Kiran 2 Posted December 21, 2003 oh rythm... yaar so sorry i made u ppl sad.. now cheer up.. :D Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
sidd 0 Posted December 21, 2003 wow nadan is this from ur heart ? i really inspire by these words great :flower: In Love :wub: " S I D D " Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Kiran 2 Posted December 21, 2003 yeah she posted superb topic... :) Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
sidd 0 Posted December 21, 2003 Hi Kiran how r ya ? In Love :wub: " S I D D " Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
rukh 25 Posted December 21, 2003 Sooraj dheerey dheerey paharoun kai peechey dooor kahin badloun main doob raha tha…barish ka zour toot raha tha…faza main mitti ki sondhi sondhi mehak rachi hui thi…ye wohi mousam hai na….!jisey ham hamra mousam kaha kartey they…Tum kehtey they kai dekho aaj aasman khul kar roya hai aur Main kehti,dekho!phir kabhi aisa na kehna…aasman tou hamaree khooshiyon main khul kar barsa hai aaj …tum meri aankhoun main gour sey dekhtey aur muskura detey,phir kehtey,acha suno…ab nahin kahoon ga.Aah…barsoun beet gaye lekin aaj bhi iss nam faza main merey kahey inn lafzoun ki goonj baqi hai,lekin na janey kiun mera dil aaj tumharey kahey huye alfaz dohra raha hai kai dekho!aaj aasman khul kar roya hai….!aaj bhi faza main mitti wohi mehak aur barish ki wohi khooshboo hai…!main dheerey dheerey qadam uthati issi rah guzar par inhi darakhtoun kai saye taley chal rahi hoon,jahan hamaree mohabbat ka janam hua tha,main ney chaha kai hamaisha ki tarah barish ki khooshbooo apney dil main basa loon,lekin khayyaal aaya…Tum bhi tou aik mashoor kun khooshboo ki tarah merey dil main basey they…meri sansoun main sama gaye they…aur be-wafa hawa kai aik jhoun kai ki tarah kahin dooor…bohat doooor judayi ki kohar main kho gaye…. Aah ye souch kar kai barish ki khooshboo bhi kahin kohar main….iss dhud main….kho na jaye main faza main barish ki ye khooshboo bikhraye apni raah chal di. main barish ki ye khooshboo apney dil main na basa saki….suno Tum jahan bhi ho…barish ki ye khooshboo hamisha mujhey tumharee qurbat ka aehsaas dilaye gi….kai tum merey qareeb ho….bohat qareeb……!!! bohat khoob nadan ..its really so much beautifull & toucy .. is post per mujhai aik punjabi sher ka aik misra yad arha hai WAYLAY LANG JANDAY ,SAJAN YAD RENDAY MOONO NIKLIAN GALAN NAIEE PULDEEAN its mean WAQT GUZER JATA HAI ..SAJAN YAD REHTAY HAIN OR MOON SAI NIKLEE BATAIN KABHI NAHI BHOOLTEE ! Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
rukh 25 Posted December 21, 2003 Sooraj dheerey dheerey paharoun kai peechey dooor kahin badloun main doob raha tha…barish ka zour toot raha tha…faza main mitti ki sondhi sondhi mehak rachi hui thi…ye wohi mousam hai na….!jisey ham hamra mousam kaha kartey they…Tum kehtey they kai dekho aaj aasman khul kar roya hai aur Main kehti,dekho!phir kabhi aisa na kehna…aasman tou hamaree khooshiyon main khul kar barsa hai aaj …tum meri aankhoun main gour sey dekhtey aur muskura detey,phir kehtey,acha suno…ab nahin kahoon ga.Aah…barsoun beet gaye lekin aaj bhi iss nam faza main merey kahey inn lafzoun ki goonj baqi hai,lekin na janey kiun mera dil aaj tumharey kahey huye alfaz dohra raha hai kai dekho!aaj aasman khul kar roya hai….!aaj bhi faza main mitti wohi mehak aur barish ki wohi khooshboo hai…!main dheerey dheerey qadam uthati issi rah guzar par inhi darakhtoun kai saye taley chal rahi hoon,jahan hamaree mohabbat ka janam hua tha,main ney chaha kai hamaisha ki tarah barish ki khooshbooo apney dil main basa loon,lekin khayyaal aaya…Tum bhi tou aik mashoor kun khooshboo ki tarah merey dil main basey they…meri sansoun main sama gaye they…aur be-wafa hawa kai aik jhoun kai ki tarah kahin dooor…bohat doooor judayi ki kohar main kho gaye…. Aah ye souch kar kai barish ki khooshboo bhi kahin kohar main….iss dhud main….kho na jaye main faza main barish ki ye khooshboo bikhraye apni raah chal di. main barish ki ye khooshboo apney dil main na basa saki….suno Tum jahan bhi ho…barish ki ye khooshboo hamisha mujhey tumharee qurbat ka aehsaas dilaye gi….kai tum merey qareeb ho….bohat qareeb……!!! bohat khoob nadan ..its really so much beautifull & toucy .. is post per mujhai aik punjabi sher ka aik misra yad arha hai WAYLAY LANG JANDAY ,SAJAN YAD RENDAY MOONO NIKLIAN GALAN NAIEE PULDEEAN its mean WAQT GUZER JATA HAI ..SAJAN YAD REHTAY HAIN OR MOON SAI NIKLEE BATAIN KABHI NAHI BHOOLTEE ! Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
