NaDaN 0 Posted January 24, 2004 well said Umair! :).. app ke baat sun ker may ho gai hon lajawab! Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
M00N 0 Posted January 24, 2004 umair bolee tuu ..tery poem bhi ek dam funtoosh hai kiya ...keep posting ..:D Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
NaDaN 0 Posted January 25, 2004 (edited) Very Nice Poem Umair!.. Edited January 25, 2004 by NaDaN Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
HamZaad 0 Posted January 25, 2004 ~Meray mehboob nay wada kia pnchvay din ka Kahin say sun lia ho ga keh dunia char din ki hai~ Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
umair.zm 0 Posted January 25, 2004 nadan>>> ap to MASHALAH se ho hie lajawab app ko koiee kya banaye gha pphir se lajawab jie :D moon>>> boley to aik dum jhakas poetry di hia na apun ne kya yaad karey gha mamooo humzad>> nice one :hi: Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
sanober qazi 0 Posted January 28, 2004 umair films kum deekha karu , aur hifz mut kya karu dailouge :P Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
M00N 0 Posted January 28, 2004 umair bhi log see aisaa baat nahi kenee kaa bolee tu ..kool down ...after all apun koo bhi bhi kee terhaan dr bana mangtaa aiyee circute kiyaa help nahi kareen gaa apun kee ....:D Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
jaan 0 Posted January 28, 2004 aap sab ki poetries baadi hi zabardast hain guys. aur umair ji aap ki portries toh humesha ki tarah hi bohut khoob hain . chandani rahi mulaqaat mein deewar bani chand bhi jasay tera chahna wala nikla Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
umair.zm 0 Posted February 12, 2004 sanober>>> ajie bas aese hie dost ke sath mazak masti ke liye dialogue boliyee :) ... wesey films to main bohtu dekhita hon :D .. nice poetry urs :) moon>> boley to docter ban ke kya kariney ka hia :P meri maan tuwich circuit ban k taraki kariney ka.... boley to bhaie banney ka jaan>>> thanx alot jaan bhaie :) ... ur shair is too good :D Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
umair.zm 0 Posted February 12, 2004 Mein tujhay kesay bhula sakta hoon "tu meri rooh mein utri hui tanhai hay tu meri aankh mein pheli hui sadyon ki thakan meray jeewan k ujalay tujh say meray jeenay k hawalay tujh say meri darmanda mohabbat ka madawa tu hay -- teri choori k khanaknay ki azanein sun kar teri tasweer ko sajdon say sajaya mein nay teri chahat mera mazhab mera imaan raha tujhay dekha, tujhay socha, tujhay chaha mein nay -- aay meri rooh mera jism meri tanhai mein tujhay kesay bhula sakta hoon Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
rukh 25 Posted February 12, 2004 lolzz umair yeh IK SHER tha :P ya ik nazam :D woh milta nahi ik bar humain or yeh zindgee dobara nahi Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
umair.zm 0 Posted February 13, 2004 akalwalon ke liye ishara kafie hota hia :P k kya hia :D ... jo na samjhey ab kya kahoon k kya hian Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
decent 0 Posted February 13, 2004 Yeh Dua Hai Koi Gilla Nahi Mere Hum Nasheen Meri Zindagi Tujhe Her Woh Khusi Mille Jo Mujhe Meri Zindagi Main Khabi Milli Nahi:) Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Shabo 0 Posted February 13, 2004 :hi: Hi dil ki dil mein na reh jaaye ye kahani kah lo chahey do harf likho chahey zabaani kah lo Sx Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
sanober qazi 0 Posted February 13, 2004 mai teeri bazum mai kis kis sy doushmani lyta likh tha naam tera by shumar chyhroo par zaburdust u all Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
umair.zm 0 Posted February 14, 2004 nice shairs :) ... wah bhai wah sab shair ban gaye hian Mera dil dhadakta hai sirf tere liye, mera dil tadapta hai sirf tere liye, naa jane mein kyun darta hoon aap se, apne pyaar ka izhar karne ke liye... :) Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
sanober qazi 0 Posted February 16, 2004 dil gawara hi nahin karta shakistay umeed her tagaful pay nawazish ka guman hota hay Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
umair.zm 0 Posted February 16, 2004 so nice sanober Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
sanober qazi 0 Posted February 18, 2004 THANX UAMIR Kiss tarah mere EHAD ke HALL honge MAS'aLLe, INSAAN hey JADEED,kitaaben QADEEEEM hen.... Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
decent 0 Posted February 18, 2004 dua yeh day raha dil mera baar baar tujhe khuda kabhee na karay ghum say humkinaar tujhe mere naseeb ki khushiyan bhee tujh ko mil jayein meri nazar na dhaikhe kabhi bayqarar tujhe Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
umair.zm 0 Posted February 18, 2004 thank u sanober :) ur shair was really touchy :) decent>>> dis 1 is gr8 yar Dil diya,aitbaar ki had thi. Jaan de di,ye mere pyaar ki had thi. Mar kar bhi aankhen khuli reh gayi,aur kuch nahi ye tere intezaar ki had thi Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
sanober qazi 0 Posted February 19, 2004 THANX UMIAR AND U BOTH R ZABURDUST ki mohabbat to sayasat ka chalan chor diya hum hakoomat kertay agar mohabbat na kertay. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
umair.zm 0 Posted February 21, 2004 thanx snaober :) meri mano hukumat shroo kar do :D mohabat mian kya rakha hia Peeta Tha Magar Churadi Tu Nein Apni Qasam De Kar Mehfil Main Gaya To Yaaron Ne Piladi Teri Qasam Dekar Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
sanober qazi 0 Posted February 21, 2004 AUR TUM NAY UAMIR YEH KUB SY SHURO KURADYA MOUHABBAT WAGHEERA KA SILSILA GIRTA HIA APNY AAP PAR DEWAR KI TARAH UNDER SY JUB CHATUKHTA HIA PATHUR KA ADMI[/blue] Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
