cooooolll 0 Posted July 25, 2003 salam all ae khuda ab tu ussay jhoomta badal ker day yun woh barsay keh meray pyar ko jal thal ker day meray mehboob k pairon ko jo chheenta choomay aisay chheentay ko chhanakti huee payal ker day kaisay mumkin hai keh maen hashr k suraj say darun mujh peh saya jo meray yaar ka aanchal ker day ae meray husn-e-khayal uss ko sajanay k liye subh ko ghazah bana , raat ko kajal ker day aaj phir jheel kinaaray mujhay tarrpata hai kaash iss chand ko pani mein koee hul ker day ae muqadar mujhay tarsaye ga aakhir kab tak? yaa meri baat samajh, yaa mujhay pagal ker day woh mujhay ker to raha hai nazar andaaz qateel uss ko bhi waqt zamaanay say na ojhal ker day Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
ariba 0 Posted July 25, 2003 SALAM its really nice.good chioce coollll:D Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Shabo 0 Posted July 27, 2003 :hi: Cooooolll nice to see u on the shairi boards :D Wah wah kya baat hai nice choice Sx Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Gr8wajiha 0 Posted July 29, 2003 Qateel Shafai is one of the Best Poet... Sumthing frm me... Piyaas woh dil ki bujhaane kabhi aaya bhi nahi kaisa baadal hai jis ka koi saaya bhi nahi bey-rukhi iss se barrah key badi aur bhala kya ho gi ik muddat sey uss ney hamey sataya bhi nahi rooz aata hai der-e-dil pey woh dastak daine aaj tuk hum ney jise paas bulaya bhi nahi sun liya kaise khuda jaane zamaney bhar ney woh fasana jo kabhi hum ney sunaya bhi nahi tum tau shayer ho ~Qateel~ aur woh ik aam sa shakhs uss ney chaaha bhi tujhe aur jitaaya bhi nahi Nyce Poetry Cooooolll Regards; W.K. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
cooooolll 0 Posted July 31, 2003 thanx shabo.... ... to aap ko humari pasand pasand aaeee....bohat shurkriaaaa :) luvly contribution Gr8wajiha. .....well i ve read sum poetry by Qateel Shafaee and its great ....amazing stuff! Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
mansoor 0 Posted July 31, 2003 Meerr Inn Neem bazz Ankoon say bazz aaa Saree Mastee Sharab kee seee hai :D MAnsoor Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Gr8wajiha 0 Posted July 31, 2003 hey Mansoor, Meer is my favourite poet :( please unki itni achi poetry ki yeh halat tau na karo ! :P Wajiha Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Shabo 0 Posted July 31, 2003 Wajiha u tell him.. SHAIYAD aap ki baat Mansoor maan ley ;) Sx Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
munnibhai 0 Posted July 31, 2003 Ghalib is also a good one and Nasir Kazmi is a legend, main nay in dono ka poora deevan perha hay. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
mansoor 0 Posted August 1, 2003 OppppssS ... Kia Ghalat hoo gia kuch ? :P acha Too wajiha yaa tum hoo .. Waisay merray Khial main too Meer nay Kuch aisa hee Irshad kia tha .. waisay agar tum Correct kar doo too baree " ADABB NAWAZEE" hoo geee :D Shabo jee I am always ready to Improve :D "YoooNN Bariishoonn say dostee achee nahee Fraz Kachaa terra Makan hai Kuch too khial kar " Mansoor :D Mansoor Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Shabo 0 Posted August 1, 2003 Shabo jee I am always ready to Improve :D We ALL have room for improvement :) OK here's another Q.S. poem for u all ;) apnye haathon ki lakeeron mein basa ley mujhko main hoon teraa naseeb apna banaa ley mujhko mujhsey tu puchhane ayaa hai Wafaa k mainey yeh teri sadaa dili maar na daaley mujhko main samandar bhi hoon moti bhi hoon gotaazan bhi koee bhi naam mera ley k bulaa ley mujhko tu ney dekha nahin ainey sey agey kuchh bhi Khuda parasti mein kahin tu na ganvaa ley mujhko kal ki baat aur hai main ab sa