Shabo 0 Posted August 18, 2003 Muhabbaton Kay Diay Rah Main Jalata hai Tumhara Qarb Meray Saray Ghum Mitata Hai Yeh Aik Hum Hain Jo Teray Liay taraptay hain Yahan Kisi Kay Liay Kon Ghum uthata Hai ? Meray Dukhoon Kay samandar saY us ka Kia Rishta ? Woh Sirf Apni Hi Rodawad-e-Ghum Sunata hai Wagarna Shiar-e-Sukhan say Hamara Kia Nata ! Hamaray Zehan Main Aik Naam Jagmagata Hai Agar Woh Rotay Tu Karta Hon Minatin Uss Ki Agar Main Rooth Jaon Tu Woh Kab Mujhe manata Hai ! Meri Wafa Pay Abhi Tak Yaqeen Nahi hai Us Ko Mera Rafeeq Mujhe Ab Bhi Azmata hai Yeh Kis ka naam darakta hai Meri Sansoon Main Yeh Kon Hai Jo nay RastaY Dekhata hai ? Ussi Ki Rahatin Mujh Ko Aziz Hain Woh Aik Shaks Jo Har Pal Mujhe Rulata Hai Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
NaDaN 0 Posted August 18, 2003 Nice Poetry!! "Jo na mil sakay wohe bewafa... Yeah baree ajeeb se baat hay Jo chala gaya mujhay choor ker wohee ajj tak meray sath hay keray payar lab pay gila na ho yeah kisi kisi ka naseeb hay yeah karam hay us ka jaffa nahee wo jo door reh ker kareeb hay wohe annkh hay meray ro baroo usee hath may mera hath hay jo chala gaya mujhay choor ker wohe ajj tak meray sath hay mera naam tak jo na lay saka jo mujhay karar na day saka jisay ikhtiyar tu tha mager mujhay apna payar na day saka wo he shks mere talas hay wo he dard mere hayyat hay jo chala gaya mujhay choor ker wo he ajj tak meray sath hay jo kisi nazar say ada hoi wohe roshni hay guman may wo na a sakain rahon muntazir yeah khalish kahan phir sal may mere justajo ko khaber na the na wo din hain na wo raat he jo chala gaya mujhay choor ker wo he ajj tak meray sath hay" a very beautiful gazal... just wanted to share..!! Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
umair.zm 0 Posted August 18, 2003 Pagal Larki "aik pagal larki khowabon ki duniya main rehney se darti thi lekin najaney kab woh khowabon ki aaghosh main ja sowi aur a'nt ginat khowab daikh leye phir jab os ko hosh ne jagaya aur yaad dilaya k ay pagal larki ye khowab tera muqaddar nahi hain to in per tera haq bhi nahi woh khamosh hogaye aur her raat chand taron se baatain karney lage aik omeed k sath k koi aik sitara os k khowabon ko haqiqat main badal de aur ab chand ko girhan ne khaid ker lia hai aur sitarey dar ker chup rahey hain woh pagal larki hosh-e-natawa'n se bey khaber apney omeed k sitaron ko khotey howey daikh rahi hai suno! aik talkh haqiqat woh larki pagal nahi woh to aazma'ishon aur ehsanat k ambar main dabi hai jo kuch keh nahi sakti, siwaye mehsos kerney k suno woh aaj ki nahi mustaqbil ki pagal larki hai k jab woh mehsos bhi na ker sakey ge .... ok byeeeeeeee Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
adilkhan 0 Posted August 18, 2003 Muhabbaton Kay Diay Rah Main Jalata hai Tumhara Qarb Meray Saray Ghum Mitata Hai salam all :hi: wahhhhh ji wahhhh sab nay buhot khub leikha , aur umair hahhahaha ok ji , men kesi no dasi na ;) aur shaboooo ji wahhhhhh buhot he khub :)Ab yeh mahsoos howa hai mujhay, ik umar kay baad Ajnabi jo nazar aya tha wohi apna hai Na koi khoon ka rishta.. na koi umar ke qaid Who jo bayloos hai pani mein kanwal ke sourat Jo mohabbat kay siwa kuch bhi nahi dai sakta Who jo mohabbat kay siwa kuch bhi nahi lay sakta.. udas Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
