innocent4nu 0 Posted November 11, 2003 Jissay manga thaa mainn nay har duaa mainn Woo binn mangay kissi ko mill gia hay Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
innocent4nu 0 Posted November 11, 2003 MEIN NE USE UN DINON DIKHA JAB WO KHILTAY GULAB JASA THA US KI ANKHON SE NEEND CHINTI THI US KA LEHJA SHARAB JASA THA US KI ZULFON SE BHIGATI THI GHATA US KA LA RUKH MAHTAB JASA THA KHATA HO TO MUAAF KARNA HAZOOR SUCH TO YA HAI KA WO AAP JASA THA Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
sanober qazi 0 Posted November 11, 2003 [/size=4]inoccent, sleepy zaburdust bhe, and thanx , aur uamir mai zaroor aati rahoungi aayndah khyal rakhoungi is baat ka sorry[/size] Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
arsii 0 Posted November 12, 2003 helloo all ma dear friends ur poetrys r gr8 Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
jaan 0 Posted November 12, 2003 hi everybody, good postings umair, sanober aur arsii ji . arsii ji aap ki saari poetries bohut hi achi hain . they r lovely . its nice to have u in this community . kash badal ki tarah pyar ka bhi koi saaya hota phir main din raat tera shaher pay chaiya hota Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
NaDaN 0 Posted November 12, 2003 hay nice work guys!! Nice jaan!! Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
umair.zm 0 Posted November 15, 2003 thanx sleeepism ,jaan , nadan :) n sanober ur shairee is gr8 yar :D duyain "jo duyain tum nay di theen mujhay k main kush rahon her kushi millay mujhay sunno.... main kush reh sakta nahi tumharay bina han magar kush hon jo tum kush raho bas is leye.... wo sab duyain jo tum nay di theen mujhay louta raha hon main.... Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
arsii 0 Posted November 15, 2003 thanx all of u specialy u jaan n sanober and nadan and innocent jie ur poetries r innocent & u aall that u appreciated ma work as i will try ma level best to provide u wid such a gr8 poetries one of that is here dear friends this is a voice against the nature's mis fortune so pray for the beterness of the nature of this world Where has all our effort gone? Why must all the world suffer from one man's wrong? When pollution fills the air ahead, We humans are as good as dead, But some sing a different song. These are those who will correct that wrong. They say it is not too late, But the rest of the world will chose its fate. Still some do not see. Why can't nature be left in harmony? i hope u all would have liked it Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
sanober qazi 0 Posted November 17, 2003 thanx ursi umair u both r zabrdust:) Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
arsii 0 Posted November 17, 2003 thanks sanober jie for appreciation Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
NaDaN 0 Posted November 18, 2003 very Nice Poem Sanober g!! Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
SLLeepyism 0 Posted November 18, 2003 so nice sanober Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
SLLeepyism 0 Posted November 18, 2003 Zindagi terey baghair ab Ho rahi he yoon basar Mo'tadil mosam ka panch'hi barf Zaron ki hawa main uR raha ho jis tarha Aur phir is yaKH fiza main uRtey uRtey us ke par Munjamind honey ko hoon Laikin abhi dhundh main lipTa safar Baaqi bhi ho.....! Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
sanober qazi 0 Posted November 18, 2003 thanx nadan and sleepy Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
arsii 0 Posted November 19, 2003 realy sanober jie ur poetries r great keep on continuing great job Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
umair.zm 0 Posted November 20, 2003 himmm sanober shabash bohut achey :) bohut achi poetries post kien hian .... ab main arz karita hon :) ~jany waly~ ""Jany waly" ~jany waly kyun loat ker aty nahin~ ~unhain pichli koi bat sataati nahin~ ~unhain ghuzra koi lmha rulata nahin~ ~unhain beeti bataun gud gudati nahin~ ~jany waly kyun loat ker aty nahin~ ~k shaid~ ~un ka haal hai mazi say behter~ ~k shaid~ ~peechy murhny waly ho jaty hain pather~ Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
sanober qazi 0 Posted November 20, 2003 thanx nadan arsi and uamir Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
arsii 0 Posted November 23, 2003 very nice friends keep that up now listen that one I wish I had some magic thing, A talking watch or golden ring Something that just luck could bring Something to make me happy again But what I realised is pretty funny You don't have to be a whiz to know this part The one and only real magic Is the magic deep inside your heart how was that magic Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
NaDaN 0 Posted November 24, 2003 hey arsii very very nice..!! like it so much!!! Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
sanober qazi 0 Posted November 25, 2003 zburdust arsi and nadan where 's ur intykhab?:o Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
