NaDaN 0 Posted August 18, 2003 aray great poetry..!! Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Kiran 2 Posted August 19, 2003 :o really nadan :P (kidding) Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
NaDaN 0 Posted August 19, 2003 aray Kiran shak ke tu baat he nahee :) Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Shabo 0 Posted August 19, 2003 These two closing shairs are my all time favourte .. aik bat batoo .. sachee sachee ... did u wrote that Ghazal Zabani ? Of course Max ;) like I can remember all those words!!! mil kar juda huay to na soiya karein gey hum ek dusrey ki yaad mein roya karein ge hum aansu chhalak chhalak k satayein ge raat bhar moti palak palak mein piroya karein ge hum jab duuriyon ki aag dilon ko jalaye gi jismon ko chaandni mein bhigoyaa karein ge hum gar de gayaa daghaa humein tufaan bhii 'Qateel' saahil pe kashtiyon ko Duboyaa karein ge hum Sx Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
cooooolll 0 Posted August 19, 2003 wow wonderful ....absolutely magnificent....Qateel Shifaee ......luvly stufff shabo jeee tusi tay kamal he sha'iri share kiti ae ;) gar de gayaa daghaa humein tufaan bhii 'Qateel' saahil pe kashtiyon ko Duboyaa karein ge hum cooooooooooooooooooooolllllll stufffffffff Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
sajjal 0 Posted August 20, 2003 nice post thx 4 sharing:) Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Kiran 2 Posted August 20, 2003 wow bhi zaber10 kiya baat hai Umair n shabo ki Share this post Link to post Share on other sites