asimahmed 0 Posted August 19, 2003 Hi Everyone, Bohat khoob, nice selection. koi waada nahin hum main na aapas main buhut batain na milnay main buhut shoukhi na aakhir shab manajati magar aik unkahi si hai ju hum dono samajhtay hain ajab aik sarkhushee si hai ju hum dono samajhtay hain yah saray dilruba manzer tilismi chandani raatain sunahray dhoop kay mausum yeh halkay sukh ki barsaatain sabhi ik zid main rahtay hain mujhay paham yeh kahtay hain MUHABBAT YUN NAHIN AACHI MUHABBAT YUN NAHIN AACHI Take Care :hi: Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
asimahmed 0 Posted August 19, 2003 Once again guys, I hope you like this. Mujhe bass itna kehna hai, kabhi main yaad aoon to Kabhi tanhayee ki raatain, tumhai zyada satayen to Kabhi titli na bole to, aur jugnu lot jaye to Kabhi jab dil bhi bhar jaye, Koi jab sun na paye to Kabhi sab dost saathi bhi jo tum se rooth jayen to Kabhi jab khud se lad ker thakan se chur ho jao to Kabhi chahte huwe bhi khud akele roo na pao to Apni aankhon ko band kerna mujhe awaz de dena Phir mere tasawwur se jo chahai baatain keh dena Mere kandhe per sir rakh ker tum jitna chahe ro lena Jab main khud lout jaon to apni dunya chale jana Magar bass itna kehna hai Ke jab bhi dukh ya khusyoon main Humain dil se pukaro ge Humain tum saath pao ge Bye Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
umair.zm 0 Posted August 19, 2003 mairay malik "mairay malik mein tujh say kai mangoon aacha!bus itna ker day her zalim ka dil naram ker day her gharib ka chola garam ker day her simat pyar aur aman ka doar ker day ghumoon ko khushioon say door ker day tootay howay diloon ko phir ssay joor day in dukhoon aur veeranion ka sakoot toor day her banjer zameen ko shadab ker day her kadam tairay gher ko utthay kuch aisay asbab ker day her utthay hat ko khushion say bher day aur phir bayshuk dunia bher k dukh aur ghum mairay is dil mein bher day haan mairay malik bus itna ker day ok bye al of u guyzzzzz tc all ALLAH HAFIZ Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Shabo 0 Posted August 19, 2003 kab tak dil ki Khair manaiyn, kab tak raah dikhao gey kab tak chaiyn ki mohalat do gey, kab tak yaad na aao gey beeta deed umeed ka mausam, Khaak urati hai aankhon mey kab bhejo gey dard ka baadal, kab barkhaa barasaao gey ahad-e-wafaa aur tark-e-muhabbat jo chaho so aap karo apne bas ki baat hww kya hai, hum sey kya manwaao gey kis ney vasl ka suraj dekha, kis par hijr ki raat dhali geisuoon waley koun they, kya they, un ko kya jatalaao gey 'Faiz' dilon k bhaag mein hai ghar basana bhi lut jana bhi tum us husn k lutf-o-karam par kitney din itaraao gey Sx Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
cooooolll 0 Posted August 19, 2003 salam allll :hi: teri umeed , tera intezaar jab say hai na shab ko din say shikayat na din ko shab say hai kisi ka dard ho kertay hain teray naam raqam gila hai jo bhi kisi say teray sabab say hai hua hai jab say dil-e-na saboor bay qaboo kalam tujh say nazar ko barray adab say hai agar sharar hai to bharrkay, jo phool hai to khilay tarah tarah ki talab, teray rang-e-lab say hai kahan gaye shab-e-farqat kayu jaagnay walay sitara-e-sehri hum kalam kab say hai FAIZ Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
