal gaye hain Jinpe kiya tha bharosa humne Wo dost bicharr gaye hain Dakhe thay kabhi jo humne Wo kahwab badal gaye hain Jo banay thay kabhi hamsafar Aaj wo hi mukarr gaye hain Ais tutay huye dil kay saray.. jazbaat badal gaye hain Na badle kabhi hum Na badle hamaray khayalat Bas rona hai yahi...... KUCHH LOG BADAL GAYE HAIN Edited August 31, 2005 by Kewl_Kash Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Kiran 2 Posted August 31, 2005 Nice ghazal Kewl_kash Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Kewl_Kash 0 Posted September 1, 2005 well thanks alot kiran waisay its not mine Ghazal i just read it some where i dont know where and share with u people and its express my feelings too... so thats why any ways have fun Allah Hafiz Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
cute_ooky 0 Posted September 1, 2005 WAPSI Usnay Kaha........... Sun Aihad Nibhanay Ke Khatir Mat Aana Aihad Nibhanay Walay Aksar Majboori Ki Thakan Say Lota Krtay Hein wow... amazing! :( Kiran.. everything was/is/ and will be nice :D I liked kewl_kash's ghazal too.. great stuff man.. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
rukh 25 Posted September 2, 2005 Main woh nahi tumhare post ki tareef ker doon lolzzzz jis Poet ki poem hay us nay acha likha hay mera khiyal hay us nay yeh poem zaroor apni Mehbooba ki bakree ko samnay beth ker likhee hay woh bakree main main main kertee ja rahe hoon gee or Shair nai us ki her Main per mehbboba per shair likh diya lolzzz kiran tum ko gussa araha hay jaoo pani pee lo : p Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Kewl_Kash 0 Posted September 2, 2005 here is another Ghazal which i like most i dont know who is the writer but i just like it alot n want to share with u people have Fun Us ney kaha mujh sey kitna piyar hai... Main ney kaha sitaron ka koi shumar nahin Us ney kaha k kon tumhin hai bohat aziz ? Main ney kaha, dil pey jis ka ikhtiyar hai Us ney kaha Kon sa Tofah tumhin main doon MAin ne kaha wohi shaam jo abhi tak udhar hai Us ney kaha Khizan main mulaqat ka jawaz... Main ney kaha, qurb ka matlab bahar hai...... Us ney kaha senkron gham zindagi main hain Main ney kaha gham nahin, jab ghamgasar saath hai Us ney kaha saath kahan tak nibhaon gay...? Main ney kaha jitni yeh saans ki taar hai...... Us ney kaha mujh ko yaqeen aaye kiss tarah Main ney kaha, naam mera aetbaar hai....!!! Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Kiran 2 Posted September 3, 2005 (edited) Rukh> pani pena skin k liye acha hai u know skin glow kerti hai :P jao rukh abh tum pani pe ao ;) Kewl_Kash> it's fantastic i guess Aitebar sajid post hain iss ghazal k don't think iss main aitebar word ki wahja se main ne kaha hai but i have heard it b4 :) Edited September 3, 2005 by Kiran Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Bheegi_Palken 0 Posted September 4, 2005 Rukh> pani pena skin k liye acha hai u know skin glow kerti hai :P jao rukh abh tum pani pe ao ;)Kewl_Kash> it's fantastic i guess Aitebar sajid post hain iss ghazal k don't think iss main aitebar word ki wahja se main ne kaha hai but i have heard it b4 :) 153779[/snapback] HEY KIRAN SIS U HAVE A REALLY GOOD CHOICE . ..Fantastic !!!! :) KHUSH RAHIN :) Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
