jehan shah 0 Posted March 28, 2006 sab ko siarab e wafa kar k bhi piasa rehna.. hum ko lay doobe ga aye dil tera darya rehna.. be tahafuz hoon muje khauf hay lut jane ka.. tu sada pass mere jaan e tammna rehna.. baat deewaroon se kar laite hain pyaron ki jaga.. aagaya hum ko bhare ghar main akaila rehna.. yaad bhi us ki yeh kehti hoi dil se nikli.. aisi ujdi hoi basti main bhala kia rehna.. sari dunya ko dekhain gay jo hum dekhain gay.. ankh rakhte howay mumkin nahin andha rehna.. husan walon ki zahanat bhi qiyamat hay Qateel.. samne la k hum khud pas e parda rehna.. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Miss_Jee 0 Posted March 28, 2006 yaad bhi us ki yeh kehti hoi dil se nikli.. aisi ujdi hoi basti main bhala kia rehna.. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Kanwel 0 Posted March 28, 2006 wah!! khubsurat by had umda alfaz aur kehny ka andaz by had khubsurat keep posting Khush rahyein!! jaantaa huun ek aise shakhs ko main bhii 'Munir' Gham se patthar ho gayaa lekin kabhii royaa nahiin Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
jehan shah 0 Posted March 29, 2006 Kanwel jiiiiiiiiiiiiiii, nawazish hay aap ki, ishaq mai ghairat e jazbat nay rone na diya. warna kia baat thi kis baat nay rone na diya. aap kehte thay k rone se na badlain gay naseeb, umar bhar aap ki is baat nay na rone na diya. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Sahir 0 Posted March 29, 2006 SALAM TO ALL OF U FRIENDS YAAR SHAH JEE AAP TU CHUPAY RUSTAM HOO ITNE DINO SE TU CHUP HI BETHE HOE THE KAMAL KI GHAZAL SHARE KI HE AAP NE BUHUT HI KHOB BROTHER AAP KI IS GHAZAL K DO SHAIR MUJHE BUHUT PASAND AAYE HAIN yaad bhi us ki yeh kehti hoi dil se nikli..aisi ujdi hoi basti main bhala kia rehna.. N 2ND ONE IS husan walon ki zahanat bhi qiyamat hay Qateel..samne la k hum khud pas e parda rehna.. SHAH JEE YEH KYA YAAR YAHAN PER BHI SHAIR CHAL RAHE HAIN MAIN BHI AARZ KYE DETA HOO SORRY AAP SE POCHE BAGHAIR KER RAHA HOO RONE WALOO SE KAHOO ON KA BHI WONA ROO LAIN JIN KO MAJBOR-E-HALAT NE RONE NA DYA ....... Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
REEM 0 Posted March 29, 2006 OHHHHHHHHHHHHHHOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!! very niceeee! :flower: Apna samaj kar us par aitbaar kiya bas yehi ek gunaah maine baar baar kiya!!!!! Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
jehan shah 0 Posted March 30, 2006 thanxxxx dost jiiiiiiiiiiii, aap ko achi lagti hay aur humain kia chahiye. be sahk tu mere sath na safar ikhtiyar kar. magar aye bad guman mera itebar kar . fursat mile kabhi to jahnk dil k aaiene main.. ankhon se apne kaghazi parde utar kar. SAHIR; aap nay gahazl pori kar di. aye mohabat tere anjam pe rona aaya. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Sahir 0 Posted March 30, 2006 SALAM SHAH JEE Bas Shah Bro sahi kaha aap ne k aye mohabat tere anjam pe rona aaya. Waqai Muhabat k Anjam per sirf rona hi aata he Shah Jee Aik Shair Aarz He Aysi Tarikhiyan AnkhOon Mein Basi Hein K Faraz ! Raat To Raat Ha Hum Din Mein Bhi Jalatey Hain Chiragh. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
jehan shah 0 Posted March 30, 2006 Sahir bhai, aisa kion hota hay yahi anjam kion hota hay. samaj nahin aati. aaj phir jal k bujh gayi hain umeedon k chiragh. aaj phir taron bhari raat nay dam tod diya. haye adab e mohabat k taqaze Saghar. lab hile aur shikayat nay dam tod diya Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
REEM 0 Posted March 31, 2006 thanxxxx dost jiiiiiiiiiiii, aap ko achi lagti hay aur humain kia chahiye. be sahk tu mere sath na safar ikhtiyar kar. magar aye bad guman mera itebar kar . fursat mile kabhi to jahnk dil k aaiene main.. ankhon se apne kaghazi parde utar kar. SAHIR; aap nay gahazl pori kar di. aye mohabat tere anjam pe rona aaya. 179973[/snapback] SALAAM DOST JIIIII, Aapki shairi kisse pasand nahin aayegi. :P aap bhi na bas. :P Lagta hai bahut humble hai aap. sacchi pehle humein shairi se bore hota tha kyonki shairi sirf ek hi rishten ke upar hoti hai i mean mohobbat theek hai but still kuch zyaada enjoy nahin karte the hum lekin aap dosti(humein yeh rishta zyaada pasand hai)par bahut khoobsurat shair likhte hai and thats what i like a lot. :flower: toh my best wishes aur likhna kabhi na band kijiye. :flower: very very good thoughts. :flower: :flower: for you :flower: so all the best for your next post. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
vertosis_ather 0 Posted March 31, 2006 very nice shah jehan , thodi dair main parha lekin maine Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Kanwel 0 Posted March 31, 2006 aap sb kay alfaz by had khubsurat hain be always happy Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