umair.zm 0 Posted August 19, 2003 salam all of u guyzzzzzzz....... nice shiaree asim bhaie..........shabnam jie app ko kya ho gaya hia poetry likh ke app jaan chura rahee ho kya na kuch kehtee ho kisee k barey kyoon????????? nice effort cooooollllllll.......:)........... ab main zara arz karta hoon........ barsaat "BARSAAT KI YEH GHARI ACHI LAGI AB K SAWAN BARI ACHI LAGI ZINDAGI KI ANDHERI RAAT MAI TERI YAAD KI PULJHARI ACHI LAGI YUN TO LOG MEHFIL MAI AUR BHI THAY BAYGANO MAI WOH ALAG KHARI ACHI LAGI WOH DIL MAI A BAITHI HAI TASAWUR BAN K DIL KO YEH TASAWUR KI GHARI ACHI LAGI ANKH PHIR BUHUT BARSI SAWAN K SAATH AB K SAWAN KI JHARI ACHI LAGI ok bye all of u guyzzzzzz tc all ALLAH HAFIZ Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
asimahmed 0 Posted August 20, 2003 Hi Everyone, Bay baat bigardtay rehtay ho Bay chain hamaisha rehtay ho Yeh sub nishani ishq ki hai Kiya ishq kisi say kertay ho? Ratoon ko jagtay rehtay ho Aur taray bhi tum gintay ho Yeh sub nishani ishq ki hai Kiya ishq kisi say kertay ho? Zikr jo maira chirdta hai Cehray ka rang badalta hai Bay chain say tum ho jatay ho Kiya ishq mujh hi say kertay ho? Allah Hafiz Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
umair.zm 0 Posted August 20, 2003 salam all of u guyz........ hey asim nice poetry gr8......main arz karta hoon....... hooton pe hanse dekh le "Hoton pe hasee dekh li ,dil ke ander nahi dekha..... Yaaron ne mere gam ka samander nahi dekha ...... Kitni haseen hai duniya ye dekha hai aapne....... Mar mar ke jeene walon ka manzar nahi dekha..... Sheshe ka makan tumne bana to liya ae dost..... Lekin waqt ke haath ka pathar nahi dekha........ Rishtoon ke tutne ka dard aap kya samjhein ...... Vo lamha kabhi aap ne jee kar nahi dekha...... Bhatke roshni ki talaash mein na jaane kahan kahan ok bye all of u guyzzzzz..... ALLAH HAFIZ Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
adilkhan 0 Posted August 20, 2003 salammm all :hi: WOH APNE ISHQ MAIN KAISA KAMAL RAKHTA HAI, KE BE RUKHI MAIN BHI MERA KHYAL RAKHTA HAI JO AAJ MERA NAHI HAI WOH KAL MERA HOGA! KE HER ZAMANA UROOJ-E-ZAWAL RAKHTA HAI AJAB NAHI WOH JAHAN BHAR KO BE WAFA SAMJHE NAZAR MAIN MERI WAFA KI MISAL RAKHTA HAI udas Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
umair.zm 0 Posted August 20, 2003 salam all of u guyss...... nice poetry adil............ab main arz karta hoon......... aankhain bheeg jatee hai "Samandar main utarta hoon to Aankhian bheegh jatee hai Teri Aankhon ko parhta hoon to Aankhain bheegh jatee hai Tumhara naam likhne kee ijazat chinn gayee jub se Koi bhee lafz likhta hoon to Aankhain bheeg jatee hai Teri yaado kee khushboo Khirkio main raqs kartee hai Teray gham main sulagta hoon to Aankhain bheeg jatee hai Main huns ke Jhaill leta hoon JUDAI kee sabhee rasmain Jub uss ke galay lagta hoon to Aankhain bheeg jatee hai Na jane ho gaya hoo iss qadar hasas main kub se Kissi se baat karta hoon to Aankhian bheeg jatee hai Main sara din bohat