Deep eyez 0 Posted February 10, 2006 Bara kathin hay rasta,jo aa sako to sath do Yeh zindagi ka fasla ,mitta sako to sath do Baray faraib khao gay,baray sittam uthao gay Yeh umer bhar ka sath hay,nibha sako to sath do Main ik gareeb bay'nwa,main ik faqeer bay'sada Meri nazar ki iltajja jo paa sako to sath do jo tum kaho to yeh dil to kia,main jaa(n) bhe fidda karoo Jo main kahoon to ik nazar lutta sako to sath do Hazaar mushkilain yahan,hazaar azmaishain Hazaar dukh ,hazar ghum uttha sako to sath do Yeh zindagi yahan khushi ghammon ka sath hay Hansa sako to sath do,rulla sako to sath do! Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
ariba 0 Posted February 10, 2006 Hazaar mushkilain yahan,hazaar azmaishainHazaar dukh ,hazar ghum uttha sako to sath do Yeh zindagi yahan khushi ghammon ka sath hay Hansa sako to sath do,rulla sako to sath do! Very nice!! Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Anoushy 0 Posted February 10, 2006 hmm wow very nice deep apny tu dhamaka kar diya deepo Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Deep eyez 0 Posted February 10, 2006 Very nice!! 172402[/snapback] Thanxxx ariba :flower: good to see you in my topic :) Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Deep eyez 0 Posted February 10, 2006 hmm wow very nice deepapny tu dhamaka kar diya deepo 172420[/snapback] Thanxxxxx annu dear :flower: or bae main nay socha annu itnay dhmakay karti rehti hay,salman say lar lar kay,,,, :P aik dhmaka hum bhe kar dain aik ache c poetry post kar k. :D ... Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Anoushy 0 Posted February 10, 2006 aik dhmaka hum bhe kar dain  aik ache c poetry post kar k. :D ... 172466[/snapback] kam dhmaky kiya kary aj kal tu melt.... wally essy bi logo ko pakrny ki koshish main rehty hain :( Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Aryaan 0 Posted February 10, 2006 Very Nice Deep Eyes.. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Deep eyez 0 Posted February 10, 2006 kam dhmaky kiya kary aj kal tu melt.... wally essy bi logo ko pakrny ki koshish main rehty hain :( 172482[/snapback] bae meray dhamaky per to woh log bhe wah wah karain gay, :D :P :D or tumhay pakar k lay jaay gay unhay galat report dynay k jurm may n Aaryaan bro thanxxxx :flower: kay aap nay bhe yeh poetry parhee or reply kia, Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Chandani 0 Posted February 10, 2006 wowww deepz tumhain tu poet hona chihiye thaaa :D Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
ibtisaam 0 Posted February 11, 2006 salam... sabse pehle to sorry for replying so late.... "jo tum kaho to yeh dil to kia,main jaa(n) bhe fidda karoo Jo main kahoon to ik nazar lutta sako to sath do Hazaar mushkilain yahan,hazaar azmaishain Hazaar dukh ,hazar ghum uttha sako to sath do Yeh zindagi yahan khushi ghammon ka sath hay Hansa sako to sath do,rulla sako to sath do!" very nice deepz.... :flower: Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Deep eyez 0 Posted February 12, 2006 wowww deepz tumhain tu poet hona chihiye thaaa :D 172601[/snapback] Thanx dear :flower: per yeh piece meri collection may say hay,may nay nhe likhi yeh :D jis jin itna acha likhna start kar dia :angel: na us din aap ko treat doon gee :) n thanxxxxxx alot ibti dear :flower: or sorry 4 what??? koe bat nhe aa to gae na :) Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
DUA_ALI 0 Posted February 12, 2006 nice deep achi hai per koun kiss ka saath itna dayta hai bus sub saath ki umed kertey hain zaroor per us saath ko nibhata koi koi hai Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
