mansoor 0 Posted November 20, 2003 Aslmao Alikum ! Umed hai app sab Loog bakhariat hoon gay :D Allah sab koo KhusH rakhay :) ajj main joo Poem post karnay jaa raha hoon yaaa .. main nay aur rukh nay mil kar Likhee hai ... waqaya kuch yoon tha .. k ham loog aik UNWANN par post kar rahay tha .. aik Misra main nay Bola aik Rukh nay ... aur iss trah yaa Nazam wajood main ayee .. main umed karta hoon app logoon koo Pasand ayee ge ***Pehlay 2 shair Mustarka Kosissh hain baqee kay iss na cheez keee Kosissh hai :D "Rukhe e Dost par yaa Andazz kaisa hai " DIL JALNAI KO WOH TYAR BETHA HAI 'Har deewanay kee trah yaa dill bhee yahee kehta hai os kai dil main bhi hamra khiyal rehta hai wooo ayee ga ayhee Guman rehta hai DAhleez kee taraf har waqt dehan rehta hai Logg Khudaa ka poochtay phiratay hain Mugg say Poocho har zaray , har dil , main rehta hai woo jissay makan samajhtay hain Woo usee laa makan main rehta hai jissay logg Mansoor(mansoor hallag) kehtay hain woo har waqt uss kay dehan main rehta hai Shayad manzala e mohabbat qareeb hai Mera Yar Mugg say Khafa Khafa sa Rehta hai l ogg Bharoon koo yad kartay hain ham wahan kay basee hain jidhar Masam khizan sa rehta hai woo anay wala hai yahee gumann sa rehta hai woo janay wala hai yahee Imakan sa rehta hai :D MansOor Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
rukh 25 Posted November 20, 2003 oh yeh app nai kal poem likhee thee :o with in a seconds ...stranga itnee jaldee bana lee best one or mera kahan sai koshish ho geyee ..itnee fazool sai misray hain unfit lag rahai hain merai walai to ...app apna koi sooch ker likhoooo i like these one mostly SHIAD MUNZIL-E- MUHABT QAREEB HAI MERA YAR MUJH SAI KHAFA KHAFA SA REHTA HAI OR LAST ONE SUPERB WOH ANAI WALA HAI YEHE GUMAN REHTA HAI WOH jANAI WALA HEY YEHE IMKAN REHTA HAI chand ghintoon main app itnee achee poem likh saktay ho to aik haftai main to dewan bhi ban jaye ga ... app parveen shaker ki shagird to nahi :P Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
mansoor 0 Posted November 20, 2003 woo jee ham bhala Kisss qabil hain :) bass allah ka sukar hai joo mughay kuch achaY asataza mil gayee jinhoon nay Urdu zuban ka "mazaq" paida kar dia mugg na cheez main nahee jee appp kasre Nafsee barat rahee hain .. app ka kalam wallah bhut khoob hai balkay ham too kaheeen gay , appp apnee koshis jaree rakhyee , wallah alamm kay ham loog Mustaqbil kee Pareen shaker say .. bat karnay ka sharaf hasil kar rhay hoon :D DuwaGooO MansOor Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
rukh 25 Posted November 20, 2003 ya KHUDA yeh app LAKNOW walai waban kion bolnai lag gayee :P nahi ageeb bat hay per aisa hee hai ...mujhai poetry kerna acha nahi lagta is kay bawjood ise per damgh chalta hai but i want to control dis habbit ....or app parveen shakir kai banai kai bajyee yeh dua kerain .. kai bus main apnai maqsad main qamyab ho jaoon :) KHUDARA rozay main itna jhoot munasib nahi jo app nai hamree tareef kai oul bandhain kal ko KHUDA ko kia moon dikhain gay :P Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
NaDaN 0 Posted November 21, 2003 see my two intellegent sweet frnds!! sonay pay suhaga!! :D.. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
rukh 25 Posted November 21, 2003 nahi nadan its over all writtin by MANSOOR ....just 2 lines meree hain ... mansoor nai mera nam is ley likh diya takai ager poem fail ho gayee to mera NAM laga dain gai ager pass ho gayee to apna nam laga dain gai ;) Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
deadlyatti 0 Posted November 21, 2003 hey yahan to muqabla chal raha hai "Aa dekhain zara kis main kitna hai dum" Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
mansoor 0 Posted November 21, 2003 RUkh appp bhee kia Framaa rahee hain :D Aisee BadGumanI achee nahi ;) wahhhhh ! Sehar ! Acha app zara yaa wazahat farmaa dain kay SOONA kon sa Hai aur SOOHAGA KoN Hai ... Jaisay k app koo pata he e hoo ga SOHAGA aik AOOZAR hai joo HALL chalnay kay Bad Chalaya jata hai ;) Aur Meraa Nadar Khial hai app ka Ishara RUkh kee janiB hai :P ShabO .. sukrya nawazish !! :D MansOor Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