masroof rehta hoon magar joo hee qadam chokhat par rakhta hoon to Aankhian bheeg jatee hai Her ik muflis ke mathay par allllam kee dastanay hai Koi chehra bhee parta hoon to Aankhain bheeg jatee hai ok bye all of guyzzz....... tc ALL ALAH HAFIZ Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Kiran 2 Posted August 20, 2003 Assalam O Alikum! nice poetry adil i have some couplets which r similar to urs. ZARASI DER KO DIL MAIN MALAL RAKHTA HAI WOH KHAFA HOKER BHI MERA KHAYAL RAKHTA HAI KABHI KABHI TO WOH ITNA KHAYAL RAKHTA HAI ZARA ZARASI TAMMANA SUMNBHAL RAKHTA HAI YEHI EK BAAT HAI US MAIN KE RANJISHOON MAIN BHI SUKHOO KA SUKH TO DUKHOO KA MALA RAKHTA HAI have fun bye kiran Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
asimahmed 0 Posted August 21, 2003 Assalam O' Alaikum, Nice peotry Umair, Adil and Kiran. Mere Ehsaas mein Shamil tum ho Tum Nahin ho Mere paas muger Aik ehsaas sa hai ke tum ho, Hawa, Badal, Sitarey, Manzar Sab batatey hain ke tum ho, Mein Usey kaisey bataon dost Mere ehsaas mein shamil tum ho, Mera her lafz tum hi ko bayan kerta hai Meri khamoshi ka bhi naghma tum ho, Aisa ehsaas sa hota hai mujh ko akser jesey mein, mein nahin hoon bas tum ho!! Take Care Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Shabo 0 Posted August 21, 2003 Salaaaaaaaaam friends :hi: Wah wah such lovely poetry by ALL of u... bohot khoob its simply fantastic, parh k bohot maza aiya!! aaj k daur mey ai dost yeh manzar kyun hai zakham har sar pe har ik haath mey patthar kyun hai jab haqeeqat hai ke har zarre mey tuu rahta hai phir zameen par kahin masjid kahin mandir kyun hai apna anjaam to maloom hai sab ko phir bhi apni nazaron mey har insaan sikandar kyun hai zindagi jeeney k qaabil he nahi ab "Faakir" warna har aankh mey ashkon ka samandar kyun hai Sx Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
umair.zm 0 Posted August 21, 2003 salam all of u guyzzzz........ yar u ll have post gr8 poetries..........ab main zara arz karta hoon......;) ISHQ SE DO CHAR HAI "ISHQ SE DO CHAR HAI ZINDGI BEQAAR HAI JIS TARAF BHI DEKHYE DARD HAI AAZAAR HAI AADMI SE AADMI AAJ KAL BEZAAR HAI DEKH KAR YEH SAKHTIYAN CHORI KA IKRAAR HAI REHNOMAI KIYA KARE KHUD GHARZ SARDAAR HAI HAAN NAHI TERI AGAR MERA BHI INKAAR HAI DEKH KAR RAKHNA QADAM SAKHT YEH SANSAAR HAI APNI APNI ZAAT MEIN HAR KOI MAKAAR HAI MAAN LE APNI SHIKAST JHOTON KA DARBAAR HAI KON UMAIR SE KAHE MONTAZIR DIL DAAR HAI ok byeeee tc allll ALLAH HAFIZ Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
adilkhan 0 Posted August 21, 2003 salammmmm all :hi: wahhhh ji buhot khub kiran , umair and asim wawawwaw , aur shabo ji wawwawa buhot he khub "Mujhay chor kay akayla aik din mere sheher say chalay jaao gey... Ban kay meri aarzooun ka fasana bohat yaad aao gey... Har qatra jo tapkay ga shabnum ka serd raat main... Meri aankhon main wafaaon ka thirakta jaam paao gey... Awargee nay dil main gher bana liya hai shayad... Weeran hain nigahain tum hi to khushi laao gey... Dil main lagay hain deyray udasiyoun kay kab say... Mere yaar tum palat kay zindagee main badal jaao gey... Deykho na tum bhi aaker kes haal main hain shaiki... Mere dil main tum hi tum ho dil say na nikal paao gey.. udas Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
