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Ra't Jago'n Sey Tang Aa Kar

Tanhaiyon Sey Ghabra Kar

Mein Ney Eik Raat Apney Sarey Ghum

Apney Kamrey Ki Deewaroo'n Sey Keh Daley

Or Abh Mein Sota Hon

Deewarein Roti Hain.......

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Miss jee,

ab soch raha hoon k kin alfaz main kahon

k kaise lagi muje. magar Miss jee akhiri misra padh kar

sab dard zahar ho gaye .i think k mere pass alfaz nahi

ya main nahi kar sakta.7 line main ik pori kahani hay.

Or Abh Mein Sota Hon

Deewarein Roti Hain.......

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khaaaatam hai yaar MISS_JEE

anttttt !!!!

buhat aChi hai yaaar

main bata nahi sak rahi :(

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Bahut khoob sis..ufff yeh gham

Yeh Ghum hi tu hain jo Khushiyon ko anmol banatey hain... :)

Miss jee,

ab soch raha hoon k kin alfaz main kahon

k kaise lagi muje. magar Miss jee akhiri misra padh kar

sab dard zahar ho gaye .i think k mere pass alfaz nahi

ya main nahi kar sakta.7 line main ik pori kahani hay.

Jee sahii kaha app ney jehan shah yeh 6 line apney ander eik kahani hain............ :down:

khaaaatam hai yaar MISS_JEE

anttttt !!!!

buhat aChi hai yaaar

main bata nahi sak rahi

Its ok jee baaz dafa kehney key liye ilfaz kam per jattey hain

Thx All Of You 4 liking....... :)

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ssssssssssssssssssssss!!!!!

It directly touched my heart.Very touchy.

Ra't Jago'n Sey Tang Aa Kar

Tanhaiyon Sey Ghabra Kar

Mein Ney Eik Raat Apney Sarey Ghum

Apney Kamrey Ki Deewaroo'n Sey Keh Daley

Or Abh Mein Sota Hon

Deewarein Roti Hain.......

Zabardast!!

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Touched My Heart Too thts why i posted it here.........

Thx 4 ur reply......... :)

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Ra't Jago'n Sey Tang Aa Kar

Tanhaiyon Sey Ghabra Kar

Mein Ney Eik Raat Apney Sarey Ghum

Apney Kamrey Ki Deewaroo'n Sey Keh Daley

Or Abh Mein Sota Hon

Deewarein Roti Hain.......

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very nice n touchin!

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Wah Wah Kya baat hai miss G....

Saari Raat aaj mujhe nend nahin aayegi,

sune hai teri mehfil main rat jaga hai...

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:salam:

friends im new here just joined coz i was searching in google urdu shair so icame acroos this side and read this post miss jee beleive me aap ka yeh shairy hum ko itna majboor kardiya kay hum ko is site per join ho kar aap ko daaad diye bagaira nahi rah sakay its just kya kahay i dotn have words to say somethign abt ur post but its just amazing keep sharing miss jee very beautiful

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:salam:

NICE SHARING MISS JEE KAFI DINO BAAD YEH POEM SAMNAY AAYI HE BELIVE ME AGER YEH POEM AAJ MAIN READ NA KERTA YA YEH JO DIL-DIYA-DARD-LIYA SAHAB IS TOPIC MAIN REPLY NA KERTE TU SHAYED MAIN BHI YEH SHARE KERNE LAGA THA AAJ

BUHUT HI ACHI SHARING HE MISS JEE THANX DIL DIYA DARD LIYA K AAP NE IS POEM KO OPEN KYA HE ........

KEEP SHARING MISS JEE

MISS JEE MERA LOLLY POP :crying:

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Walikumaslam,

Thx Alot Dil_Diya_Dard_Liya n Sahir 4 Ur Compliments......... :)

Sahir App Lolly Pop Key Liye Roo Rahay hoo????? :P

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:salam:

MISS JEE OR KYA AGER LOLLY POP NAHN LE KER DENA TU BATA DAIN MAIN AAP SE NARAZ HO JAOO TAKE ABHI TAK TU YEH BHI NAHIN PATA K AAP NE LE KER DENA HE YA NAHIN

:(

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:salam:

MISS JEE AAP NE HI TU KAHA THA K LOLLY POP DAIN GI AAB AAP HI IS KO LALACH KEH RAHI HAIN :crying::down:

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:salam:

MISS JEE PEHLE LALCH DETI HOO PHIR KEHTI HOO K LALCH BURI BALA HE :(

MUJHE NAHIN PATA AAB LE KER DOO LOLLY POP

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