NaDaN 0 Posted December 21, 2003 Thanks Rukh & Sidd!! Rukh very Nice Sher!1 bilkul shae khaa hay jis nay b kaha hay!! malom nahee yeah yadeain hote kinu hain mager ek baat hain yadain hamesha sath rehtee hain bewafai nahee ker sakteen!! Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Kiran 2 Posted December 21, 2003 sorry rukh u have to translate it.. :( Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
NaDaN 0 Posted December 21, 2003 Array Kiran she already did!! its mean WAQT GUZER JATA HAI ..SAJAN YAD REHTAY HAIN OR MOON SAI NIKLEE BATAIN KABHI NAHI BHOOLTEE ! Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Kiran 2 Posted December 21, 2003 oh... actually main ne hamesha ki tara pori post nahi perhi :D Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
NaDaN 0 Posted December 21, 2003 buhat acha kiya!! dekha pakree gai na!! :D Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
sanum 0 Posted December 21, 2003 (edited) Nadan>dil mangay more aur bhi kuch esa dil ko chota hoa post karo naa.... Edited December 21, 2003 by sanum Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
NaDaN 0 Posted December 21, 2003 Sanum yeah tu apni khanee hay kabhi kabhi Majboor kertee hay tu likhnay beth jatee hon!! here i countinue!! Khatay hain Insaan ke Himat he us ke manzil hote hay .. Huslay mazboot hon tu Kuch b sahan ho sakta hay..lakin afsoos kay jo kudrat hamaray naseeb may nahee likhtee hum zid laga bethtay hain ek chotay say bachay ke tarha jo yeah nahee janta kay DENAY WALAY ke pohanch may sab kuch hay mager inkar ke wajha may hamaree he bhetaree hay!.. HUM tu bus un lakeron ka azafa apnay haton may kerwana chatay hay jo hamaray liya hay he nahee!,… her waqat US ka intazar rehta hay JO anay ka wada tu shyed ker jata ager koi rasta koi tadbeer hote, tu he loot pata!.. Suna tha Intazar Taveel ho jai tu Muhabbatin bay yakeen ho jate hain!.. suna tha soukh jatay hain wo jazbay jinhain izhar ka pane naseeb na ho.. toot jatay hain khawab .. mager ager asa hota hay tu yeah INTAZAR jo meray hisay aya hay!! Kiya yeah INTAZAR nahee.. kinu her waqat lagta hay kay LOG jhoot boltay hain.. sirf ek TUMHARA such reh jata hay!.. JO Mere zindagee ka sab say bara SACH hay! Lakin may ab tak is Sach ko kabool nahee ker pai.... OMEED b ab dertee hay kay kaheen apnay he mainee na kho day!! Bus ab ager kuch bacha pass meray tu wo sirf hay mera INTAZAR.. Lakin ab TUM b sochtay ho gay kay is Larki ko akal nahee aii g!!.. kabhi kabhi lagta hay ka TUM mujhay zaroor dekhtay ho gay!. hanstay ho gay! Or shoctay ho gay kay yeah buzdil se larki jo her baat kay liya mujh say pochay bager nahee ker sakte the ab kitnee baree ho gai hay.. apnay fasilay khud lanay lage hay Bus plz mere ek baat man lo May Tumharay sath buzdil theek hon.. Mager TUMHARAY bager akelee theek nahee ho!.. Kash kay may Tum ko wapis la saktee … Kash kay Tum sirf Mujh ko sun he saktay.. Kash yeah Zindagi DAGA dena bhool jatee.. ajj itnay dino bad asa lagta hay jasay TUM ko ilm tha kay yeah sath thora he hay! Ager asa that tu Mujhay samjha he detay…yun ek beynaam se soch may tu na chortay… Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
mansoor 0 Posted December 21, 2003 Naaaa Babba na Merra Roonay k a Fillhal koee Mood nahi :D Jab mood hoo ga tab read karoob hoo ga tab read karoon ga :) Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
NaDaN 0 Posted December 21, 2003 mm chalin good Mansoor suit urself! Kiran dont plz..! Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
mansoor 0 Posted December 21, 2003 NaDan yeahh :D Kiran ;) yaa tumharay namm ROoo roo kar hamm nay tabb bhar diyee wooo ayee bathay nahaaa kar chal diyee :D Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Kiran 2 Posted December 21, 2003 NaDan yeahh :D Kiran ;) yaa tumharay namm ROoo roo kar hamm nay tabb bhar diyee wooo ayee bathay nahaaa kar chal diyee :D Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
