Kiran 2 Posted January 27, 2006 (edited) Ajeeb larki hoon khud ko jalana chahtee hoon Mai khud ko rakh ker ke kaheen bhool jana chahtee hoon Mere naseeb ki khushiyaan bhee kab mili mujh ko Bas ab to umer bher aansoo bhana chahtee hoon Najanay kitni mohabbat hai ranj-o-ghum se mujhe Koi bhee dard ho dil mai chupana chahtee hoon Baha baha k ye aasnoo bikhar chuki hoon bahut Simat k zaat mai ab muskurana chahtee hoon Jise ik umer dil mai chupa k rakha hai Wo raaz aaj mai sab ko batana chahtee hoon Wahee hai yaad jo acha kaha hai logon ne Baqi saaray sitam bhool jana chahtee hoon Mujhe zamanay ne pathar samjh liya hai mager Mai eik larki hoon sab ko batana chahtee hoon Jo mujh se rooth chuki hain zamanay ki khushiyaan Kisi ko mai bhee apnay ghum sunana chahtee hoon Tu apnay dil k her eik dar ko khool day Mai dard ban ker teray dil mai aana chahtee hoon Edited January 27, 2006 by Kiran Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Kiran 2 Posted January 27, 2006 Wo apni bay gunahion ka jawaz danay laga hai Humain bhi iss pay thora yaqeen honay laga hai Pehlay wo kabhi youn deikhta na tha Mager ab mera bhi khial honay laga hai Chahatain hummari dum torr chukki thi Sahara hummain aab woo danay laga hai Tanhayian muskrahatain theen char soo meray Shehnayoon ka saman aab too honay laga hai Hoi khushi hummain ya sunn kay bohat Baray mai woo meray her ek say pochnay laga hai Hoo gaya hai abb hummain iss baat per yaqeen Dheiray dheirya usay bhi piyar honay laga hai Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
vertosis_ather 0 Posted January 27, 2006 wow!!!!!!!!!!!!!! really good kiran ji..... Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
ibtisaam 0 Posted January 27, 2006 salam... wah..bohot khoob kiran... Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
ibtisaam 0 Posted January 27, 2006 (edited) Wo apni bay gunahion ka jawaz danay laga hai Humain bhi iss pay thora yaqeen honay laga hai Pehlay wo kabhi youn deikhta na tha Mager ab mera bhi khial honay laga hai Chahatain hummari dum torr chukki thi Sahara hummain aab woo danay laga hai Tanhayian muskrahatain theen char soo meray Shehnayoon ka saman aab too honay laga hai Hoi khushi hummain ya sunn kay bohat Baray mai woo meray her ek say pochnay laga hai Hoo gaya hai abb hummain iss baat per yaqeen Dheiray dheirya usay bhi piyar honay laga hai 169833[/snapback] salam... really very nice...kiran... ab main aapko usski taraf se iss ghazal ka jawab ek shairy se deti hun... tere badan mein dharakne laga hun dil ki tarha... ye aur baat hai ki ab bhi tujhe sunai na dun... :flower: Edited January 27, 2006 by ibtisaam Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Kiran 2 Posted January 27, 2006 bohat khoob ibtisaam Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Deep eyez 0 Posted January 31, 2006 hmmmm...........good wordzzzzzzzzz Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
the_salman 0 Posted February 3, 2006 kisine dil ko es kadar chu liya hai, ki hum kisi aur ko chu na sakey, hum to chaley thay dost banane aur wo dhadkan ban baithe! Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
zehra 0 Posted February 3, 2006 bahut khoobsurat kiran. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Anoushy 0 Posted February 3, 2006 wowwwwwwwwwwww beatifulllllllll nishhhhhhhhh excellent Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Anoushy 0 Posted February 3, 2006 woh ajab ghari thi k me jiss ghari liya dars nuskha e ishq ka k kitaab akl ki taaq mei jyun dhari thi tyunhi dhari rahi Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
iftikhar 0 Posted February 3, 2006 wah wah very nice Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Anoushy 0 Posted February 3, 2006 thank you thank you jnab ap kaha ghum hain app ka khuch bi parny ko nahi mel raha Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
the_salman 0 Posted February 4, 2006 ARE WAH....... ANOUSHY KE DIMAAG ME BHI ACCHE SHER AANE LAG GAYE GOOD Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Kiran 2 Posted February 4, 2006 ohhh nice anoushy n salman bohat khoob kaha anoushy ) Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
the_salman 0 Posted February 4, 2006 Meri Baatain Tere Dil Mein Hamesha Bass Jaati Hain........... Is Baat Ki Khabar Rakh Kar Main Koi Guftagoo Kyon Karoon..... Batoon Batoon Main Benaam Fasaanay Ban jaate Hain..... Aur Aisi Adhuri Kahaani Ko Main Shuroo Kyon Karoon........ <_< Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Deep eyez 0 Posted February 4, 2006 ohhh kiran......welcome again n salman nice sharing Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
the_salman 0 Posted February 4, 2006 YE TO MERA FARZ THA...... Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Anoushy 0 Posted February 4, 2006 ARE WAH....... ANOUSHY KE DIMAAG ME BHI ACCHE SHER AANE LAG GAYEGOOD 171000[/snapback] kio jee app ka kia khayal hai shaireoo ka mery demag main any per ban laga hoa hai kia :angry2: thks kiraaaaaaaaaaaaan and ifti Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
the_salman 0 Posted February 4, 2006 DEKHO MERI BAAT PAR DEEP EYEZ NE KAHA "NICE SHARING" AP BAN KI BAAT KAR RAHI HE... KARFEW BHI LAGA HO TO KAM HE.... Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Anoushy 0 Posted February 4, 2006 DEKHO MERI BAAT PAR DEEP EYEZ NE KAHA "NICE SHARING"AP BAN KI BAAT KAR RAHI HE... KARFEW BHI LAGA HO TO KAM HE.... 171179[/snapback] TU PHIR MAIN KIA KAROO........OHH ACHA ACHA PEHLI BAR KAHA HAI NA :P Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Anoushy 0 Posted February 4, 2006 lagta tu essy hi hai Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
the_salman 0 Posted February 4, 2006 aaphe lagne se kya hota he......... Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Kiran 2 Posted March 6, 2006 Meri Her Souch Main Shamil Hai Khayaal Tumhara, Isay Sansoon Main Rachaounga Aitebaar Karo Hay Laboun Per Jo Merey Naam Tumhara Tumhain Apna Main Banaounga Aitebaar Karo, Hain Kathin Rah-e-Wafa Jana,Toh kYa Hota Hay? Dil Jala Ker Main Nibhaounga Aitebaar Karo Mujhe Tum Say Hai MUhabbat tumhain Khaber Hai yeh Main Isay Zindagi Banaounga Aitebaar Karo, Tumhara He Chehra Basa Hai Meri In Aankho Main, TuMhian Tabeer Banaounga Aitebaar Karo Tumhain Paa Ker Ho Jayegi Sehal Zindagi Meri. Yehi Duaa Bas Mangounga Aitebaar Karo, Khuwaboun Main Kabhi Khayaloun Main Kehta HOuN Tumse Yehi Main Zindagi Tum Sung Sajaounga Aitebaar Karo....!! Share this post Link to post Share on other sites