shakeel shaiki 0 Posted September 14, 2005 Honton ki hansi tum ho Ankhoon ki nami tum ho Main jis khalish main terpoon Dherkan ki kami tum ho Aa ker kabhi na daykha Choo ker kabhi na daykha Khilti hay roz dil main Chahat ki kali tum ho Tum say milay to jana Hum nay yeh dil jalana Hum kaisay tum ko bhoolain Qismat say mili tum ho Ab tum ko kya bataain Ab tum say kya chupaain Hay khuli kitaab dil ki Lafzoon main likhi tum ho Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Choudhry 0 Posted September 15, 2005 this is beautiful shakeel .... like beautiful Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
cute_ooky 0 Posted September 15, 2005 :o awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww.... that was really nice!!! Ab tum ko kya bataain Ab tum say kya chupaain Hay khuli kitaab dil ki Lafzoon main likhi tum ho very touching.. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
anjali 0 Posted September 16, 2005 hello,bht nice poetry hain Tum say milay to jana Hum nay yeh dil jalana Hum kaisay tum ko bhoolain Qismat say mili tum ho ye bht nice hain........keep it up Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
cute_ooky 0 Posted September 16, 2005 oh yeah for sure :) Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
shakeel shaiki 0 Posted October 6, 2005 thx friends ------------ s-h-a-i-k-i Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
saher18 0 Posted October 6, 2005 HI H R UUU NICE POETRY SO KEEP IT UPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPP MR SAROOOOOOOOOOOOOO Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Choudhry 0 Posted October 7, 2005 Shakeel bhai Today i read this poem to this one girl and u can imagine wat happened then... thats for poem Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
tOm & jErRy 0 Posted October 25, 2005 hiz that was really nice faryad kar rahi hai tarasti hui nigha dekhai hui kisi ko kai din ghuzar ghae Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
vertosis_ather 0 Posted October 25, 2005 I like These Lines ..... "Tum say milay to jana Hum nay yeh dil jalana Hum kaisay tum ko bhoolain Qismat say mili tum ho" very nice poetry yarrrrrrrrrrrrrrrr....... really good Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
