Kanwel 0 Posted April 1, 2006 Ghoor andhairi rahon per Band aankhon say chalnay walon ko Rasta nahi milta Bheegi machis say Laraztay howay hathon say Koie diya nahi jalta Un suni aahaton per, bina dastak k Dar nahi khulta Couch aisa hi ta`aruf ‘mera’ bhi hay aas k bawajood, baghair koshish k naseeb nahi jagta aarzo ka ub koie moti nahi chamakta ghoor andhairo main, ghehray sannaton main ub koie sohana lamha mujhay nahi milta couch bhi nahi dikhta koie bhi nahi milta…. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Sahir 0 Posted April 1, 2006 SALAM KANWEL JEE BUHUT HI KHOB LIKHA HE AAP NE :flower: MAGER ITNI UDASI BHI ACHI NAHIN HOTI AAP KI IS NAZAM K JAWAB MAIN MAIN SIRF AIK SHAIR KAHOO GA SHAMA BUJH JAYE TU JAL SAKTI HE KASHTI HAZAROO TUFANOO SE BACH SAKTI HE APNA IRADA NA BADAL TU TAQDEER KESI WAQT BADAL SAKTI HE Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Miss_Jee 0 Posted April 1, 2006 :weep: buhat Achey Kanwel...... :) Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
jehan shah 0 Posted April 1, 2006 well kanwel jiiiiiiiiiiiii, kuch ziyada nahi kahon ga,kion k wo alfaz nahin hain mere pas jo tareef kar sakain. bas ik baat k lajawab hay. shama jis aag main jalti hay numaish k liye.. hum ussi aag main gumnam se jal jate hain.. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
vertosis_ather 0 Posted April 3, 2006 nice 1!!!! kanwel jii Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
iftikhar 0 Posted April 3, 2006 wah wah wah very nice :flower: Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