asimahmed 0 Posted August 22, 2003 Assalam O' Alaikum, nice poetry by everyone... Bardh gayee baat tu kaisey kinara karloo, Kis tarhan ishq ki toheen gawara karloo, Un se ab tark-e-taluq nahi mere bas main, Haan yeh bas main kay main khud se kinara karloo, Aaqal khaty hai na rakh rah e muhabbat main qadam, Dil ki marzi hai har illzam gawara karloo, Dil betab keh kuch aadab bhi hain, Kaisey un ko bhari mehfil main eshara karloo, Hai yehi meri eybadat hai yehi meri namaz, Ho sakay jasay bhi dedar tumhara karloo, Ab koi aur tamana nahi dil main kahin, Ek tamana hai kay ji bhar key nazara karloo... Take Care :hi: Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
umair.zm 0 Posted August 22, 2003 salam all of u guyz........ nice poetries adil n asim gr8:).......ab main arz karta hoon...... aap key bina ""zindagi zindagii hi nahi aap k bina kuch meri heyseyaat hi nahi aap k bina kuch loag tanha chor k chalay gay hum ko yeh zindagii udass hai aap k bina kuch toh saath deyna tha aap ko mera aap bhi yaaon chalay gay aaoron ki tarhan zindagi mai teray siwa chaha nahi kisi ko geeeeee na sakey gey hum aap k bina zindagi zindagii nahi ""AAP K BINA ok bye alll of u guyz...... ALLAH HAFIZ Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
umair.zm 0 Posted August 22, 2003 ''WOH KUCH SUNTI TO MEIN KEHTA MUJHE KUCH AUR KEHNA THA'' "woh pal bhar ke liye jo ruk jati mujhe kuch aur kehna tha galat fahmi ne baato ko barha dala yuhi warna .......... kaha kuch tha,woh kuch samjhi mujhe kuch aur kehna tha kamai zindagi bhar ki usi k naam kyun kardi ........... mujhe kuch aur karna tha ,mujhe kuch aur kehna tha kaha us ne , na suni meri bas us ne kahi apni use maaloom tha itna mujhe kuch aur kehna tha aur dil mein tha pyar , nas nas mein qurbat thi aapasme use kuch aur sunna tha mujhe kuch aur kehna tha kabhi tum mujh se jo poocho to ye tum ko bataTA hoon mujhe tum se mohabbat hai mujhe bas itna kehna tha ok byee guyzzzzz......... tc ALLAH HAFIZ Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Kiran 2 Posted August 22, 2003 umair abhi poet suun lain to tum zaya na hojao un ke haathon se :P it's WOH KUCH SUNTA TO MAIN KEHTA MUJHE KUCH AUR KEHNA THA bye kiran Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
adilkhan 0 Posted August 23, 2003 KABHEEE NAA MILNAA yeh dunya itnee baree to nahee key aek baar key bichrey phir na mil sakein bichro to is tarah key phir milney ka imkan na rahey mujh sey wada karo tum bicherney key baad mey tum ko nazer aaoon ager asey zahir karna jaesey daekha hee nahee mujhey daekh ker tumhara dil dharka hee nahee koee baat na karna labon sey aour na hee ankhon sey qurbat ka koee gul na khilana na milna mujhey phir kabhee key mey mil ker phir bicherney ka azab na seh sakoon gee............ " sorah ke sath doob geya mera dil bhi ajj " "atna udas shaam ka manzar kabhi na thaa " udas:crying: Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
adilkhan 0 Posted August 23, 2003 [ "soraj ke sath doob geya mera dil bhi ajj " atna udas sham ka manzar kabhi na thaa Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
