ariba 0 Posted November 13, 2005 Dard kaisa bhi ho ankh nam na karo Raat kaali sahi koi gham na karo Ik sitara bano jagmagatay raho Zindagii mein sada muskaratay raho Baant'ni hai agar baant lo har khushi Gham na zahir karo tum kisi per kabhi Dil ki gehraai mein ghum chupatay raho Zindagii mein sada muskaratay raho Ashk anmool hain kho na dena kahin In ki har boond hai motiyoon se haseen In ko har ankh se tum churatay raho Zindagii mein sada muskaratay raho Faaslay kam karo dil milatay raho Zindagii mein sada muskaratay raho Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
vertosis_ather 0 Posted November 14, 2005 wow!!!!!! aribaaaaa bohat kaha aap ne!!!! Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
ibtisaam 0 Posted November 14, 2005 salam....... :flower: very nice...... *tere ashko ki latafat ko koi kyaa jaane... inko daman mein samolo ju-n-hi girne jaaein kiyaa milain apno se murjhae hue chehre lekar in ki janib kabhi jaaein to sa-n-warte jaaein.... Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
vertosis_ather 0 Posted November 15, 2005 hmmm ibtisaam very well... Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Kiran 2 Posted November 15, 2005 hmmmmmmmm nice.....Tum jo itna muskura rahe ho kiya ghum jo chupa rahe ho :) Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
vertosis_ather 0 Posted November 16, 2005 Houtoun Pe tabbassum koshish hai gham chupanay ki... hamaray aehbaab yeh samajhtay hain k hamian aadat hau muskuranay ki.... Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
rukh 25 Posted November 16, 2005 lakin zyada muskaranay say log SHAK main per jatay hain ; ) well nice poem ... Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
ariba 0 Posted November 16, 2005 Thanks to All. Ather>nice shairs. Kiran n Rukh>>Loog parh laite hain chahray ki tehrerein Kitna mushkil hai sab see chupa kar rona. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
ibtisaam 0 Posted November 16, 2005 hmmm ibtisaam very well... 159879[/snapback] shukryaaa......ATHer :flower: Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
ibtisaam 0 Posted November 16, 2005 hmmmmmmmm nice.....Tum jo itna muskura rahe ho kiya ghum jo chupa rahe ho :) 159956[/snapback] dil ke zakhmo-n ka andaza kab hota hai chehron se sahil se kya jaan sakoge darya kitna gehra hai....... Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
ibtisaam 0 Posted November 16, 2005 lakin zyada muskaranay say log SHAK main per jatay hain ; )well nice poem ... 159995[/snapback] logon ko shak karne do.... jo jalte hain unhein jalne do.... Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
vertosis_ather 0 Posted November 16, 2005 yeh baat huii na Ibtisaam!!!! Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Kiran 2 Posted November 17, 2005 hmm kiya baat hai abtisam dil khush ker diya Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
ibtisaam 0 Posted November 18, 2005 yeh baat huii na Ibtisaam!!!! 160086[/snapback] shukrya....ATHeR.. :flower: Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
ibtisaam 0 Posted November 18, 2005 hmm kiya baat hai abtisam dil khush ker diya 160321[/snapback] salam...... :flower: shukryaa KiRaN :) ....lekin ye kyaa mujhe ibtisaam se abtisaam kar diyaa…. :( & thnx KhUrShID. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
kurios 0 Posted November 18, 2005 Dil ki gehraai mein ghum chupatay raho Zindagii mein sada muskaratay raho 159555[/snapback] well i like this one :) though all poem was good but the one in the quotes i like it Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
