Deep eyez 0 Posted February 14, 2006 (edited) Aaj ki rim jhim barish may bheeghtaa..... Woh aagaya ik bar phir say nazar kay samnay.... Jisay bhoolnay may bari mushkil hue thee.... Usay daykh kar........ Us kay sath Guzaray woh tamam lamhaat yaad aag'ay... Jinhay main puranay oraaq may likhi hue ...... Tehriroo(n) ki tarha faramosh kar chuki the... Woh tamam batay yaad aagaee(n)... Jin pay bari mushkil say.... Andharay parday dalay thay... woh "Pehla Pyaar" tha shaid isliay..... Yaad rahee(n) uski rafaaqat ki tamam...... Nikharti subhain... Bheegi shaamain... Khamosh chandani ratain.... Ik doojay say banti batain..... or woh.... Madham see pakiza muskurahatain... Maazi pr say perda urtay hee..... Dil....... Bari shiddat kay sath rooya hay.... Such kehtay hain kay.... Pehla Pyaar..... Kabhe nahee bhoolta... Dil kay kisi khamosh goshay may.... sad'da zinda rehta hay! (specially chandani kay israar per post ki hay) Edited February 14, 2006 by Deep eyez Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
DUA_ALI 0 Posted February 15, 2006 NICE DEEP PEHLA PYAR THO SHAYAD KABHE KOI NAH EBHOTA DEEP KUCH ES CHEEZ KO SAMJH BHE NAHE PAYTEY KUCH LOG BUS PYAR KERN ABHE JANTEY HAIN BUAHT ZAYDA US KA SEWA KUCH SOCHTEY HE NAHE ESLIYA Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
vertosis_ather 0 Posted February 15, 2006 very nice deepo.....ye kya waqai aap ne khud likha hai??!!! really good Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
ibtisaam 0 Posted February 15, 2006 salam.... grrrrrrrrrrrrrrr8! humara intezaar khatm.... :) aur phir se shiru next ke liye.... :flower: Dil....... Bari shiddat kay sath rooya hay.... Such kehtay hain kay.... Pehla Pyaar..... Kabhe nahee bhoolta... Dil kay kisi khamosh goshay may.... sad'da zinda rehta hay! such....!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! koi kabhi apni pehli wafa nahi bhool sakta.... bohot achhi gazal likhi hai deeepz...... :flower: waiting for next.... :flower: Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Deep eyez 0 Posted February 15, 2006 NICE DEEP PEHLA PYAR THO SHAYAD KABHE KOI NAH EBHOTA DEEP KUCH ES CHEEZ KO SAMJH BHE NAHE PAYTEY KUCH LOG BUS PYAR KERN ABHE JANTEY HAIN BUAHT ZAYDA US KA SEWA KUCH SOCHTEY HE NAHE ESLIYA 173330[/snapback] thanx :flower: or yeh bhe such kaha kay pehlay to log is cheez ko samjhtay hee nahe hain..... i agree :) but............... meri yeh poem tamaaaaaaam sachi muhabat karnay walo kay naam ha.... jesay kay...... Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Deep eyez 0 Posted February 15, 2006 very nice deepo.....ye kya waqai aap ne khud likha hai??!!!really good 173367[/snapback] Thanxxx alot ather oh.....i mean toasted :P or yeh WAQAYHEE main nay khood likhi hay apnay beautifull hatho say....... but it is orignal production of my mind :angel: any wayz thanxxx again :flower: ' ' ' ' ' ' ' ' ' ' ' ' ' ' ' wasay ab itneeee bhe achee nhe ha...bus theek hee ha :) Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Deep eyez 0 Posted February 15, 2006 salam....grrrrrrrrrrrrrrr8! humara intezaar khatm.... :) aur phir se shiru next ke liye.... :flower: Dil....... Bari shiddat kay sath rooya hay.... Such kehtay hain kay.... Pehla Pyaar..... Kabhe nahee bhoolta... Dil kay kisi khamosh goshay may.... sad'da zinda rehta hay! such....!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! koi kabhi apni pehli wafa nahi bhool sakta.... bohot achhi gazal likhi hai deeepz...... :flower: waiting for next.... :flower: 173372[/snapback] salam :flower: Thanxxxx alooooooooooooooot ibti or ab next next keh kar zyada makhan mut lagao mujhay itna acha nahee likhti :( or kia khoob keh dia ha tum nay ibti k (koi kabhi apni pehli wafa nahi bhool sakta....) zaberdast bohat acha kaha....... waqay hee jis pyaar main wafa ho woh kabhe nhe bhol sakta.......i agree Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Anoushy 0 Posted February 15, 2006 hmmm very gud deeps its realy very nish Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Deep eyez 0 Posted February 15, 2006 Thanxxxxxx Annu :flower: Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Chandani 0 Posted February 15, 2006 woww gr8 poetry deepz kia baat hai aap kii Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