rahoon ya na rahoon jitna ji chaahey tera aaj sata ley mujhko Khud ko main baant na daaloon kahin daaman-daaman kar diya tu ney agar merey havaaley mujhko main jo kaanta hoon to chal mujh se bacha kar daaman main hoon gar phool to joorey mein saja ley mujhko main khuley dar k kisi ghar ka hoon samaan pyaarey tu dabey paaun kabhi aa k chura ley mujhko tark-e-ulfat ki qasam bhi koiee hoti hai qasam tu kabhi yaad to kar bhulney waaley mujhko badaa phir badaa hai main zaher bhi pi jaaun "Qateel" shart yeh hai koi baanhon mein sambhaley mujhko Sx Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Gr8wajiha 0 Posted August 1, 2003 Mansoor Correction for u ; Meer in neem baaz aankhon mein Saari masti sharab ki si hai :D Regards; W.K. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Gr8wajiha 0 Posted August 1, 2003 hey mansoor I think i m here,,, but if u say then ...... :P anyway, Zindah dilaan-e-shehr ko kya ho gaya ~Faraz~ aankhen bujhi bujhi tau chehre merry merrey Wajiha Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
cooooolll 0 Posted August 3, 2003 salam alll zabardast shairi hai aap sub ki janab.... to kya hua agar aik aadh galati hogaee :) iss sheher mein kis say milay, hum say to chhootin mehfilain har shakhs tera naam lay , har shakhs deewana tera koochay ko teray chorr kar jogi he ban jayain magar jungle teray , parbat teray , busti teri , sehra tera tu ba wafa , tu meharbaan , hum aur tujh say badguman hum nay to poocha tha zara,yeh wasf kyoun thhehra tera hum per yeh sakhti ki nazar, hum hain faqeer e rah guzar rasta bhi roka tera , daman bhi thama tera haan haan teri soorat haseen laikin tu itna bhi nahin uss shakhs kay ashaar say shohra hua kya kya tera bedard sunti ho to chal , kehta hai kya acchi ghazal aashiq tera , ruswa tera , shayer tera , INSHA tera IBN E INSHA Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Kiran 2 Posted August 3, 2003 Assalam O Alikum! nice collection :) POOCHTE HAIN LOOG MUJH SE MERA KIYA LAGTA HAI WOH KOI NEKI THI MERI JISKA SILA LAGTA HAI WOH ZINDAGI KO US NE DI HAI DULHANOO JAISI PABHAN ZINDAGI KE HAATH PE RANG-E-HINA LAGTA HAI WOH DE IJAZAT WOH TO ATTI HAI GULISTAAN MAIN BAHAR MOSAM-E-GUL KA HASEEN FERMA RAWA LAGTA HAI WOH US SE HOSAKT HAI KUCH CHARA GARMI KI BHI UMID DER DETA HAI MAGAR DERD ASHNA LAGTA HAI WOH..!! YAAD KERTA HAI HAZAROON KOSSOO SE JAB WOH MUJHE DUUR SE ATTI PAPIHE KI SADA LAGTA HAI WOH DUSHMANO KA SAMNA KERTA HAI JAB WOH MERE LIYE ANDHIYON KE DERMIYAA JALTA DIYA LAGTA HAI WOH KATT RAHI THI ZINDAGI BEMADDA'A APNI QATEEL ABH TO MERI ZINDAGI KA MADDA'A LAGTA HAI WOH bye Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Gr8wajiha 0 Posted August 4, 2003 DUSHMANO KA SAMNA KERTA HAI JAB WOH MERE LIYEANDHIYON KE DERMIYAA JALTA DIYA LAGTA HAI WOH KATT RAHI THI ZINDAGI BEMADDA'A APNI QATEEL ABH TO MERI ZINDAGI KA KA MADDA'A LAGTA HAI WOH Wa-alaikum-salam Kiran :) wot a fantastic poetry Wajiha Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
munnibhai 0 Posted August 4, 2003 subah jeeti k shaam-e-tenhaai kis nay zanjeer kis ko pehnaai dil dahrknay k sabab yaad aaya wo teri yaad thi ab yaad aya bana k dil ko aaena-e-bardar-e-aarzoo hanstaa raha koi pas-e-deevar-e-aarzoo Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
