Kiran 2 Posted January 27, 2006 (edited) "KIA Haseen Din Thay Woh...." Kia haseen din thay woh kia lamhe huwa karte thay Jab hum pehron hi saath raha karte thay Khatam hoti hi nahi thi baatain apni Har baat par ek shair kaha karte thay Humari har baat se aati thi wafa ki khushboo Ek dosre ki awaz par hum roz jiya karte thay Baz waqt to dhal jaati thi shaam baaton main Yun hum har gham se hi begane raha karte thay Jane kyon phir hum chor gaye ek doosray ko...?? Bhool kar bhi na hum ek doojay ko khafa karte thay..! Yeh main rodad-e-gham sunaoon bhi to kis ko...?? Dil ki har baat hum aapas main kia karte thay!! Edited January 27, 2006 by Kiran Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Kiran 2 Posted January 27, 2006 Mujh ko deewana samajhte hain tere shehar ke log Mere daman se ulajhte hain tere shehar ke log Dil ki batain lab per nahi late lekin...! Mujh pe awazain to kaste hain tere shehar ke log Aur kia doon main tujhe apni wafaon ka saboot Ab mere hal pe hanste hain tere shehar ke log Main gaya waqt hoon wapis nahi aanay wala..! Kyon mera rasta takte hain tere shehar ke log Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Deep eyez 0 Posted January 27, 2006 both pieces are greaaaaaaaaaaat Khatam hoti hi nahi thi baatain apniHar baat par ek shair kaha karte thay lagta ha baray shairana bunday thay :P Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Deep eyez 0 Posted January 27, 2006 mention heeeeee not jeeeeeeeeeee Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Kiran 2 Posted January 27, 2006 pal bhar mein tamam umer ki sochein badal jati hain jin rahon per chaltey hain wohi, rahein badal jati hain karney ko kia nahi kartey log muhabbat mein sirf hamarey liye hi kyun? rasmein badal jati hain woh aisa hai k us ka nam sunney k tasawwer say hi hamari tamaam tar saatein badal jati hain sochti hoon jane kaise? kah paoon ghi main us say milti hoon to dil ki sari batein badal jati hain chahe "manzil" "dushwar" ho aur "duur" bhi humsafer us jaisa ho to musaftein badal jati hain yun to "raat" ka alam haseen hota hai, madhosh bhi magar"chand"dekhoon to meri ratein badal jati hain mat chaho,k mujhe aadat nahi itna chahne walon ki yeh na ho log kahein, jald hi adatein badal jati hain Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Aryaan 0 Posted January 28, 2006 Bohat hi alag aur munfard choice hai aapki...Excellent Work Kiran... Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Kiran 2 Posted January 28, 2006 hmm bas koshish hai :) Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Anoushy 0 Posted January 29, 2006 WOWWW KIRAN ITS VERY NICE Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
ibtisaam 0 Posted January 29, 2006 pal bhar mein tamam umer ki sochein badal jati hainjin rahon per chaltey hain wohi, rahein badal jati hain karney ko kia nahi kartey log muhabbat mein sirf hamarey liye hi kyun? rasmein badal jati hain woh aisa hai k us ka nam sunney k tasawwer say hi hamari tamaam tar saatein badal jati hain sochti hoon jane kaise? kah paoon ghi main us say milti hoon to dil ki sari batein badal jati hain chahe "manzil" "dushwar" ho aur "duur" bhi humsafer us jaisa ho to musaftein badal jati hain yun to "raat" ka alam haseen hota hai, madhosh bhi magar"chand"dekhoon to meri ratein badal jati hain mat chaho,k mujhe aadat nahi itna chahne walon ki yeh na ho log kahein, jald hi adatein badal jati hain 169939[/snapback] Grrrrrrrrrrrrrr8! :flower: qassam se kiran....bohot achhi gazal hai... :flower: Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Deep eyez 0 Posted January 31, 2006 wowwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww very nice Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
the_salman 0 Posted February 3, 2006 apne shero gazal se kiran aapne cy ko hila diya hamne jo pare aapke sher to hamko deewana bana diya :) Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Kiran 2 Posted February 4, 2006 Ahan.... kiya baat hai Salman sb aap ki ;) anyway thx ibtisaam n salman :) Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
the_salman 0 Posted February 4, 2006 sb aapki ........?????? kyaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa????????/ anyway its my pleasure Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Kiran 2 Posted February 4, 2006 Sb bole to Sahab ;) joking :) Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
junaidrauf 0 Posted February 4, 2006 Very Nice Kiran Great going Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Kiran 2 Posted February 4, 2006 thx n appreciation k ilawa aap bhi share ker liya karain junaid sb ;) :P Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Deep eyez 0 Posted February 4, 2006 wah wah kia shair kaha ha salman bro Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
the_salman 0 Posted February 4, 2006 MENE KAB KAHA SHAIR???????? Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Anoushy 0 Posted February 4, 2006 MENE KAB KAHA SHAIR???????? 171065[/snapback] app say ya kess ny kaha kay app ny kaha <_< ya tu hum ny kaha teri ankhon ki qasam abb bhi mughe hosh nahi teri zulfon ki qasam abb bhi pareshan hon mein janam tum na mera hasil emaan nahi dekha rukh per teri zulfon ko pareshan nahi dekha Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
the_salman 0 Posted February 4, 2006 MUJH SE DEEP EYEZ NE KAHA.. SAMJHI...... Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Anoushy 0 Posted February 4, 2006 OHHH HOOOO DEEPS ZARA BACH KAY....... MUNDA ZARA TEEZ LAGTA HAI.... :D intezar hai lafzoon ka jo dil pe lagain perh ke jinko hum kuch bi na keh sakain Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
the_salman 0 Posted February 4, 2006 ISKI BAATO ME MAT ANA DEEPZ ,,, Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Kiran 2 Posted March 6, 2006 (edited) Mayoos mat hona yeh aik gunnah hota hai Milta wahi hai jo qismat main likha hota hai Har cheez miley humain yeh zaroori tou nahi Kuch cheezon ka zikar doosre jahan main hota hai Jo khud ko kostey hain woh shayed bekhabar hain Kuch paa lene ka ikhtiyar khud pe bhi hota hai Har aik ko barsar-e-ilzam kiun thehrayein hum Apne samne bhi tou aik ayeena hota hai Hum apni zindagi se kiun haar jayein Gar doobta hai sooraj tou kal bhi ujala hota hai Edited March 6, 2006 by Kiran Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
the_salman 0 Posted March 6, 2006 VERY VERY VERY VERY VERY VERY VERY VERY VERY VERY NICE KIRAN I LIKE THIS TYPE OF POETRY VERY MUCH KEEP IT UP Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
