Miss_Jee 0 Posted March 31, 2006 (edited) Ra't Jago'n Sey Tang Aa Kar Tanhaiyon Sey Ghabra Kar Mein Ney Eik Raat Apney Sarey Ghum Apney Kamrey Ki Deewaroo'n Sey Keh Daley Or Abh Mein Sota Hon Deewarein Roti Hain....... Edited April 1, 2006 by Miss_Jee Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Khushboo 0 Posted March 31, 2006 Bahut khoob sis..ufff yeh gham :( Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
jehan shah 0 Posted March 31, 2006 Miss jee, ab soch raha hoon k kin alfaz main kahon k kaise lagi muje. magar Miss jee akhiri misra padh kar sab dard zahar ho gaye .i think k mere pass alfaz nahi ya main nahi kar sakta.7 line main ik pori kahani hay. Or Abh Mein Sota Hon Deewarein Roti Hain....... Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Fiya_Khan 0 Posted March 31, 2006 khaaaatam hai yaar MISS_JEE anttttt !!!! buhat aChi hai yaaar main bata nahi sak rahi :( Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Miss_Jee 0 Posted April 1, 2006 Bahut khoob sis..ufff yeh gham Yeh Ghum hi tu hain jo Khushiyon ko anmol banatey hain... :) Miss jee,ab soch raha hoon k kin alfaz main kahon k kaise lagi muje. magar Miss jee akhiri misra padh kar sab dard zahar ho gaye .i think k mere pass alfaz nahi ya main nahi kar sakta.7 line main ik pori kahani hay. Jee sahii kaha app ney jehan shah yeh 6 line apney ander eik kahani hain............ khaaaatam hai yaar MISS_JEE anttttt !!!! buhat aChi hai yaaar main bata nahi sak rahi Its ok jee baaz dafa kehney key liye ilfaz kam per jattey hain Thx All Of You 4 liking....... :) Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
ariba 0 Posted April 1, 2006 ssssssssssssssssssssss!!!!! It directly touched my heart.Very touchy. Ra't Jago'n Sey Tang Aa Kar Tanhaiyon Sey Ghabra Kar Mein Ney Eik Raat Apney Sarey Ghum Apney Kamrey Ki Deewaroo'n Sey Keh Daley Or Abh Mein Sota Hon Deewarein Roti Hain....... Zabardast!! Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Miss_Jee 0 Posted April 1, 2006 Touched My Heart Too thts why i posted it here......... Thx 4 ur reply......... :) Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Awaara 0 Posted April 2, 2006 Ra't Jago'n Sey Tang Aa Kar Tanhaiyon Sey Ghabra Kar Mein Ney Eik Raat Apney Sarey Ghum Apney Kamrey Ki Deewaroo'n Sey Keh Daley Or Abh Mein Sota Hon Deewarein Roti Hain....... 180139[/snapback] very nice n touchin! Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Miss_Jee 0 Posted April 2, 2006 Thx Awaara........... :) Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
vertosis_ather 0 Posted April 2, 2006 Wah Wah Kya baat hai miss G.... Saari Raat aaj mujhe nend nahin aayegi, sune hai teri mehfil main rat jaga hai... Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Miss_Jee 0 Posted April 2, 2006 Thx vertosis ather............. :) Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
DIL_DIYA_DARD_LIYA 0 Posted April 27, 2006 friends im new here just joined coz i was searching in google urdu shair so icame acroos this side and read this post miss jee beleive me aap ka yeh shairy hum ko itna majboor kardiya kay hum ko is site per join ho kar aap ko daaad diye bagaira nahi rah sakay its just kya kahay i dotn have words to say somethign abt ur post but its just amazing keep sharing miss jee very beautiful Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Sahir 0 Posted April 27, 2006 NICE SHARING MISS JEE KAFI DINO BAAD YEH POEM SAMNAY AAYI HE BELIVE ME AGER YEH POEM AAJ MAIN READ NA KERTA YA YEH JO DIL-DIYA-DARD-LIYA SAHAB IS TOPIC MAIN REPLY NA KERTE TU SHAYED MAIN BHI YEH SHARE KERNE LAGA THA AAJ BUHUT HI ACHI SHARING HE MISS JEE THANX DIL DIYA DARD LIYA K AAP NE IS POEM KO OPEN KYA HE ........ KEEP SHARING MISS JEE MISS JEE MERA LOLLY POP Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Miss_Jee 0 Posted April 28, 2006 Walikumaslam, Thx Alot Dil_Diya_Dard_Liya n Sahir 4 Ur Compliments......... :) Sahir App Lolly Pop Key Liye Roo Rahay hoo????? :P Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
msalman 0 Posted April 28, 2006 Zabardast Maza aa gaya Miss Jee Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Miss_Jee 0 Posted April 28, 2006 Thx Alot Msalman....... :) Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Sahir 0 Posted April 28, 2006 MISS JEE OR KYA AGER LOLLY POP NAHN LE KER DENA TU BATA DAIN MAIN AAP SE NARAZ HO JAOO TAKE ABHI TAK TU YEH BHI NAHIN PATA K AAP NE LE KER DENA HE YA NAHIN :( Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Miss_Jee 0 Posted April 28, 2006 Walikumaslam, Buri Baat Sahir lalach buri bala hai :P hai na??? :angel: Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Sahir 0 Posted April 28, 2006 MISS JEE AAP NE HI TU KAHA THA K LOLLY POP DAIN GI AAB AAP HI IS KO LALACH KEH RAHI HAIN Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
DIL_DIYA_DARD_LIYA 0 Posted April 30, 2006 thanx friend for welcomming me and Miss jeee i came again to read ur post thanx everyone very much Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Sahir 0 Posted April 30, 2006 MISS JEE PEHLE LALCH DETI HOO PHIR KEHTI HOO K LALCH BURI BALA HE :( MUJHE NAHIN PATA AAB LE KER DOO LOLLY POP Share this post Link to post Share on other sites