mansoor 0 Posted August 6, 2003 mujhsey tu puchhane ayaa hai Wafaa k mainey yeh teri sadaa dili maar na daaley mujhko :D hmmmm shabo !!!!! that is g8888 piece of poetry yaa Ghazall sunnnay main Bhut zaberdast hai .... have u listened it from Noor Jihaaan ? i m thinkin an appropriate shair .............. laiken ajjj sara din patients kee histories sun sun kar wohee damaggg main aa rahee hain :( .... Hey Shabs .... LooooNg time no seee ???? kidhar ghayab hoo ? :D hahahha Wajiha .... soooOo U are here thats good enough :D well about correction thanks for that but i still think mera wala shair ziada impressive hai ... kia khaial hai app ka ? :P reply to ur shair i will say " Mohbbbat karnay waloon ka ayheee injam hoota hai Kabhi khansi kabhi Nazla Kabhe ZuKam hoot ahi :D" i think thats what happened to " ZINDA DILAN shehar :D Regards MansOor :D Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Shabo 0 Posted August 6, 2003 :hi: Salaaaaaam all Nice shairi every1 bohot khoob Hey Shabs .... LooooNg time no seee ???? kidhar ghayab hoo ? :D Heyyyyy I am here my Friend ;) arz kiya hai (mey ney nahi Mr Q.S. ney :)) duniyaa ne ham pe jab koiee ilzaam rakh diya hum ney muqaabil us k tera naam rakh diya ik Khaas had pe aa gaiey jab teri berukhi naam us ka hum ney gardish-e-ayyaam rakh diya main ladkhara raha hoon tujhey dekh-dekh kar tu ney to merey samaney ik jaam rakh diya kitna sitam_zarif hai woh sahib-e-jamaal us ney diya jala k lab-e-baam rakh diya insaan aur dekhe baghair us ko maan ley ik Khauf ka bashar ney Khudaa naam rakh diya ab jis ke ji mey aiey wohi payey roshni hum ney to dil jalaa k sar-e-aam rakh diya kya masalahat_shanaas tha woh admi 'Qateel' majaburiyon ka jis ney wafaa naam rakh diya Sx Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
umair.zm 0 Posted August 6, 2003 SALAM alll of u guyzzzzzz......... hey kiran jie nice poetry gr8.......mansoor n muni bhaie u have posted nice poetry too:y:........... shabnam jie gr8 poetry urs tooo..... a lil poetry from me .......hope fully u like dat....... ACHA nahi LAGTA "jo mera ho kisi ka ho mujhe acha nahi lagta muhabbat main sharakat ho mujhe acha nahi lagta bena tere koi musam acha nahi lagta nazer ko koi bhi manzer haseen acha nahi lagta main kese kahoon bena tere buhat khush hoon main na ho ger pass tu mujh ko kuch acha nahi lagta koi dekhe teri janab nahi manzoor ye mujh ko na ho is bat ka yaqeen ye acha nahi lagta kabhi tu haan keh de dil hi rekhne ke lie tera her bat pe kehna' na' acha nahi lagta ok bye alll of now tc all ALLAH HAFIZ Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Kiran 2 Posted August 6, 2003 wailkum salam n Assalam O Alikum! well umair thanx for the Compliment shabo tum bhi bohat achi poetry collection share ker rahi ho. :) JIS KI JHANKAR MAIN DIL KA ARAM THA, WOH TERA NAAM THA MERE HUNTOO PE RAKSAAN JO EK JAAM THA, WOH TERA NAAM THA MUJH SE MANSOOB THAIN DASTAIN KAI, EK SE EK NAI KHUBSORAT MAGAR JO ILZAM THA, WOH TERA NAAM THA DOST JITNE THAY NA'ASHNA HOGAYE, PARSA HOGAYE JO MERE SAATH ROSWA SAR-E-AAM THA, WOH TERA NAAM THA LOOG MUJH KO SHARABI KEHTE RAHE, DHOOL BAJTE RAHE MERE NASHE KA BAIS JO EK JAAM THA, WOH TERA NAAM THA SUBHA SE SHAAM TAK JO MERE PAAS THI, WOH TERI AAS THI SHAAM KE BAAD JO KUCH LAB-E-BAAM THA, WOH TERA NAAM THA YUN TO QUDRAT HAMESHA RAHI MEHERBAAN, DE DIYA SARA JHAN YEH JO SAB SE BARA US KA INAAM THA, WOH TERA NAAM THA TERE HI NAAM SE HAI QATEEL AAJ BHI SHAIRI KA "WALI" US KE SHAIROON MAIN KAL BHI JO ILHAAM THA, WOH TERA NAAM THA nice na? i like that ghazal too much hope u guys would too Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
mansoor 0 Posted August 17, 2003 ab jis ke ji mey aiey wohi payey roshni hum ney to dil jalaa k sar-e-aam rakh diya kya masalahat_shanaas tha woh admi 'Qateel' majaburiyon ka jis ney wafaa naam rakh diya What a Classic piece of Poetry Bhoot khOOob Shabnam ! These two closing shairs are my all time favourte .. aik bat batoo .. sachee sachee ... did u wrote that Ghazal Zabani ? Max Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
