Miss_Jee 0 Posted March 24, 2006 Tum Sey Bicharey Tu Ik Zamana Guzra Magar Ajj Bhi Yeh Meri Udas Ankhein Tumhain Yaad Kar Key Chalakney Ko Bey'taab Ho Jatti Hain Or Mein Apno Ankhon Per Lakh Pehrey Bithaney Key Ba'wajud Apney App Ko Bey'bas Mehsoos Karti Hon Iss Panchi Ki Terhan Jo Sari Umer Pinjarey Mein Guzar Kar Bhi Apney Ashiyaney Ko Nahee Bhoolta Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Sahir 0 Posted March 25, 2006 SALAM MISS JEE Tum Sey Bicharey Tu Ik Zamana GuzraMagar Ajj Bhi Yeh Meri Udas Ankhein Tumhain Yaad Kar Key Chalakney Ko Bey'taab Ho Jatti Hain Or Mein Apno Ankhon Per Lakh Pehrey Bithaney Key Ba'wajud Apney App Ko Bey'bas Mehsoos Karti Hon Iss Panchi Ki Terhan Jo Sari Umer Pinjarey Mein Guzar Kar Bhi Apney Ashiyaney Ko Nahee Bhoolta Miss Jee kamal kerti hain aap tu buhut khob nice wording Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
vertosis_ather 0 Posted March 25, 2006 Miss Jee Dil ko chuu liya yar...... very touchy.... these lines are awesome! Apney App Ko Bey'bas Mehsoos Karti Hon Iss Panchi Ki Terhan Jo Sari Umer Pinjarey Mein Guzar Kar Bhi Apney Ashiyaney Ko Nahee Bhoolta Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Miss_Jee 0 Posted March 25, 2006 Thx Alot Sahir n vertosis ather...... :) Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
jehan shah 0 Posted March 25, 2006 Miss jee, bohat khoob bohat achi hay. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Miss_Jee 0 Posted March 25, 2006 Thx Jehan Shah.. :) Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
REEM 0 Posted March 27, 2006 Salaam miss.jee, :flower: woh hum do din se nahin aa rahe the isi liye aapki poetry nahin par paaye. anyways ab par li humne aur sachi bahut acchi hai. ek shair aap ke liye. Shaam dhali phir kaali raat chaayi Dil dhadka phir tumhari yaad aayi Saanson ne mehsoos kiya us hawa ko jo tumhe chukar hamare paas aayi. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Miss_Jee 0 Posted March 27, 2006 Thx Alot Reem........ :) Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Kanwel 0 Posted March 27, 2006 bohut khubsoorat poem hain achi hai acha likhti hyein likhti rahyein aur share kerti rahyein be happy Always... Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
vertosis_ather 0 Posted March 28, 2006 "Yaqeen apni mohabbat pe itna hai mujhe, meri chahjat ko dekho gay tou laut aaoge...." :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( zabardast hai yar..... Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