cooLboY-Be 0 Posted February 12, 2006 Vey nice poetry Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Deep eyez 0 Posted February 13, 2006 THANXXXX dua aapi.......or sath dynay ki bat hay jahan tk to....insan ka saya bhe her waqt us ka sath nhe dyta...to insano ki kia bat karain, n THANXXX cool boy.........good to see u in my post Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Chandani 0 Posted February 13, 2006 (edited) Thanx dear :flower: per yeh piece meri collection may say hay,may nay nhe likhi yeh :D jis jin itna acha likhna start kar dia :angel: na us din aap ko treat doon gee :) n 172834[/snapback] but still poet starting main tuu dosaroo kii shairy main dilchasbii leta hai tab hii oss koo poetry likny kaa shouq hota...u knw wat i mean to say??? Edited February 13, 2006 by Chandani Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Deep eyez 0 Posted February 14, 2006 but still poet starting main tuu dosaroo kii shairy main dilchasbii leta hai tab hii oss koo poetry likny kaa shouq hota...u knw wat i mean to say??? 173088[/snapback] shaid tum nay sahee kaha chandani per aik bat bataoon????? shaid tumhay yaqeen na aay..... mujhy kabhe b poetry say dilchaspi nahe rahee thee.... phir achanak say mujhy pata nahee kia hua k main nay poetry likhna start kar dee, phir mujhy poetry may kuch dilchaspi hue......or khud ki poetry likhnay k bad main nay poetry parhna start ki... wasay abhe bhe mera poetry say janoon ki hud tak koe link nahee ha,bus parh lyti hoon , Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
DUA_ALI 0 Posted February 15, 2006 DEEP ZINDAGEI MAI BUHAT SE CHEEZ BUHAT ACHNAK HE HO JAYTI HAIN JO HUM SOCHTEY BHE NAHE HAIN Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Chandani 0 Posted February 15, 2006 (edited) shaid tum nay sahee kaha chandani per aik bat bataoon?????shaid tumhay yaqeen na aay..... mujhy kabhe b poetry say dilchaspi nahe rahee thee.... phir achanak say mujhy pata nahee kia hua k main nay poetry likhna start kar dee, phir mujhy poetry may kuch dilchaspi hue......or khud ki poetry likhnay k bad main nay poetry parhna start ki... wasay abhe bhe mera poetry say janoon ki hud tak koe link nahee ha,bus parh lyti hoon , 173323[/snapback] :o acha really wowwww this izz amazing k aako suddenly shairy karny ka shouq hova...hmm dont u worry aap ahista ahista poetry kii shouqeen hoo jye giii..........wesay ye life main suddenly change anna bohat ajeeb baat hai....i think starting main shair aesa hii hota hai yaa starting main shair ke saath aesa hii kuch hota hai <_< hmmmmm shall i ask u something k... kia aap shair banna chaty hain ya nahinn??? MISS shairana :D Edited February 15, 2006 by Chandani Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Anoushy 0 Posted February 15, 2006 So here we are Together once more, The love of our youth Still beating in our hearts. Time has passed, But our souls remember, The love we shared That was so true Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Deep eyez 0 Posted February 17, 2006 :o acha really wowwww this izz amazing k aako suddenly shairy karny ka shouq hova...hmm dont u worry aap ahista ahista poetry kii shouqeen hoo jye giii..........wesay ye life main suddenly change anna bohat ajeeb baat hai....i think starting main shair aesa hii hota hai yaa starting main shair ke saath aesa hii kuch hota hai <_< hmmmmm shall i ask u something k... kia aap shair banna chaty hain ya nahinn??? MISS shairana :D 173434[/snapback] hmmmm...........i don't know ;) her poem likhnay kay bad mujhy yahe lagta hay kay is kay bad may kuch nahe likh sakoo gee :( ..... yani mujhy to samajh hee nahe aati kay may nay poetry jesi koe cheez kesay likh li :o any wayzzzzzz :angel: jub tak coolyar may rahoon gee aap ko apni poemz post kar kar kay bor honay kay mawaqay zaroooooooooooor faraham karti rahoon gee :D ...... Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Chandani 0 Posted February 17, 2006 hmmm okay deeepz.....n u hav v.strange feelingz...i mean unique Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Deep eyez 0 Posted February 18, 2006 hmmm okay deeepz.....n u hav v.strange feelingz...i mean unique 173763[/snapback] ohhhhhh really ;) do you think so???? Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
