Kanwel 0 Posted March 28, 2006 aik saal purana kisa hai aik larke the dewaane se karte the both manmani wo shok shok se chal chal se makhki makhi se bagal se aik rooz mobhabath kar bathi aur ab ka saal ka kisa hai wo wo pyar main jann ko warr gaye aur apne app ko mar gaye wo sare jag sa to jeet gaye bas apna piya sa har gaye aik saal purana kisa hai aik larke thi dewaane se Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
vertosis_ather 0 Posted March 28, 2006 kanwel ji, baja farmaya aap ne! Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
sona 0 Posted March 29, 2006 WELCOME TO CY KANWEL :flower: NICE POST Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Miss_Jee 0 Posted March 29, 2006 wo pyar main jann ko warr gaye aur apne app ko mar gaye wo sare jag sa to jeet gaye bas apna piya sa har gaye aik saal purana kisa hai aik larke thi dewaane se Nice...... :) Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Kanwel 0 Posted March 29, 2006 thanx all of you!! vertosis_ather aur sona app bhi kuch apna intekhab share keryein be always happy!! phool phool pabandi, shakh shakh pehra hai qaafla baharo ka kis chaman mien thehra hai ishk se ziyaada hai waqt ke karam mujh per mera zakhm- e- sar yaaro, zakhm-e- dil se ghehra hai inn ke chashm-o- abard ke phir wohi ishare hai mien abhi to sambhla hoo dil abhi to thehra hai daastan-e- mehroomi aur kiya likhoo dil ka ik ik zarra hasrato ka sehra hai Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
REEM 0 Posted March 29, 2006 First of all WELCOME Kanawalji to CY. :flower: and very very beautiful poetry. i liked it! Keep sharing. This ones for you: Paane se khone ka mazaa kuch aur hai, Band aankhon se dekhne ka maza kuch aur hai Aansoon bane lafz aur lafz bane ghazal; teri yaadon ke saath jeene ka maza kuch aur hai!!!!!! Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Deep eyez 0 Posted March 29, 2006 very nice post n ~***>>>...WELCOME...<<<***~ Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Kanwel 0 Posted March 31, 2006 REEM & DEEP thank you so much Thx a lot everybody for honoring n encouraging words. be always happy!!! Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
jehan shah 0 Posted April 3, 2006 Kanwel jiiiiiiiiii, bohat khoob bohat hi achi hay, aur khas baat yeh k aap ka andaz sab se juda hay. be misal hay ,jari rakhiye ga is ko. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Sahir 0 Posted April 3, 2006 SALAM TO ALL OF U FRIENDS KANWEL JEE KYA BAAT HE AAP KI BUHUT KAMAL WORDING HE DONO SHARING KI BUT I LIKE 2ND ONE MORE THAN 1ST BUHUUT HI KHOB SO KEEP IT UP HAMAIN INTEZAR RAHE GA AAP KI NEW POST KA Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