rukh 25 Posted November 21, 2003 main jo ferma rahee hoon BAAJA ferma rahee hoon sohaga ager htayr hay to phir SONA bhi woh wala ho ga jo SONA CHANDI kai darma main jo charecter SONA bana tha .. phir nadan nai app ko wohee wala sona kaha ho ga :P Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
ariba 0 Posted November 21, 2003 HAhahaha....nice poem and dialouges.....mansoor aisa lag raha keh tum apne pichlay janam nain wapis chalay gay hoo. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
NaDaN 0 Posted November 21, 2003 array Mansoor app sahar boltay ho na idher tu ek dam ajnabe sa lagta hay kay malom nahee Mansoor kis ko adress ker rhay hain or thoree dar bad pata chalta hay OH YEAH TU MERA NAAM HAY :laugh: wo actully sab NaDaN jo khatay hian :D kher ab app akelmand ho sona or suhaga samjh lain na khud he,,,...! Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
mansoor 0 Posted November 22, 2003 hmmm RUkh ! jee Billkull app BJJA farma rahee hain .... :D Wisay SOhaGa koee HatYar nhai balkay AOZAR hai .. Donoo mian fraq too appp Koo bakhoobi pata hoo ga :P SONA hmmmm Sounds Good Laiken SONAY kay liyee aik CHANDEE ka hoona bhee zaroori hai .... aur cHandi talash karna too aik Muskil kam hai hamaree medical kee aik kahawat hai ... " Doctor koo SOOna tab tak nahi milta jab tak uss kay sar main chandi na chamkay " hahha and i Cant wait sO far :D Hmm Sehar !!! welll i must saY i like ur name :D aur agar ham app kay name ka English main Translation karain too kia banay ga ??? Sehar Nizam tO Magic System" :P MansOor Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
NaDaN 0 Posted November 22, 2003 haha Mansorr its Nizami.. not nizam!!... Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
arsii 0 Posted November 22, 2003 very nice mansoor and ma friends keep tha up now listen that Winning is always a good feeling But even if you lose You should still feel proud 'Cause where you come is where you choose how was that Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
rukh 25 Posted November 22, 2003 doctor JI PEHLEE BAT TO YEH HAI KAI MAIN INTAIHAYEE SHIRMINDA HOON KAI MAINI SOHAGA NAHI DEKHA dont know hatya hay ya ozar ... lakin app nai ager is ko meee teruf manssob ki hai to zaroor khternak cheez hee ho gee( ahh how much realstic i am :D ) bakee CHANDE wala masla ALLAH hee app ka hal ker sakta hai hum to dua heeker saktai hain :P NADAN > Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
rukh 25 Posted November 22, 2003 MUNZIL SAI SAY CHAND QADAM PEHLAI IS HAQEQAT SAI MAIN ASHNA HO GIYA THA JIS KAI LEY UMMER BHER SEHRA MAIN BHTKAI THAI WOH TO RAHOON MAIN HEE KAHIN KHO GIYA THA AJJ MAINI TEREE BAYBUSEE SAMJHEE HAI RUKH KAI KION TU HANSTAI HASNTAY ROO DIYA THA !! howz this ? TELL ME ! Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
NaDaN 0 Posted November 23, 2003 AJJ MAINI TEREE BAYBUSEE SAMJHEE HAI RUKH KAI KION TU HANSTAI HASNTAY ROO DIYA THA !! Zber10 Rukh!! Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
rukh 25 Posted November 23, 2003 thanx nadan :) can u undersatnd ;) Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
NaDaN 0 Posted November 23, 2003 mm Bus Rukh asee Babasee buhat rolate hay..!! :( jab koi pass hotay howa b sath nahee hota!! Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
mansoor 0 Posted November 23, 2003 NaDaN ! Opsss is it Nizami ;) So should i say that "magic Systematically " :P RukH ! waOoo dats real goOd work :D "JIS KAI LEY UMMER BHER SEHRA MAIN BHTKAI THAI WOH TO RAHOON MAIN HEE KAHIN KHO GIYA THA" SuperB :D what u think hsould i comment "tehcnically" on ur piece of work ?? Hmm NaDaN U certainly understand it :D MansOor Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
rukh 25 Posted November 23, 2003 nadan > :) waisai maini ronai say GUSAI hona ka kam acha kertee hoon ;) (ap ko to andaza ho ga hee ) MANSOOR> sunday funday hain app ...:D ..mm haan app technically bhi comment zaroor dain ... waisai THaNX :) Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
NaDaN 0 Posted November 24, 2003 Mansoor Rukh ajj emoticon ke zuban samjhain!! Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
rukh 25 Posted November 24, 2003 samjh agyee nadan :) Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
