DUA_ALI 0 Posted February 16, 2006 Zindage ney hazar roop badle hain marey samney Kabhe khushi kabhe dukhde gayi marey samney Sari khubyain bhar di aik he insan mai us ney Who mujha he dhoka de gayai tah aisa marey samney Dekh rahe thi mai us ko khamosh sahil ki tarah Samander mai dobi thi kashti aise marey samney Kabhe la taluq ho bhe jayai who mujh say tho Karey ga who her kaise say baat marey samney Kabhe na who samjhey na hum koapni chahat mai Marey ruswayai ki beh tho us ney marey samney Tor doon her rista us say mai yeh sochti hoon Per mara dil khud say majobor hai marey samney Tamaam umer bhe guzar doon ge us ka naam per Marey pyar ka naam na nazar aya usey marey samney Sochti hoon ab mai apni muhabbat ko bhe koi naam na doon Keun ka mari muhabbat ka mazak uthyia hai us ney marey samney Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
cooLboY-Be 0 Posted February 16, 2006 Very touchy Great Peotry Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Anoushy 0 Posted February 16, 2006 great 1 dil khush ho gaya Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Deep eyez 0 Posted February 16, 2006 goooooooood aap nay likhi ha????? very nice try..............keep it up Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
iftikhar 0 Posted February 16, 2006 Zindage ney hazar roop badle hain marey samney Kabhe khushi kabhe dukhde gayi marey samney very nice dua :flower: Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Chandani 0 Posted February 16, 2006 ;) wowwwwwwwwww nice poetry dua Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Talaash 0 Posted February 17, 2006 really Nice ...zaberdast :) Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
DUA_ALI 0 Posted February 17, 2006 great 1 dil khush ho gaya 173523[/snapback] THANXXXXXXXXXXX ANNU TUMHARA BHE DIL KHUSH HOWA Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
DUA_ALI 0 Posted February 17, 2006 (edited) gooooooooodaap nay likhi ha????? very nice try..............keep it up 173549[/snapback] THANX DEEP HAAN MAI NEY HE LIKA HAI BUS TRY KERTI HOON KABHE NA KABHE THO ES SAY BUHAT ACHA LIKHOON GEE THANX IFTI & CHANDANI &TALAASH APP KO ACHI LAGE THANX Edited February 17, 2006 by DUA_ALI Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
DUA_ALI 0 Posted February 18, 2006 thanx annu sahe achi hai Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Anoushy 0 Posted February 18, 2006 thanx annu sahe achi hai 173770[/snapback] karam hai app ka janab Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Deep eyez 0 Posted February 19, 2006 THANX DEEP HAAN MAI NEY HE LIKA HAI BUS TRY KERTI HOON KABHE NA KABHE THO ES SAY BUHAT ACHA LIKHOON GEE 173663[/snapback] bilkul.........hope for the best :flower: Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
DUA_ALI 0 Posted February 20, 2006 thanx deep very much but where r u Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
ibtisaam 0 Posted February 20, 2006 salam.... sorry for late replying.... very nice DUA.....bohot achhi likhi hai ........ very nice keep it up..... specially mujhe ye asharz achhe lage.... Tor doon her rista us say mai yeh sochti hoon Per mara dil khud say majobor hai marey samney Tamaam umer bhe guzar doon ge us ka naam per Marey pyar ka naam na nazar aya usey marey samney Sochti hoon ab mai apni muhabbat ko bhe koi naam na doon Keun ka mari muhabbat ka mazak uthyia hai us ney marey samney now.......waiting for ur next ghazal..... Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Deep eyez 0 Posted February 20, 2006 (edited) thanx deep very much but where r u 174069[/snapback] no need to thanxxxx........n me is still on the earth :P aap kahan hain????lgta hay aaj kal kafi busy hain :) Edited February 20, 2006 by Deep eyez Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
DUA_ALI 0 Posted February 21, 2006 mai keya busy tum nahe ayti aaj kal tho tum busy lati ho mai tho bus aise he kuch thori tabayait theek nahe hai aaj kal bus Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
DUA_ALI 0 Posted February 21, 2006 salam....sorry for late replying.... very nice DUA.....bohot achhi likhi hai ........ very nice keep it up..... specially mujhe ye asharz achhe lage.... Tor doon her rista us say mai yeh sochti hoon Per mara dil khud say majobor hai marey samney Tamaam umer bhe guzar doon ge us ka naam per Marey pyar ka naam na nazar aya usey marey samney Sochti hoon ab mai apni muhabbat ko bhe koi naam na doon Keun ka mari muhabbat ka mazak uthyia hai us ney marey samney now.......waiting for ur next ghazal..... 174078[/snapback] thanx & nice mai or keya likhoon ge kuch apne zindagi ko sara dukh de diya hain us ney marey samney Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