rukh 25 Posted December 21, 2003 SUPERB nadan really really really true wording INTIZAR shaid kabhi khtum nahi hota ...is sub kay bawjood hum jantay hain kai is cheez ka intizar la hasil hai ... phir bhi rehta hai .. insan sub ko samjha sakta hai ..lakin apni dil ko nahi samjha sakta .!! Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Kiran 2 Posted December 21, 2003 nadan.. such touching wording.... zindagi ne kab DAGA nahi di... kab ahsaas ki dhagiyan nahi urain... kab ankhon main sajay sapnay poray howe hain k??kab kisi ki khushiyan bin mangain mili hain... yahan sab aise hi hain koi kisi ka nahi... mohabbat bar-e-naam reh gai hai jo sirf lafzoon ko saja sakti hain ZINDAGI ko nahi.... Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Farah 0 Posted December 21, 2003 (edited) Sanum yeah tu apni khanee hay kabhi kabhi Majboor kertee hay tu likhnay beth jatee hon!!here i countinue!! Khatay hain Insaan ke Himat he us ke manzil hote hay .. Huslay mazboot hon tu Kuch b sahan ho sakta hay..lakin afsoos kay jo kudrat hamaray naseeb may nahee likhtee hum zid laga bethtay hain ek chotay say bachay ke tarha jo yeah nahee janta kay DENAY WALAY ke pohanch may sab kuch hay mager inkar ke wajha may hamaree he bhetaree hay!.. HUM tu bus un lakeron ka azafa apnay haton may kerwana chatay hay jo hamaray liya hay he nahee!,… her waqat US ka intazar rehta hay JO anay ka wada tu shyed ker jata ager koi rasta koi tadbeer hote, tu he loot pata!.. Suna tha Intazar Taveel ho jai tu Muhabbatin bay yakeen ho jate hain!.. suna tha soukh jatay hain wo jazbay jinhain izhar ka pane naseeb na ho.. toot jatay hain khawab .. mager ager asa hota hay tu yeah INTAZAR jo meray hisay aya hay!! Kiya yeah INTAZAR nahee.. kinu her waqat lagta hay kay LOG jhoot boltay hain.. sirf ek TUMHARA such reh jata hay!.. JO Mere zindagee ka sab say bara SACH hay! Lakin may ab tak is Sach ko kabool nahee ker pai.... OMEED b ab dertee hay kay kaheen apnay he mainee na kho day!! Bus ab ager kuch bacha pass meray tu wo sirf hay mera INTAZAR.. Lakin ab TUM b sochtay ho gay kay is Larki ko akal nahee aii g!!.. kabhi kabhi lagta hay ka TUM mujhay zaroor dekhtay ho gay!. hanstay ho gay! Or shoctay ho gay kay yeah buzdil se larki jo her baat kay liya mujh say pochay bager nahee ker sakte the ab kitnee baree ho gai hay.. apnay fasilay khud lanay lage hay Bus plz mere ek baat man lo May Tumharay sath buzdil theek hon.. Mager TUMHARAY bager akelee theek nahee ho!.. Kash kay may Tum ko wapis la saktee … Kash kay Tum sirf Mujh ko sun he saktay.. Kash yeah Zindagi DAGA dena bhool jatee.. ajj itnay dino bad asa lagta hay jasay TUM ko ilm tha kay yeah sath thora he hay! Ager asa that tu Mujhay samjha he detay…yun ek beynaam se soch may tu na chortay… AOW GREAT JI NADAN IS THIS YOUR OWN SOCH.BOHAT BOHAT ACHI HAY. I REALLY LIKED IT .I HV NO WORDS HOW TO APPRECIATE YOU. Edited December 21, 2003 by Farah Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
NaDaN 0 Posted December 22, 2003 Thnaks too Much Kiran Rukh n Farha!! yeah these r my own! bus jab dil bhar jai or kuch sunany sunanay ko na rahey tu phir Likhna he parta hay!! Kiran Zindagi jab daga dete hay tu Insan ka bas nahee hota.. wo tu lay janay walay ko lay jata hay! malom nahee Muat kinu nahee sochtee kay reh janay walay kiya kerain gay kher,.. its a long long though wid lots of qs having no Answer!! neways! share Yours If You guys have any!! Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Kiran 2 Posted December 22, 2003 u r welcome nadan... but i m not DISPAIR.... yaar woh shair hai... Yun to JUDA hone se koi mer nahi jata Lekin Khuda kisi ko kisi se JUDA na kare.. so i m HOPEFUL acha socho acha milega... :) Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Kiran 2 Posted December 24, 2003 Even if I sometimes say that I’ll never talk again Even if I sometimes am really angry at you Even if I sometimes make u feel I‘m not the same Even if I sometimes say that I don’t like you Always remember I’m yours. Even if I sometimes say that, on you I can’t rely Even if I sometimes so badly let you down Even if I sometimes am cross, and don’t reply Even if I sometimes make you frown Always remember I’m yours. Even if I sometimes don’t say words u want to hear Even if I sometimes just hurt you roughly Even if I sometimes make you feel that I don’t care Even if I sometimes utter things so harshly Always remember I’m yours. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
