fati 0 Posted April 20, 2003 SOULS OF THE NIGHT Fading shabby shadows and dusky lazy light, I see the upcoming souls of nascent night. The whispers goodbye to him, The sinking sombre sun still gives a grin. The twilight twinkles, the shining stars glow, The gentle whistling wind blows fast and slow. The black spooky sky waves to the blue, The glossy green glitters beacause of dew. The firebug frisks with glee and gay, The solitary sunflower misses the day. The lady of the night smells sweet and pleasant, It tells a tale of beatific beauty and scent. The bevy of chirping birds, in the nests they lie, The wacky whistles of the gurad guy. Quite is the city and the vale, Skiffs silently skim on sea and ships sail. The clock chivvies and solemn silence strides, The mystic moonlight peeps through my window wide. It makes me go and slumber fast, The dooming day and ebbing evening have receded atlast!!! Written by Fati www.geocities.com/sweet_ffati/ffatisite.html Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
fati 0 Posted April 20, 2003 Write about the beauty of Nature! Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
fati 0 Posted April 26, 2003 heyy nobody likes Nature. strange quite strange. or u ppl r not interested in english poetry. hmm. ok . I WANT TO STAY I was standing in a lawn, So peaceful, so calm, The birds were chirping all around, Flowers were singing a cheerful song, Water was dancing in the stream, Composing a beautiful theme, The cool breeze that was passing by, Made the dry leaves to fly, I was walking beside the stream, And the life just seemed, So soothing, so superb,Suddenly I woke up, It was my dream,My eyes felt a beam, I was lying in my bed,And that moment I felt, That was the place I want to spend, Rest of my life till it ends, There I want to stay, And spend my life with gladness and gay !!!! Written by Fati Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
fati 0 Posted June 17, 2003 Spring Season What a beautiful season is spring, Wonderful blossoms does it bring. Roses, daffodils, daisies and sweet peas, Are gifts for butterflies and honey bees. With its beautiful coloured flowers, It brightens the season hours. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
arif 0 Posted July 10, 2003 Write about the beauty of Nature! Nice poems Fati... you ve got a good grip on English language...and a richness of ideas..emotions..expressions.. Present day life style has detached us from NATURE.. and dont even realize how much we have lost... just to tell u my personal example..... Yesterday Karachi had a rainfall after a looong time... I was heading home and my car broke in the middle of a pool of knee deep water. My immediate reaction was anger/fraustration... was too upset that I will have to spoil my dress and get soaked in rain......I pushed my car along roadside and started walking looking for hitch hike..... it was raining pretty heavy, I was completely damp... WET ;)........ just afew minutes like this ......and I felt a FREE feeling ...started enjoying...singing "rain drops keep falling on my head" (remember the song ???)........ It took 2 hours to reach home and I was thinking what a wonderful experience it had been... I was happy to have been forced into a situation where I was close to "mother nature" .. like a child... free of self developed iron composures... I wonder how much we are missing in life for having created some false walls around us... take care, keep smiling, and keep up your good work arif_karachi@hotmail.com Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Shabo 0 Posted July 10, 2003 Hi Arif Fati has most definitely provided us with some lovely poems to read.. cant wait for the next installment! I believe everything happens for a reason... ur setback was infact an eyeopener for u to appreciate the natural elements that we r gifted with!! Thanks for sharing ur "nice" experience :) C u around! Sx Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
umair.zm 0 Posted July 12, 2003 salam all of u guyzzz........ himmmmm fati jie lemee me know 1 is dat fati means "MOTEEE"...... ;) .......hey juss kidding.....wesey ur poem was so nice....n dan miss shabnam writes allwaz golden words of her here....... :) .....thanx for appreciating all of us.....every where....here in community..... :P ....... so today i would also likes to post a lil sweet poem of friendship...... so here it is......... You Know That's True. No Matter What Happens I Will Stand Right By You. In Times Of Grief I Will Give You Belief. I'll Be There For You Whenever You Are In Need. To Lend You A Hand To Do A Good Deed. So Just Call On Me When You Need Me, My Friend! I Will Always Be There For You Right To The End! Best Friends Forever! hopefully ma chotti poem app sab k pasand ayee ho ghee...... ;) ....... ok bye for now tc u alll alwaz........ ALLAH HAFIZ Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
fati 0 Posted July 21, 2003 thnx a lot arif, shabo and umair. i m soory. i never read ur comments. the first two r wriiten by me. ur words mean a lot to me. thnx again umair> its fati from FATIma. got it take care BOL Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
fati 0 Posted July 21, 2003 i'll soom come up with another Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
fati 0 Posted July 21, 2003 Teotihuacan Sunblind and sweating, we weaved down dusty lanes, past volcanoes spewing ashen memories that blanketed peasant farmers camping on the hillsides Fields woven with agave skipped by our rickety Mexican coach as sand danced on its windows, screening our world in bronze Anabella pulled her white hat over her eyes and closed them to a slit as the sun warmed my back; sueños con los angelitos, I breathed in broken Spanish David Anthony Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
umair.zm 0 Posted July 21, 2003 salam all of u guyz......... fati i mean fatima jie.......agar main galat nahien hoon to yeh app kie poetry english language main naihen hia shayad.......aur agar english main hie hia to phir i m sorry jie meri english shayad weak hia:'(........ wesey jo bhie app ne likha hia acha hie hogha ........ OK BYE FOR NOW TC ALL........ ALLAH HAFIZ Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
fati 0 Posted July 21, 2003 thnx umair but its not my poetry. the last poem is by david anthony. a bit of strange words in it r name of places. like the first one teotihuacan. its a city. got it. :D BOL Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
munnibhai 0 Posted July 22, 2003 Once i had a friend from karachi , once she wrote me a nazam but she also took a promise that i will not pass it onwards , but it is really a nice poem. About Allah. She told me that her parents r about to marry her against her will. after that she did not contact with me :( Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Shabo 0 Posted July 23, 2003 Nice poem Fati thanks for sharing it! Heyyy munnibhai if u feel u want us to read that poem then u should post it on the boards... otherwise u should keep to ur promise!! Sx Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
munnibhai 0 Posted July 23, 2003 I will keep my promise at any cost! Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
babarleo 0 Posted July 23, 2003 Fati.. I am realy Im-Press,,,. Nice Thaughts Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Uncleg 2 Posted June 27, 2010 thnx a lot babar. THE SECRET: To defeat this old age I have consulted the sayings of every sage I have researched lotions and potions and all the remedies to soothe emotions I have visited Apothecaries and Pharmacies I knelt before those dealing in intimacies I look up to the blue as well as the grey sky I scan the galaxies farther off and very high In the Jungles of Kashmir I found old men Who had secrets stashed in their lowly den I know many have gone on this track before did they leave any hint of having reached the shore Dear Billy and all my slowly fading friends I can't really tell how this story ends But, from time to time, I shall open the shell And give you a glimpse inside the mother of pearl Bear with me, for we are the sons of that Murree Pine Whose memory intoxicates as a vintage heady wine Share this post Link to post Share on other sites