jehan shah 0 Posted January 14, 2006 gardesh gham e dauran se nikal jain to acha----ab ishaq k wadon se behal jain to acha-----maloom hay tum chak mera jigar karoge---dil totnay se pehlay sanbhal jain to acha--sach hay k baharon main hi khiltay hain dil k phool---yeh phool khizanon main jo khil jain to acha----toba hay meri ishaq o mohabat se sanam se..yeh dard balain hain jo tal jain to acha--kartay hain duaa tark e mohabat ki hum jehan--dil main hain jo tofan ubal jain to acha Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
The_Truth 0 Posted January 14, 2006 bohat khoob ... Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Tashu 0 Posted January 16, 2006 Assalam O Alikum.. Welcome Here :) Aap kahain poet to nahi :P Anywayz Good Shair Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
ibtisaam 0 Posted January 17, 2006 salam...&..*walaikum salam tashu :P ... well bohot achhi gazal likhe ho.... :flower: Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Anoushy 0 Posted January 20, 2006 jehan shah shehan sha eye alam kay darbar main hum app ki nazam ki pasandidagi ka izhar karty hain.................... :P Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Deep eyez 0 Posted January 21, 2006 bohat khoob really very nice per aik suggestion ha <<< dil main hain jo tofan ubal jain to acha >>> is line may ubal jaay ki bjaay agar tul jaay ho to i think zyada better nhe rhay ga,,kiu?? like >>dil main hain jo toofan tul jaay to acha agay aap ki marzi, Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Anoushy 0 Posted January 21, 2006 bohat khoob deeps waqi tul bi better hai aur ubal bi Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