DUA_ALI 0 Posted February 16, 2006 meri yeh poem tamaaaaaaam sachi muhabat karnay walo kay naam ha.... jesay kay...... deep jesay kay koun woh bhe bata dayti na Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Anoushy 0 Posted February 17, 2006 Poochay jo koi meri nishaani Naam ada likhna goray badan pe ungli se mera Naam hina likhna kabhi kabhi aas pass chand rehta hai kabhi kabhi aas pass shaam rehti hai aaona aaoona Jhelum main behlengay Waadi k mausam bhi aik din to badlengay kabhi kabhi aas pass chand rehta hai kabhi kabhi aas pass shaam rehti hai aaon to subah jaoon to mera naam naam subah likhna barf paray to barf peh mera naam dua likhna kabhi kabhi ass pass aww waag rehti hai kabhi kabhi aas pass shaam rehti hai Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Deep eyez 0 Posted February 17, 2006 woww gr8 poetry deepzkia baat hai aap kii 173409[/snapback] Thanxxxxxxxxxx alot dear chandoo 4 ur appericiation Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Deep eyez 0 Posted February 17, 2006 meri yeh poem tamaaaaaaam sachi muhabat karnay walo kay naam ha....jesay kay...... deep jesay kay koun woh bhe bata dayti na 173475[/snapback] hmmmmmmmmm......... ;) jesay kay ................... Dua aapi ........ jesay kay or bahat say log.... jesay kay .......... shaid main but my love is still with me as urz aray yeh main kia likh raheee hoon................??? plz meri bato ko koe serious mut lay................ Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Deep eyez 0 Posted February 17, 2006 Poochay jo koi meri nishaani Naam ada likhna goray badan pe ungli se mera Naam hina likhna kabhi kabhi aas pass chand rehta hai kabhi kabhi aas pass shaam rehti hai 173689[/snapback] dear annu song to yeh bohat acha hay per.................. aap nay is ka operation kar kay is kay hath paoon ko replace kar dia hay................ :D yeh kuch is tarha hay..... poochay jo koe meri nishani.. rang hina likhna.... goray badan pay ungli say mera naam ada likhna... Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Chandani 0 Posted February 17, 2006 Thanxxxxxxxxxx alot dear chandoo 4 ur appericiation 173695[/snapback] it wazz my pleasure :) Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
DUA_ALI 0 Posted February 18, 2006 hmmmmmmmmm......... ;) jesay kay ................... Dua aapi ........ jesay kay or bahat say log.... jesay kay .......... shaid main but my love is still with me as urz aray yeh main kia likh raheee hoon................??? plz meri bato ko koe serious mut lay................ 173696[/snapback] why deep um say kafi din say baat nahe howi tumahri bataion ko shayad mai serious le loon batyioo na my love is still with meas urz say mutlab keya hai deel Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Aryaan 0 Posted February 18, 2006 Bohat khoob Deep Eyes & Anoushy.... Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Deep eyez 0 Posted February 18, 2006 why deep um say kafi din say baat nahe howi tumahri bataion ko shayad mai serious le loon batyioo na my love is still with meas urz say mutlab keya hai deel 173771[/snapback] salam dua appi bus aaj kal thora busy hoon.. :) ..per online to hoti hoon but bad luck k aap us wqt nahe hoteen or mera matlab yeh tha kay jesa kay poem may likha hay kay pehla peyar..... jo kay ab sath nahe hay.... to may yeh keh rahe the kay....mine is with me as urz is with urz simple.... is may aisi to koe bat nhe hay.... or na mera matlab kuch or tha:( Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Deep eyez 0 Posted February 18, 2006 Bohat khoob Deep Eyes & Anoushy.... 173835[/snapback] Thanxxxx alot Aryaan bro :flower: n signature is cooooooool man Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
