ashfaq 0 Posted March 8, 2003 Assalamoalakum Arzoo aap ki nazem ( sehal nahin janah ) perhe . Bohut ache lage .Aap kitney aarse se shaire ker rahih hain ,aager app naie shaira hain tu pher tu aap bohut jeld aala muqamam inshallah jeld paien gee ,aaik baar pher aap ko mubarekbaad deta hoon itne zaber dest nazem per ok jee ALLAHA HAFIZ main aaik oor nazeem ki aap se jeld omeed rakhoon ga , take care and try try and try again , by :) Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
aarzoo 0 Posted March 11, 2003 Wasalamz ashfaq and hiez to everyone!!!! howz u allz???? Well thx for liking and appreciating my poetry. :) And yeah i am the new one in poetry !!!Hmmzz and i dont think of myself as a good one :;): Bas jo bhi ALLAh ka karam hey :) And meri yahan khuch our poems bhi haeen u better go through it okz Always Smilez ok gtg babayez ALLAHAHFIZ Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Leo81 0 Posted April 11, 2003 A very good poem Aarzoo!(Y) laikin kuchh sehal bhi to karein na,sab hi main keh rahi hain ke itna sehal nahin?:P Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
fati 0 Posted April 24, 2003 arzoo and army_qan u both have done a gr8 job. i mean the real poem as well as the parody is quite interesting. arzoo u keep on writing ur poems and army u keep on writing parodyyy. good job!!! :D: Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
aarzoo 0 Posted May 26, 2003 Salamz Allz!!!! Howz u Allz??? Thx for the appreciationz leo and fati :) ok gtg babayez ALLAHHAFIZ Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
umair.zm 0 Posted June 1, 2003 salam u all guyz.......wat a nice shiareee u have ur own yar amazing.......i m new in ur community hope to know u guyz.... yar merey pass apnie banayee huee shairee to nahien hai lakin zara aik shairee hath laghee hai woh app ke sath share kar raha... der it is dats funny like i m alwaz.... :) kaisay bataoon key tum merai kaun hoo, walls ki ice cream ho polka ki kon ho, kesey bataoon key tum poorani dheet ho aik bohat bari phateek ho , tum orangi tum korangi tum hi ho meri nagan chowrangi , liyari ki tum Football ho kimari ka tum bund ho manora ki tum thand ho, tum kharadar tum methadar tum hi meray liye goolimar ho tumhi meri dhoti aur shalwar ho , tum hi gutka tum hi mempoori tum hi mix patti ka pan ho kaisey bataon tumhay key tum meri koon ho lalookhait main rehti ho tum khud ko defence ka kheti ho tum lambi lambi chorti ho tum, hamesha sey ho khowar tum , ho sardi ka bhokhar tum shikarpur ka achar tum peshawar ki naswar tum aur PIA ka jahaz ho jo kabhi waqt par nahi milti wo parwaz ho jo hamesha short rehti hai wo piyas ho mahengai kay is dor mey sawa rupey ki niyaz ho , aur mera aghaz tum mera anjam tum mera public evening special mera parcham mera awaam tum , tum hi jurat ,tum hi ummat ,tum hi jasarat ,tum hi nowaey waqt , jang ho aman ho, the news ho ya dawn ho kesey batao key tum meri kon ho , key main rokta bus tum ko hoon, main tookta bus tum ko hooon, tum hi mera kal thin ,tum hi mera aaj ho , tum hi marshallah ,tum hi jamhoriat , tum hi governer raj ho aur meri TT tum ,mera Repeater tum ,mera Rokket Lunchar tum , tum hi meri soch ho meray paaon ki moch ho aur 9 rupees wali kouch ho aur vespa main tum aur rakshey main tum, taxi main tum ,mazda main tum,truck main tum troller main tum ,meri honda 50 tum, meri 70 tum, lahore ka tanga ho tum, sukhur ki suzuki ho tum aur kya bataoon meri jaan tum meray liya kya ho arey tum tu pora PAKISTAN ho karachi ki jaan ho aur W11 ki paihchan ho kaisay bataoon key tum meray liye koon ho hope u guyzzzzz surely love it........ ok c u soon bye tc ALLAH HAFIZ ALLLLLL Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
babarleo 0 Posted June 1, 2003 Loo bahi.. tum nay too puri kitab hee likh dee kuch chora hee nahi..... khair keep it upp.. and found here n there any where some classical poetry... and share it here.... See ya, Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Shabo 0 Posted June 3, 2003 Hi Umair.... thanks for sharing that with us Aur haan C & P zindabaad rite?? :;): Sx Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Kiran 2 Posted August 21, 2003 hi! zaber10 arzoo it's quite fantastic i really appreciate u for ur composition. bye kiran Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
