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aray great poetry..!!

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aray Kiran shak ke tu baat he nahee :)

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These two closing shairs are my all time favourte .. aik bat batoo .. sachee  sachee  ... did u  wrote that Ghazal Zabani ?

Of course Max ;) like I can remember all those words!!! :lol:

mil kar juda huay to na soiya karein gey hum

ek dusrey ki yaad mein roya karein ge hum

aansu chhalak chhalak k satayein ge raat bhar

moti palak palak mein piroya karein ge hum

jab duuriyon ki aag dilon ko jalaye gi

jismon ko chaandni mein bhigoyaa karein ge hum

gar de gayaa daghaa humein tufaan bhii 'Qateel'

saahil pe kashtiyon ko Duboyaa karein ge hum

Sx

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wow wonderful ....absolutely magnificent....Qateel Shifaee :yes: ......luvly stufff shabo jeee tusi tay kamal he sha'iri share kiti ae ;)

gar de gayaa daghaa humein tufaan bhii 'Qateel'

saahil pe kashtiyon ko Duboyaa karein ge hum

cooooooooooooooooooooolllllll stufffffffff

:rolleyes:

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wow bhi zaber10 kiya baat hai Umair n shabo ki :yes:

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